Dragon Raja: Reborn, I Begin as the New Black King

I would like to encourage the author in the rating. I hope the author can keep writing. There are really very few of this type in Tomato [Send Hearts] According to the author, there are a few multi-female protagonists among the Dragon Clan fanfics, including Xiami, Nuonuo, Eli Yi, Ling, and Su Xiaoqiang. I'm not sure about the rest yet. The writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. If the author can think more about it, it should be able to attract more readers. After all, people who have read Dragon Clan have very picky tastes. Regarding some doubts when reading the book. On a free day, Lu Mingfei had a flashback and heard Eli Yi sobbing when Xiami fell into his arms. This is not right. In Long San, when Lu Mingfei arrived at Hongjing, Eli Yi had already died, so where did the sobbing come from.

It's pretty good. The characters are well-detailed, the background settings fit the original work, and the descriptions are delicate and appropriate. No traces of AI have been found for the time being (key points). It is also very stable with two updates a day. The disadvantage is that Lu Mingfei's performance is sometimes too separated, like two people. A low jazz song was playing on the car stereo, and the sound of the saxophone flowed in the narrow space, like some ancient comfort. Lu Mingfei leaned against the window, with the Seven Deadly Sins on his knees, and tapped the box with his fingers. Boom, boom, boom. Like a heartbeat. His eyes fell on the rapidly receding Tokyo night view outside the window. The light and shadow of the neon lights passed over his face one by one, flickering on and off. His expression was calm, even a little lazy, like a cat that had just woken up. But Yuan Zhisheng noticed a detail in the rearview mirror. Lu Mingfei tapped his fingers on the box, and the rhythm never changed. It's not random tapping, but a constant, almost mechanical rhythm that's so precise. Like some kind of timer, like some kind of... Ancient rhythm. The word count of ai water, all kinds of weird and deliberate descriptions are out

Is it because the author has not been homeless recently because there are too few emotional dramas? The author can try adding some emotional dramas. After reading the last chapter, you can obviously know who the harem heroine is, but she doesn't feel that she has any sense of existence. There is also our potato chip girl 💕 💕 💕

The blood of any king shall end with the sword. The king descended from the sky, ferocious and angry. 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏

It's obviously a very good book, but no one has read it.

The writing is very smooth, the author is not Yun, and the setting is very consistent with the original work.

The confirmed heroines are Eri, Natsumi, Nono, Zero, Su Xiaoqiang, Mai Shutoku, Su Enxi, Kristina, Kogure Sakurai, and Makoto Aso. If there are any omissions, they will be filled in later. Christina, Sakurai Kogure, Aso are really supporting actresses

After reading this book, do you feel refreshed and free from the fate of being knifed? Haha, does anyone remember the three major places for dates? It's the Three Gorges Reservoir, Beijing Subway, Tokyo Red Well 😄 If the author dares to appear in the above scene, I will send you souvenirs [smiles]

Dragon Clan's cool writing is not bad, Lu Xia is a rare

The early stage was very exciting, the story line is clear, there are no poisonous points, the protagonist is basically invincible, he is so handsome 😘