[Main attack + unit article + double cleansing +······
In this world, some people's love is perfect, and some people's love is in pieces.
They are selfish, they are indifferent, they are timid, they are blinded by desire...
When they finally woke up, it seemed like it was too late...
Such incidents occur frequently, causing the resentment value to explode. In order to eliminate the resentment value, System 003 is sent to the small world to find the source of the resentment and eliminate it.
But until the end of 003's rescue, he realized that he was in a pure love group and there were no scumbags at all...
The first world: "Big Trees and Birds" - Completed
Shen Wan never thought that Tang Shu would leave this world.
The Second World: "The Love of Little Gangsters" - Completed
Why, is the love of a young gangster not love?
The third world: "Interstellar Glory"
My Omega is the moon hanging high in the sky, my wishful thinking.
The fourth world: "There is no rainy day for puppies"
Puppies don't cry, they just bark.
Reader comments
The rare fine grain of chaff allowed me to overcome my doubts... The author's writing style is very clean, I feel comfortable reading it, and it is not verbose at all. Out of curiosity, I read some of the author's other books and I still like this one better.
When Xiao Wan first came here, it was already clear that he wanted to write county literature (probably, that's how I personally feel about it). There was a narrow bed in a dark room, and two people squeezed together with their backs touching, could feel the temperature and hear the rapid breathing. After suddenly starting to speak in a hoarse voice, there was no future (previous life) anymore, and it felt like a dream. I like this so much...
Very quiet, stubborn but fresh vitality.
Alas, Xiaoshu, the road from the county seat to Xiaowang University should be quite long, but on the way to meet my sweetheart, I probably won't be thinking about tiredness🥺
Looking at the memories, what I want to say is "It's enough for fate to stop here", but fate will only roll forward like a wheel... If you ignore the break in the past life, it is actually a very sweet cookie... Alas, unfortunately it is not. . . But I also quite like the reunion in this life (after all, there are not many knives)... There is a very good emotion in the writing...
For Xiaowan and Xiaoshu who came back, they should both have dull pain in the heart, shortness of breath, and a sour feeling like micro-current stabbing the heart. It was secret love, restraint, mutual liking, reunion after a long separation, and forced separation due to external reasons.
It's the hand that wanted to touch but then took it back, it's the friend that has disappeared, but no matter how we go around, it's still you, the tired bird will only return to the forest.
In fact, I haven't tied it yet, but I really like the first unit... It's like being loved wholeheartedly and wholeheartedly. The two parties fall in love naturally. It's so luxurious, so clean, so incredible.
In the previous life, the two of them had been very restrained in their love, and it was quite delicious to have this kind of restraint. It won't stop you from walking on the path you should take, but it will give you a kind of secret pain. In the end, nothing will be known to anyone... I don't know what it was like for Xiaoshu in his previous life to watch his lover push him away (two kinds of pushing, one emotional, and one that involves spoilers, I won't tell you)... Probably only a corner of the huge sorrow is broken from the eyes... That kind of sadness is rushing through ordinary words.
Oh, I feel really sorry for this little fool... I actually feel like he is like ashes after a fire (?)
To the little tree, he is as erratic as ashes. Nothing he owns can keep him. The more tightly he holds on to it, the faster it will dissipate. But when I saw him, I thought of fire, of burning, of the moment when the flames were blazing. Thinking of the purest and strongest sincerity in life.
Love? The feeling of love hurts like this. Filling it with all your feelings, thoughts and desires will only result in a few seconds of pulsating flames.
It seems like I'm going too far (sorry. Jpg.), Okay then I'm going to make more nonsense.
After thinking about it for a while, Xiao Shu, who had drunk a group of people after a drinking party, calmly greeted the others, and calmly led Xiao Wan, who was unconscious and wouldn't let go after two drinks, back home.
Well, I'm very happy. Little couple 99, I'm glad to see your story.
To add a little more... I looked at other worlds a few times and it seems that I have stepped on my thunder. I will try the third unit again... What follows is a little bit of random thoughts.
