Ultra, the Savior Is Elbowing Despair

The idea is standard and has a spiritual core. Although the writing style is a bit green, the logic is smooth and the thoughts are upright and noble. Emotional scenes can be more polished, (such as family, friendship and love) caring and caring of family, the bond of friendship and mutual help, and the firm persistence of love. By the way, the pace of the plot in the early stage was a bit rushed (too little writing was not enough to watch). Now with the addition of original plot in the mid-term, it is very comfortable [laughing] Writing a book is not that complicated or difficult. Make sure you have a good outline and constantly fill in the plot, and set up exciting points to make the plot have ups and downs and capture the audience's emotions. It's guaranteed to be good-looking!

My own books are so good to read [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Ultra, the savior is elbowing despair This work is my first work, and the writing is very immature, but I also found my own shortcomings. As a work that pays great attention to the first time, I definitely hope that this work can be completed well, but the situation in front of me is that I did not write the main line well, resulting in the plot being a bit inexplicable. So much so that now I have no motivation to open a new chapter. But I'm grateful to the people who saw this. I will learn my lesson during the summer vacation and write new stories. I wish you a happy life and thank you for watching. (The ending of the story should be arranged after Yu Xuan solves this Atalga. Atalga's Time and Space City materialized the despair of this universe. After Ultraman eliminated those materialized despairs, he also gave this desperate universe real redemption and real hope. As for whether this universe will perish in the future, the author does not know. )

The content of this book is related to the bonds of Ultraman, sunshine and justice. The whole text is roughly "What kind of bond~" and "I won't lose." Highly recommended. [Laugh][like]

Come on, keep elbowing [face covering] After reading the back part, the author slowly found his own feeling after writing. It can be seen that Lao Zuo really wanted to write it well, but the data of this book does not seem to be very good. The author may need to slowly settle down. Come on @yyyuxuan. [Praise]

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