Thriller Cinema: Gambit to Save Yukinoshita Yukino

Your wonderful pen outlines all things in life, and your story is so stunning that it attracts people to read it. I hoped that the story would continue and the ending would be happy, but I never thought of stopping in the middle of the story. I haven't seen a new chapter for a long time. [Crying] The male protagonist's performance worsens as he progresses. Why is he giving up on himself instead of growing up? Whenever something happens, it's Yukino. Whenever something happens, it's Yukino.

The subject matter is quite interesting, but I just finished reading the copy of the building and I still have a lot of problems. 1. Let's talk about the protagonist first. At present, it seems that the protagonist's presence is too weak. The protagonist of this kind of dungeon novel is either an intelligence type or a force type. However, the protagonist of this book feels like he is neither good nor bad, stuck between these two types. In fact, the first copy is handled well. The intelligent type is Yukino, and the force or special ability is the protagonist. This way of viewing is okay, because by default the protagonist and the heroine are one. The character of the protagonist is also quite chaotic, and it shows when he is targeted and fights back. However, there are a lot of good intentions that are written too cheaply. In a dungeon like this that can die at any time, it is better for the protagonist to be alone. It is too hot-blooded now. 2. The dungeon, to be honest, the sense of oppression in the dungeon is too low. What is the state of the ghosts set? Can players cause harm to ghosts? Under what conditions can ghosts harm players? When I write it down now, I feel that there is no reason for ghosts to hurt people. It is very random. This leads to no feeling of fear at all. Anyway, the protagonist will not be the unluckiest one. It should be related to the number of people in the dungeon. There are 12 people at a time. It is too difficult to write. Just follow the traditional "violate the rules and you will die", otherwise it would be too crazy to have a dungeon full of props. Such props should be rare, right? 3. Female protagonist, to be honest, there is really no need for too many female protagonists. Wouldn't it be nice to have only one female protagonist appear in one dungeon? Instead of constantly adding new characters, why not keep improving the role of the old characters and just fix a few female protagonists and follow them in turn in the dungeon? And currently, apart from Yukino, the other female protagonists don't have much to shine. Kasumigaoka, who has a high IQ and is a writer, can definitely design a dungeon that makes full use of her strengths. What is the role of this third dungeon? The main reason is that the subject matter is quite new. Please support the author and give him five stars for encouragement.

Hell Cinema Comprehensive Comic Version

There are so few novels of this type. I prefer to rely on my brain to solve the problem step by step instead of flying big bricks. Supernaturals should have the sense of oppression of the unknown.

It looks good, I love watching it, more updates, more heroines, Yukinoshita Yukino's emotional feelings have been cultivated very well [laughing evilly], and the relationship can be deepened [cool]

Infinite Horror and Variety Comics are so niche. I'd like to give you a good review first.

Okay, okay, finally there is a novel similar to Hell Cinema. I hope the author will not be a eunuch [face covering]

The subject matter is good, let's put aside the minor points. Although I also like Glass very much, it always feels like you are always sacrificing your life to save it. . . At present, it seems that glass is of no use.

Please give me five stars for encouragement. A book like this written on Tomato shouldn't be very popular.

It's quite interesting. Foreign persimmons rarely write such articles including comprehensive comics. For novels, it's fine as long as they are interesting.

Come on, although it is a niche, it is well written.

Very good novel, I don't know how to read it Why is the rating so low. A very good novel, I don't know why the rating is so low. .

Seeing now, please encourage me [eating melon] It's just that it's 5 points [face covering]

How to put it, very good, but where is Tomie? Write it down as soon as possible, and then add it to the introduction.

Can the novel be used? Will the author have a female character from Conan? The protagonist Conan is a detective who is very suitable for these horror books. The female characters Maori Ran (particularly afraid of ghosts), Suzuki Sonoko, Kazuha, Nakamori Aoko, Yukiko, Fei Eri, and Belmod all have the same abilities!

There is no big poisonous point, you can take a look

I think this kind of subject matter is still very interesting, come on

Not bad, [laughs evilly] This latest setting actually makes me want to continue reading.

That's okay. It can be considered a good novel. If it's of the same genre, it can be considered above average.

I hope the author can complete it smoothly without any unfinished work or a low level.

There are too few novels like this with anime heroines surviving in a supernatural world, they must be 5 stars [laughs]

So far so good, nothing bad about it

It's a pity. I thought it would be popular.

How beautiful is this new cover? After keeping it for a while, I found that the introduction has changed and it is indeed more attractive than before.

I changed my account to read this book, and the reading time was a bit short.

Give me five stars to encourage you first, and you may give me negative reviews later [laughing]

It's okay, I just hope that future copies can be more scary. Come on

The sense of horror needs to be improved, but I still give it five stars [you taste it carefully]

It looks good, but the content of this copy doesn't quite appeal to me. Maybe it's my personal reasons. When I said that the content of the dungeon was not very attractive to me, I meant that the plot in the dungeon felt average. Maybe it was because I had read too many related novels.

Not bad, but there are too few updates and it's not enough to watch. The dungeon is good, but the growth of the protagonist is so slow, a bit lagging compared to Yukino.