The petty delusion in the previous life was a bit arrogant, but I personally like it... After all, the pettiness is not too much, and Xiaoshu is willing to tolerate it. Her boyfriend's power is at its maximum... But after we are together in this life, Xiaoshu's boyfriend's power is not as heavy as the main story... If you don't mind, just skip it (P. S. I personally think)
I still really like Xiaoli, how can this man be so boyish and decisive. . . Alas, Xiaowan wants to be happy with Xiaoshu
The third unit feels like Su Gong cq. . . S came on the scene quite late, and he was so raw. . . Plot
Misunderstandings are also very common with dogs,, bloody bars. . Ningyou is a bit much. But Xiao Xi is so charming, Su Qiang is handsome, and Xiao Xia, the crazy actor, acted too realistically before. . .
I almost thought it was a be, and it's good to still think about it... But it's still a he. Five stars for Xiaoxi, please be happy in the future.
I've only read half of the first story, so I'm here to comment. Mainly I want to give you a lot of support.
The writing is very simple, with a sense of narration. The first short story seemed a bit like county literature to me, with the warm town, the hospitable villagers, the arrogant Shen Wan and the restrained Tang Shu. Just reading it, I can feel the fresh vitality in it. Tangshu really fits his name, a big tree deeply rooted in the earth, silently guarding there. Shen Wan is also a very proud person, with a small temper, but he knows how to proceed and retreat (it makes me laugh when I think about him being afraid of dogs [shy])
You must work hard, keep writing, it will get better and better [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]
After reading the first unit, it was perfectly fine to start it alone, but it was just right at this point, and it stopped abruptly, leaving me with more than I wanted to finish.
On the surface, one of the two people looks honest and dull, maybe even a little indecisive, like a big tree, but when pressed, he will pull himself up to block people; the other is arrogant and noisy, as if he has countless loves, but he is also a coward. The slightest wind and rain will scare the birds away, but the big tree will always wait for the little bird, and his fate has already been foreshadowed.
I must keep writing. Although occasionally there are some unclear sentences and typos, the flaws are not concealed. Please give me a kick when the next unit is finished [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Overall, the writing is pretty good, the plot is quite attractive, our mistress system baby is also very cute, and the relationship between the first two protagonists is also very interesting. The reason why I gave it four stars is that the third world has a grand world view and the career of the protagonist is also very high. But the emotional line is really painful to watch. I don't understand why there are so many misunderstandings. Moreover, I don't see any progress in saving it. I won't comment on the protagonist. If it's just for the sake of nonsense, it seems understandable. Of course, this is not over yet, so I don't know where the story will go in the future, so I'll just keep a wait-and-see attitude. Of course, the author's writing is still good, keep up the good work!
One more thing, this cover is really nice hahahahaha
True pure love, I liked it very much in the first world. Tang Shu is like a tree, taciturn, silent and tolerant. In front of Shen, he will unconsciously take care of Shen more because he likes it. His love has always been expressed through actions. I really like this kind of article. Tang and Shen were also very good in the first life. It turns out that the relationship between the two was deceived by Shen, but the last two people I still fell in love with Shen and sacrificed my life. The second life given by 003 was really complete. It turns out that the author said that there will be a lot of memories in the first world. Discovery is a very daily thing. It also connects well with the rest of the story and is not too abrupt. The writing is also light and light. The friendship between some small town friends in it is also very good. After reading it, you will feel a little warm.
Wow, Wow, I still underestimated this cover. The first one I really wrote was Super Invincible and it was so good-looking (I just finished reading the first book and I was eager to review it). It can be said to be a stand-alone book. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]
The second world felt like a fixed routine in a fast-travel world, but in the end it was very soulful. I didn't notice that each character was pretending all the time.
The third world, I can compare to God, I think it ended a little too hastily (but it is a unit article after all). If it were longer, it could be a separate book. This is the only book I have seen on Tomato that has a soul. I really returned to my beautiful homeland, the earth, instead of continuing to be entangled with Shou. Of course it's he in the end, I totally understand, Minghyuk is so cute.
God knows the author, right?
It's very interesting. I like this author's writing very much. Come on, I will follow you. He made me feel a delicate and gentle feeling, very comfortable. What I thought of was the word comfort. I don't know why, but this should be a feeling.
Good-looking, good-looking, very delicate in emotion, supportive and supportive [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
I watched the third small world. I liked it very much. I will update it soon.
Really very beautiful
Can Lu Xi go home in the third world? Alas, it feels like it's a good ending too
It's beautiful, why has no one commented on it? The author writes very well, although some of the short dramas have some problems.
The author's writing is very beautiful, and every couple of CPs are to my liking [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
The second world is awesome, very beautiful [full]
A very heart-warming story, I love every world!
