[Fantasy Daily] [Entry] [Warm and Funny] [Develop/Be developed?
After being transported into the world of cultivating immortals, Xu Jinhuan said: "Good news, brothers, the system was activated right after birth!"
[Today is your 100th birthday... In the era when you were born, spiritual buds competed with each other and geniuses emerged. Today, they are in their prime, competing in the wild... But you are old, and you are nothing more than a white-haired old man at the third level of Qi Refining...]
Xu Jinhuan: "It's over! The system treats me as a 100-year-old comrade and issues a mission with a script from a hundred years in the future?"
The task seems simple, it is nothing more than to face old friends, listen to Qingmei's heart, and invite a beauty... But for Xu Jinhuan, who is an infant and child, it is undoubtedly the problem of the century!
Xu Jinhuan: "Help, ah, ah, ah, I'm not weaned yet!"
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(Currently, we have entries for talents: flashback, discernment, concealing one's ears and stealing bells, bending into a trick, carving a boat for a sword, enjoying the harvest, fighting to the death, gluttonous feast, plundering sheep, playing the piano to an ox... Every talent is useful! Happy brainstorming article, don't worry too much)
Reader comments
The protagonist written by the author is super cute, and his daily life is super warm and healing.
The recent plots are getting weirder and weirder, so everyone has to rely on the protagonist, but now the protagonist is only three years old. A group of adults are unreliable. They don't think about what they can do for the protagonist. They accept the protagonist's efforts with peace of mind. The adults need the protagonist's talent. A group of children who are older than the protagonist need the protagonist's psychological guidance. Who cares that the protagonist is only three years old? The protagonist is no longer a three-year-old child, but a thirty-year-old nanny. The protagonist will go wherever the protagonist is needed.
Thank you all for your criticisms and corrections, and also thank you all for your support and tolerance. Thank you!
I have realized that the progress of cultivation is slow, and it will be accelerated in the future.
I wrote this book using a method similar to "character reasoning" - the information obtained by the protagonist is synchronized with the reader, and sometimes the reader will know more than the protagonist.
Therefore, writing it like this will inevitably slow down the plot in order to explain some clues and explain the protagonist's reasoning and decision-making. I hope friends will forgive me.
Secondly, in terms of plot selection, I deliberately avoided classic but inevitably clichéd plots such as "big family infighting", "full moon banquet", "catch the week", "being looked down upon and then slapped in the face". I also did not follow the shock trend of Long Aotian. I wanted to create a warm and healing comedy plot. Speaking of healing, it is inevitable that there will be some slightly depressing clues (the life experience of the protagonist's "old comrade" in the future, the ending of his family and friends, etc.), But these endings will be changed and healed. Friends, please give the protagonist a little more time.
Moma [blowing kiss]
It's okay, but the protagonist's upgrade speed is a bit slow, but the situation is getting more and more severe. If you want to take it easy, it's not very easy, and there are a few characters in the system.
What does it mean to hide from your family that you can cultivate and refine your body?
It's rare to see such an impressive system flow setting.
The centenarian who was dying in the thatched house had experienced all the hardships of the world and was filled with compassion as he waited for the end. The system was belatedly arrived; but time and space intersected, and the same system fell on him at the same time in his mother's womb.
One line is a dying old man who has experienced many vicissitudes of life and is full of sadness; the other line is a young man who started his journey in swaddling clothes and is full of hope to grow up again. Completing system tasks as a child will unlock memories a hundred years later and reunite with old friends.
On the one hand, there is the helplessness of spending a lifetime, and on the other hand, there is the high spirits of having a chance to come back. After reading, Zhao Lei's "I Remember" kept ringing in my mind: Meeting someone destined to lose their memory.
The same person, two lives facing each other from a distance, full of a sense of fate, not only a cool novel, but also a deep tenderness and regret. Looking forward to the moment when the two timelines intersect in the future!
