Dragon Clan************

I would like to encourage the author in the rating. I hope the author can keep writing. There are really very few of this type in Tomato [Send Hearts] According to the author, there are a few multi-female protagonists among the Dragon Clan fanfics, including Xiami, Nuonuo, Eli Yi, Ling, and Su Xiaoqiang. I'm not sure about the rest yet. The writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. If the author can think more about it, it should be able to attract more readers. After all, people who have read Dragon Clan have very picky tastes. Regarding some doubts when reading the book. On a free day, Lu Mingfei had a flashback and heard Eli Yi sobbing when Xiami fell into his arms. This is not right. In Long San, when Lu Mingfei arrived at Hongjing, Eli Yi had already died, so where did the sobbing come from.

It's pretty good. The characters are well-detailed, the background settings fit the original work, and the descriptions are delicate and appropriate. No traces of AI have been found for the time being (key points). It is also very stable with two updates a day. The disadvantage is that Lu Mingfei's performance is sometimes too separated, like two people. A low jazz song was playing on the car stereo, and the sound of the saxophone flowed in the narrow space, like some ancient comfort. Lu Mingfei leaned against the window, with the Seven Deadly Sins on his knees, and tapped the box with his fingers. Boom, boom, boom. Like a heartbeat. His eyes fell on the rapidly receding Tokyo night view outside the window. The light and shadow of the neon lights passed over his face one by one, flickering on and off. His expression was calm, even a little lazy, like a cat that had just woken up. But Yuan Zhisheng noticed a detail in the rearview mirror. Lu Mingfei tapped his fingers on the box, and the rhythm never changed. It's not random tapping, but a constant, almost mechanical rhythm that's so precise. Like some kind of timer, like some kind of... Ancient rhythm. The word count of ai water, all kinds of weird and deliberate descriptions are out

Is it because the author has not been homeless recently because there are too few emotional dramas? The author can try adding some emotional dramas. After reading the last chapter, you can obviously know who the harem heroine is, but she doesn't feel that she has any sense of existence. There is also our potato chip girl [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts]

The blood of any king shall end with the sword. The king descended from the sky, ferocious and angry. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's obviously a very good book, but no one has read it.

The writing is very smooth, the author is not Yun, and the setting is very consistent with the original work.

The confirmed heroines are Eri, Natsumi, Nono, Zero, Su Xiaoqiang, Mai Shutoku, Su Enxi, Kristina, Kogure Sakurai, and Makoto Aso. If there are any omissions, they will be filled in later. Christina, Sakurai Kogure, Aso are really supporting actresses

After reading this book, do you feel refreshed and free from the fate of being knifed? Haha, does anyone remember the three major places for dates? It's the Three Gorges Reservoir, Beijing Subway, Tokyo Red Well [laughs] If the author dares to appear in the above scene, I will send you souvenirs [smiles]

The early stage was very exciting, the story line is clear, there are no poisonous points, the protagonist is basically invincible, he is so handsome [blowing kiss]

Dragon Clan's cool writing is not bad, Lu Xia is a rare

I feel like I am a new author, so give me five stars for encouragement.

Come on, author, I really like Lu Hui's pair of CPs, and I feel that the stories written by the author are very good among Dragon Clan fandoms.

[Adoration][Admiration][Admiration] Love it, love it, it's so beautiful

It's good to watch. Fans should have multiple female protagonists. There's no need to make up the original CP. Why should I read a single female protagonist when I've already read the fanfic?

One of the few that I can finish watching

It's pretty good, not bad. I'd like to order all of it at a certain point.

[Thinking] One of the few dragon fandoms written starting from Kassel

I enjoyed reading it. I don't have much problem with the character description. It's just that it's still early days and I don't have enough. I hope there will be more updates.

No, why do I see so many 5-star reviews and almost no low ratings? Why is the book's rating so low? 200,000 Words is simply not enough to read. Author, please put in more effort. If it doesn't work, I'll do more for love and give you some gifts occasionally. I beg you, author, please don't make it worse.

Personally, I feel pretty good. It looks pretty. Come on, author! The appeal must be successful!

Very beautiful, I hope it will always be updated😋😋😋

It's quite good to watch, the plot is not broken, and the connection is perfect. I haven't seen any weak plot so far. Keep up the good work and don't stop updating.

When does the little goddess appear?

Very good-looking, Mingfei will never fade

Looking forward to more, can't get enough! [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. I hope I don't stop updating.

Ok i like it

Very nice, come on author [like]

Good looking, good luck to the author

It looks great, keep up the good work!