Good looking. I like the extra story about the last family reunion in the interstellar plane.
Super super super super super good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
I didn't dare to watch the third world until I had the courage to continue watching it today. I was caught off guard and returned to Earth. I thought I would stay there like the old routine. This ending is really satisfying. I have an indescribable feeling after watching it. Little Couple 99, there are too few extras and I haven't seen enough [Sending Hearts]. I like this world the most. I don't know if there will be more extras in the finale [Blowing Kisses]
The rare fine grain of chaff allowed me to overcome my doubts... The author's writing style is very clean, I feel comfortable reading it, and it is not verbose at all. Out of curiosity, I read some of the author's other books and I still like this one better. When Xiao Wan first came here, it was already clear that he wanted to write county literature (probably, that's how I personally feel about it). There was a narrow bed in a dark room, and two people squeezed together with their backs touching, could feel the temperature and hear the rapid breathing. After suddenly starting to speak in a hoarse voice, there was no future (previous life) anymore, and it felt like a dream. I like this so much... Very quiet, stubborn but fresh vitality. Alas, Xiaoshu, the road from the county seat to Xiaowang University should be quite long, but on the way to meet my sweetheart, I probably won't be thinking about tiredness🥺 Looking at the memories, what I want to say is "It's enough for fate to stop here", but fate will only roll forward like a wheel... If you ignore the break in the past life, it is actually a very sweet cookie... Alas, unfortunately it is not. . . But I also quite like the reunion in this life (after all, there are not many knives)... There is a very good emotion in the writing... For Xiaowan and Xiaoshu who came back, they should both have dull pain in the heart, shortness of breath, and a sour feeling like micro-current stabbing the heart. It was secret love, restraint, mutual liking, reunion after a long separation, and forced separation due to external reasons. It's the hand that wanted to touch but then took it back, it's the friend that has disappeared, but no matter how we go around, it's still you, the tired bird will only return to the forest. In fact, I haven't tied it yet, but I really like the first unit... It's like being loved wholeheartedly and wholeheartedly. The two parties fall in love naturally. It's so luxurious, so clean, so incredible. In the previous life, the two of them had been very restrained in their love, and it was quite delicious to have this kind of restraint. It won't stop you from walking on the path you should take, but it will give you a kind of secret pain. In the end, nothing will be known to anyone... I don't know what it was like for Xiaoshu in his previous life to watch his lover push him away (two kinds of pushing, one emotional, and one that involves spoilers, I won't tell you)... Probably only a corner of the huge sorrow is broken from the eyes... That kind of sadness is rushing through ordinary words. Oh, I feel really sorry for this little fool... I actually feel like he is like ashes after a fire (?) To the little tree, he is as erratic as ashes. Nothing he owns can keep him. The more tightly he holds on to it, the faster it will dissipate. But when I saw him, I thought of fire, of burning, of the moment when the flames were blazing. Thinking of the purest and strongest sincerity in life. Love? The feeling of love hurts like this. Filling it with all your feelings, thoughts and desires will only result in a few seconds of pulsating flames. It seems like I'm going too far (sorry. Jpg.), Okay then I'm going to make more nonsense. After thinking about it for a while, Xiao Shu, who had drunk a group of people after a drinking party, calmly greeted the others, and calmly led Xiao Wan, who was unconscious and wouldn't let go after two drinks, back home. Well, I'm very happy. Little couple 99, I'm glad to see your story. To add a little more... I looked at other worlds a few times and it seems that I have stepped on my thunder. I will try the third unit again... What follows is a little bit of random thoughts. The petty delusion in the previous life was a bit arrogant, but I personally like it... After all, the pettiness is not too much, and Xiaoshu is willing to tolerate it. Her boyfriend's power is at its maximum... But after we are together in this life, Xiaoshu's boyfriend's power is not as heavy as the main story... If you don't mind, just skip it (P. S. I personally think) I still really like Xiaoli, how can this man be so boyish and decisive. . . Alas, Xiaowan wants to be happy with Xiaoshu The third unit feels like Su Gong cq. . . S came on the scene quite late, and he was so raw. . . Plot Misunderstandings are also very common with dogs,, bloody bars. . Ningyou is a bit much. But Xiao Xi is so charming, Su Qiang is handsome, and Xiao Xia, the crazy actor, acted too realistically before. . . I almost thought it was a be, and it's good to still think about it... But it's still a he. Five stars for Xiaoxi, please be happy in the future.