I am very much looking forward to the collaboration between the two timeline protagonists, the old Xu Jinhuan & the young Xu Jinhuan. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
There are many pitfalls that are not explained, and the more you write, the more foreshadowing you get, but the plot is so fun that the flaws are not covered up. The writing is very vivid and takes you into the twists and turns of the storyline. Every time the protagonist upgrades, you will be happy and joyful. The emotional descriptions of the surprise of the villain or friends are also appropriately worded! Good looking and recommended!
It really feels like the daily life of a child is vivid, very natural, and very cute; even when besieging the little villains and bosses, it is clean and tidy; and for the description of the female characters in the article, I think it is very good and very measured. It makes people feel that the protagonist will become a good best friend as he grows up.
The writing is very good, I was a little surprised. The protagonist and supporting characters are very interesting and lovable, and they are very funny without being cliché. I hope the author can work hard and continue to write it well and finish it!
The settings of the plug-in are okay, but the progress is still too slow and too routine. But it's not bad, right?
The author's writing is very good. The protagonist is still young now, and has a child-like appearance, which is cute. It feels like a 9-point masterpiece. Of course, as long as it doesn't collapse. I watched Gagale.
Not bad, nothing toxic. I read other comments saying that the protagonist hides his clumsy cultivation poison point. The key is that the protagonist has no spiritual roots to cultivate at the age of three. This must be hidden wherever it is placed, otherwise it will not be properly sliced and searched for souls. It is really not a poison point. Moreover, the protagonist only hides his spiritual roots and cultivates them, but he doesn't hide anything else. He has no innate magical powers, a genius in physical cultivation, and he doesn't pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger.
The content is okay, nothing obvious. The foreshadowing and writing are both good. At this time, two timelines have to be pulled at the same time. What will happen in the later stage? However, the author may change the name to attract people. After all, this name is a bit backward and it will be more popular in the past 24 years.
The plot is very interesting, with two novel plots running at the same time. The male protagonist basically belongs to Long Aotian's setting, but only in the setting. After all, the protagonist is still relatively timid. Well, I am more cautious. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and the plot rhythm is a bit slow. It depends on the author. If it is a long story, it is okay to have a slower pace. I am afraid that it will end suddenly later. Normally, a long novel has to wait until 700+ chapters to be completed. I remember when I was watching Sun Shan, many people couldn't wait any longer. Come on.
It's quite good to read, mainly because the main characters are written in a unique way, and the children's identities can also write about more daily life. If you want to read about daily life, it's right to read it. You don't need to listen to so many comments. They just like to watch it for fun, and they like to watch eating meat. No matter how you read it in the title, you can't say anything about it, and you are not a nanny. It's because people around you can't do it as well as the protagonist. The protagonist has the ability, so why not solve it? If you really are a child and play every day, what else are you reading in this novel? And not to mention anything else, the character of the aunt is really good. If I change it to other novels, I can be the heroine.
It's very comfortable to watch. Five stars encourage you. Don't stop updating.
So far, it seems that the plot is pretty good, and there is nothing very toxic about it, but the author of this cover feels that he should consider changing it to another one. If the book hadn't been in short supply, this cover would really not arouse interest, haha.
Very well written, the villain is a puppet, and the protagonist is a three-year-old child who has some memories of 100 years later. Because of the system, the results will be very different. Compared with the plot of ordinary fairy tales about upgrading and fighting monsters, it is innovative. Five-star praise
There are no bad points, and the daily life is quite interesting. The pace is a bit slow. The only possible bad point is that the adults around the protagonist only specialize in what they are best at, and other parts are not as good as the protagonist. For example, Aunt Dai can fight and refine medicine, but in other parts she is just like a child. The protagonist's father also has the nature of a child except for fighting and refining weapons, but it is actually quite interesting to write it this way.
Very beautiful, highly recommended, but why is the rating so low?
A very heart-warming story about cultivating immortals, with a good rhythm
Not bad, but the upgrade of pig's feet is slow. The emotional portrayal is quite rich.
Not bad, very good-looking, looking forward to the follow-up.
The plot is interesting and the writing is semi-refreshing.
Novel ideas, not like tomatoes. Come on.
