HP: Raised a Little Bat

Super super super super invincible is beautiful, the heroine is very powerful, and Sif doesn't have to suffer. The bully deserves it, and it was so satisfying when the heroine attacked Dumbledore. I hate bullies very much, and I also hate Dumbledore who stands by and does nothing (because he also hurts Sev and other people being bullied invisibly). I think Harry's entry into Slytherin is pretty good, better than the original novel (at least he has friends who stand firmly by his side when facing rumors). Although he is getting closer with purpose, it is also helpful to Harry (the so-called gentleman criticizes his deeds but not his heart). Of course, this is just my personal opinion. One star is given less because the author's description of Sif and Al's relationship is a bit sketchy. They directly confess, propose, and have three children. Compared with other detailed descriptions in the article, the relationship here is not very good. Of course, I do not deny that this book is really well written. Also, is GGDD be? I wrote about the two of them being together, but I didn't write about it later. It was still just a little bit involved. It's very well written. I really enjoyed watching it. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Finished reading the 33 chapters updated so far. The sense of oppression brought about by the heroine's identity is super exciting to watch, especially when she is a colonel and is fighting against James and the others. It's not enough. It's only chapter 33 now. It's because I invested money to renovate the entire school and that broken train. There are too many descriptions of the environment.

I agree that the speed at which they got together and then got married and had kids was a little too fast [laughs] but overall it was great to watch! I just feel a bit awkward as to whether the heroine knows the whole plot of Harry Potter. I feel like the heroine does know. After all, she could make up a song the first time she met the teacher! But now she is looking for the crown conscientiously. She doesn't know that the crown is in the Room of Requirement [what]

There are private facilities, and everything else is very good Is it too fast in the back? It jumps to more than ten years, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is not clearly explained. I don't know why their friendship suddenly deteriorated and they got together. The latter two suddenly came together and had three children. Only one of them took the heroine's surname. Isn't Grindelwald more famous than Prince? Or is it that the one named Grindelwald has the right to inherit Grindelwald, and the other two have no inheritance rights, so they can't be named Grindelwald because they are afraid of grabbing the inheritance?

The review has been followed up. It's good. I hope the author won't stop updating.

Very very beautiful! !

The surname Grindelwald is so cool! Daily life is also warm and interesting

It's so cool, Slytherin's Harry, Grindelwald's heroine [Sparrow Food Masterpiece] It's just that the emotional line is relatively weak, and the career line is the main one.

Well written! Like

Good book recommendations must be full of stars

Awesome ~ I finished reading it in one go

Severus is really happy in this book If you are happy I will really cry [cry]

Beautiful, very beautiful!

From what I've seen so far, it's super cool. I'll definitely do it if I don't like it. I've finished watching it, it's pretty good, it has a happy ending, the teacher has a wife and children, and the heroine has a career.