I've only read half of the first story, so I'm here to comment. Mainly I want to give you a lot of support. The writing is very simple, with a sense of narration. The first short story seemed a bit like county literature to me, with the warm town, the hospitable villagers, the arrogant Shen Wan and the restrained Tang Shu. Just reading it, I can feel the fresh vitality in it. Tangshu really fits his name, a big tree deeply rooted in the earth, silently guarding there. Shen Wan is also a very proud person, with a small temper, but he knows how to proceed and retreat (it makes me laugh when I think about him being afraid of dogs [shy]) You must work hard, keep writing, it will get better and better [Blow kiss][Blow kiss] After reading the first unit, it was perfectly fine to start it alone, but it was just right at this point, and it stopped abruptly, leaving me with more than I wanted to finish. On the surface, one of the two people looks honest and dull, maybe even a little indecisive, like a big tree, but when pressed, he will pull himself up to block people; the other is arrogant and noisy, as if he has countless loves, but he is also a coward. The slightest wind and rain will scare the birds away, but the big tree will always wait for the little bird, and his fate has already been foreshadowed. I must keep writing. Although occasionally there are some unclear sentences and typos, the flaws are not concealed. Please give me a kick when the next unit is finished [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Overall, the writing is pretty good, the plot is quite attractive, our mistress system baby is also very cute, and the relationship between the first two protagonists is also very interesting. The reason why I gave it four stars is that the third world has a grand world view and the career of the protagonist is also very high. But the emotional line is really painful to watch. I don't understand why there are so many misunderstandings. Moreover, I don't see any progress in saving it. I won't comment on the protagonist. If it's just for the sake of nonsense, it seems understandable. Of course, this is not over yet, so I don't know where the story will go in the future, so I'll just keep a wait-and-see attitude. Of course, the author's writing is still good, keep up the good work! One more thing, this cover is really nice hahahahaha
True pure love, I liked it very much in the first world. Tang Shu is like a tree, taciturn, silent and tolerant. In front of Shen, he will unconsciously take care of Shen more because he likes it. His love has always been expressed through actions. I really like this kind of article. Tang and Shen were also very good in the first life. It turns out that the relationship between the two was deceived by Shen, but the last two people I still fell in love with Shen and sacrificed my life. The second life given by 003 was really complete. It turns out that the author said that there will be a lot of memories in the first world. Discovery is a very daily thing. It also connects well with the rest of the story and is not too abrupt. The writing is also light and light. The friendship between some small town friends in it is also very good. After reading it, you will feel a little warm.
Wow, Wow, I still underestimated this cover. The first one I really wrote was Super Invincible and it was so good-looking (I just finished reading the first book and I was eager to review it). It can be said to be a stand-alone book. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] The second world felt like a fixed routine in a fast-travel world, but in the end it was very soulful. I didn't notice that each character was pretending all the time. The third world, I can compare to God, I think it ended a little too hastily (but it is a unit article after all). If it were longer, it could be a separate book. This is the only book I have seen on Tomato that has a soul. I really returned to my beautiful homeland, the earth, instead of continuing to be entangled with Shou. Of course it's he in the end, I totally understand, Minghyuk is so cute. God knows the author, right?
It's very interesting. I like this author's writing very much. Come on, I will follow you. He made me feel a delicate and gentle feeling, very comfortable. What I thought of was the word comfort. I don't know why, but this should be a feeling.
Good-looking, good-looking, very delicate in emotion, supportive and supportive [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
I watched the third small world. I liked it very much. I will update it soon.
Really very beautiful
Can Lu Xi go home in the third world? Alas, it feels like it's a good ending too
It's beautiful, why has no one commented on it? The author writes very well, although some of the short dramas have some problems.
The author's writing is very beautiful, and every couple of CPs are to my liking [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]
The second world is awesome, very beautiful [full]
A very heart-warming story, I love every world!
Good looking. I like the extra story about the last family reunion in the interstellar plane.
Super super super super super good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I didn't dare to watch the third world until I had the courage to continue watching it today. I was caught off guard and returned to Earth. I thought I would stay there like the old routine. This ending is really satisfying. I have an indescribable feeling after watching it. Little Couple 99, there are too few extras and I haven't seen enough [Sending Hearts]. I like this world the most. I don't know if there will be more extras in the finale [Blowing Kisses]