The writing is really detailed, not bad, and it seems to be a quality product at the moment [Blow kiss]
Very pretty, very creative
Not bad, let's give it five stars first [laughing evilly]
I can't stand it anymore, change it to Samsung ⭐
Can you please change the age of the main character? When I read the plot and think about the age of 3 years old, I feel a bit out of touch. Everything else is pretty good.
The only shortcoming is that there are too few. If the author can save 300,000 words and slowly publish them, the popularity will definitely be high. Now there are few words and few updates, so it is difficult to retain people.
Apart from this, it looks good
The book review was swallowed [stared], helpless, the book is very interesting, the author is very obedient, the protagonist is small, cute, and very smart [shy][please update][please update]
The protagonist written by the author is super cute, and his daily life is super warm and healing. The recent plots are getting weirder and weirder, so everyone has to rely on the protagonist, but now the protagonist is only three years old. A group of adults are unreliable. They don't think about what they can do for the protagonist. They accept the protagonist's efforts with peace of mind. The adults need the protagonist's talent. A group of children who are older than the protagonist need the protagonist's psychological guidance. Who cares that the protagonist is only three years old? The protagonist is no longer a three-year-old child, but a thirty-year-old nanny. The protagonist will go wherever the protagonist is needed.
Thank you all for your criticisms and corrections, and also thank you all for your support and tolerance. Thank you! I have realized that the progress of cultivation is slow, and it will be accelerated in the future. I wrote this book using a method similar to "character reasoning" - the information obtained by the protagonist is synchronized with the reader, and sometimes the reader will know more than the protagonist. Therefore, writing it like this will inevitably slow down the plot in order to explain some clues and explain the protagonist's reasoning and decision-making. I hope friends will forgive me. Secondly, in terms of plot selection, I deliberately avoided classic but inevitably clichéd plots such as "big family infighting", "full moon banquet", "catch the week", "being looked down upon and then slapped in the face". I also did not follow the shock trend of Long Aotian. I wanted to create a warm and healing comedy plot. Speaking of healing, it is inevitable that there will be some slightly depressing clues (the life experience of the protagonist's "old comrade" in the future, the ending of his family and friends, etc.), But these endings will be changed and healed. Friends, please give the protagonist a little more time. Moma [blowing kiss]
It's okay, but the protagonist's upgrade speed is a bit slow, but the situation is getting more and more severe. If you want to take it easy, it's not very easy, and there are a few characters in the system.
What does it mean to hide from your family that you can cultivate and refine your body?
It's rare to see such an impressive system flow setting. The centenarian who was dying in the thatched house had experienced all the hardships of the world and was filled with compassion as he waited for the end. The system was belatedly arrived; but time and space intersected, and the same system fell on him at the same time in his mother's womb. One line is a dying old man who has experienced many vicissitudes of life and is full of sadness; the other line is a young man who started his journey in swaddling clothes and is full of hope to grow up again. Completing system tasks as a child will unlock memories a hundred years later and reunite with old friends. On the one hand, there is the helplessness of spending a lifetime, and on the other hand, there is the high spirits of having a chance to come back. After reading, Zhao Lei's "I Remember" kept ringing in my mind: Meeting someone destined to lose their memory. The same person, two lives facing each other from a distance, full of a sense of fate, not only a cool novel, but also a deep tenderness and regret. Looking forward to the moment when the two timelines intersect in the future! I am very much looking forward to the collaboration between the two timeline protagonists, the old Xu Jinhuan & the young Xu Jinhuan. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
There are many pitfalls that are not explained, and the more you write, the more foreshadowing you get, but the plot is so fun that the flaws are not covered up. The writing is very vivid and takes you into the twists and turns of the storyline. Every time the protagonist upgrades, you will be happy and joyful. The emotional descriptions of the surprise of the villain or friends are also appropriately worded! Good looking and recommended!
It really feels like the daily life of a child is vivid, very natural, and very cute; even when besieging the little villains and bosses, it is clean and tidy; and for the description of the female characters in the article, I think it is very good and very measured. It makes people feel that the protagonist will become a good best friend as he grows up.
The writing is very good, I was a little surprised. The protagonist and supporting characters are very interesting and lovable, and they are very funny without being cliché. I hope the author can work hard and continue to write it well and finish it!
The settings of the plug-in are okay, but the progress is still too slow and too routine. But it's not bad, right?
The author's writing is very good. The protagonist is still young now, and has a child-like appearance, which is cute. It feels like a 9-point masterpiece. Of course, as long as it doesn't collapse. I watched Gagale.
Not bad, nothing toxic. I read other comments saying that the protagonist hides his clumsy cultivation poison point. The key is that the protagonist has no spiritual roots to cultivate at the age of three. This must be hidden wherever it is placed, otherwise it will not be properly sliced and searched for souls. It is really not a poison point. Moreover, the protagonist only hides his spiritual roots and cultivates them, but he doesn't hide anything else. He has no innate magical powers, a genius in physical cultivation, and he doesn't pretend to be a pig to eat a tiger.
The content is okay, nothing obvious. The foreshadowing and writing are both good. At this time, two timelines have to be pulled at the same time. What will happen in the later stage? However, the author may change the name to attract people. After all, this name is a bit backward and it will be more popular in the past 24 years.
The plot is very interesting, with two novel plots running at the same time. The male protagonist basically belongs to Long Aotian's setting, but only in the setting. After all, the protagonist is still relatively timid. Well, I am more cautious. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and the plot rhythm is a bit slow. It depends on the author. If it is a long story, it is okay to have a slower pace. I am afraid that it will end suddenly later. Normally, a long novel has to wait until 700+ chapters to be completed. I remember when I was watching Sun Shan, many people couldn't wait any longer. Come on.
It's quite good to read, mainly because the main characters are written in a unique way, and the children's identities can also write about more daily life. If you want to read about daily life, it's right to read it. You don't need to listen to so many comments. They just like to watch it for fun, and they like to watch eating meat. No matter how you read it in the title, you can't say anything about it, and you are not a nanny. It's because people around you can't do it as well as the protagonist. The protagonist has the ability, so why not solve it? If you really are a child and play every day, what else are you reading in this novel? And not to mention anything else, the character of the aunt is really good. If I change it to other novels, I can be the heroine.
It's very comfortable to watch. Five stars encourage you. Don't stop updating.
So far, it seems that the plot is pretty good, and there is nothing very toxic about it, but the author of this cover feels that he should consider changing it to another one. If the book hadn't been in short supply, this cover would really not arouse interest, haha.
Very well written, the villain is a puppet, and the protagonist is a three-year-old child who has some memories of 100 years later. Because of the system, the results will be very different. Compared with the plot of ordinary fairy tales about upgrading and fighting monsters, it is innovative. Five-star praise
There are no bad points, and the daily life is quite interesting. The pace is a bit slow. The only possible bad point is that the adults around the protagonist only specialize in what they are best at, and other parts are not as good as the protagonist. For example, Aunt Dai can fight and refine medicine, but in other parts she is just like a child. The protagonist's father also has the nature of a child except for fighting and refining weapons, but it is actually quite interesting to write it this way.
Very beautiful, highly recommended, but why is the rating so low?
A very heart-warming story about cultivating immortals, with a good rhythm
Not bad, but the upgrade of pig's feet is slow. The emotional portrayal is quite rich.
Not bad, very good-looking, looking forward to the follow-up.
The plot is interesting and the writing is semi-refreshing.
Novel ideas, not like tomatoes. Come on.
The writing is really detailed, not bad, and it seems to be a quality product at the moment [Blow kiss]
Very pretty, very creative
Not bad, let's give it five stars first [laughing evilly] I can't stand it anymore, change it to Samsung ⭐
Can you please change the age of the main character? When I read the plot and think about the age of 3 years old, I feel a bit out of touch. Everything else is pretty good.
The only shortcoming is that there are too few. If the author can save 300,000 words and slowly publish them, the popularity will definitely be high. Now there are few words and few updates, so it is difficult to retain people. Apart from this, it looks good
The book review was swallowed [stared], helpless, the book is very interesting, the author is very obedient, the protagonist is small, cute, and very smart [shy][please update][please update]