Salvation************

The subject matter is novel and the writing is also very good. The only thing that is a bit uncomfortable is that there are too many people at the beginning, and it is a bit difficult to identify the real names and screen names. But gradually the characteristics of each person are revealed and I remember it. It is a good book worth reading. I hope the author can stick to it.

I was lucky enough to stumble upon this book during a book shortage. 1. The writing is relaxed and there is no deliberately vulgar content. This is my problem during this period. I read these kinds of things every day and make me feel irritable. This book is like a breath of fresh air. This is the fun of reading online articles. Big cheers for the author! Very well written(｡•̀ᴗ-) 2. The subject matter is not particularly new, but I like to read this type of organizational articles, but most of them only read the early stage (っ˘зʕ•̫͡•ʔ 3. I originally planned to just try a little bit and leave. Well, I found it was delicious. The author is very good at writing horror. The plot is not procrastinating and I really don't get tired of watching it. This is my favorite point. Come on! ε(´｡•᎑•`)っ♡

First of all, it is updated on time at 6 o'clock every morning. If there is no update at 6:05, it means that it will not be updated that day. If you ask for leave, you will be informed in advance. Secondly, when a certain number of typos are accumulated, they will be corrected together. Thank you to the readers who corrected the errors. Then thank the readers who left their names. I will come back and reply if they are used later. Finally, thank you to the seven readers who provided character designs. Sorry if this is ooc. This article is dedicated to replaying all the pretentious scenes that I have dreamed about before.

Very beautiful, I love watching it, keep going! The author has some suggestions. Can you make a corresponding name, screen name and ability list for the protagonist group? [Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] After reading more than ten chapters, I still can't figure out who is who and what their abilities are? Please please?

It's OK, it's a clear cut in the organization's text, and it's not deeply tied to the official website yet. I like this kind of thing, it's mysterious and stylish.

It looks great, but can I make some suggestions? I can't always match the protagonist's name with the game's network name. Also. Some people can't remember the name of this network or what kind of training or what this person is good at. What is the family like and what is the current situation like. It was a bit difficult to read at first, the names always didn't match up.

The author's wife's writing is really beautiful, and there is nothing wrong with it for me. There are not many novels that suit my taste like this. I hope the author will write more and not give up.

So pretty! I hope that in the future, all members will not be abused without CP! I have read two or three books about traveling between two realms and cultivating immortals, but I always get stuck on accepting disciples and opening an immortal sect, and then inexplicably stop reading them. I hope the author will persevere! It's really good and it will definitely break my curse of breaking updates every time I read modern novels about cultivating immortals!

It's super, super good-looking. After traveling to the world of immortality, and then back again, they discovered that it had been three years since the strange world invaded the original world. With the addition of system tasks, they began to save the world by clearing the tracks and switching vests.

It's so beautiful. Although I didn't read it word for word, the plot is very good and it's very comfortable to watch. I really like this kind of modern immortal cultivator Ma Jiawen [shy] [shy]. I finished it in three hours. It's not enough [crying]

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the dialect could be reduced a little in the text, or you could comment in the comment area. I can't understand those dialects [face covering]

The author writes beautifully

I really like Wuxiang and Rongjun [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's very beautifully written, thank you so much

I really like the group portraits, please don't give up, boss🥹🙏🏻

Very novel setting, the writing is very smooth. Delicious and delicious, all handsome and reassuring

This book is amazing. I looked for many books at that time, but none of them seemed to my liking. This book is really, really, really good.

The beginning is quite attractive, I haven't seen this setting often, so I'll give it four stars.

Things are getting better now. The protagonist group appears and the characters are finally introduced. Is the cultivation level of the protagonist group a bit weak? In a fight, one move will make you look for tricks in seconds. You can't feel it with spiritual energy, so you have to wait for news. Normally practicing immortal literature, anyone with a stronger ability can feel it. As a result, the protagonist also needs a professional counterpart, a Mahayana cultivation level, and a golden elixir foundation level.

There are so many characters in the main group at once that I can't remember them at all

Delicious 😋 Then if the author asks for a book review, just pamper her.

Although I have only read a few chapters, I found it very interesting. Please support the author.

Are you a sand sculpture team that loves cultivating immortals? They have finished cultivating immortals and have come back to save their hometown.

It's beautifully written, but for some reason, I just can't remember the name.

This is something I haven't read in any book. It's just that this chapter is too short.

There are still too few book reviews. It's very interesting and interesting. The author please work harder and update more [Blow a kiss]. I like this fresh style.

It's good to hope that we will always be the protagonists of the group without cp and let's work together to build a career!

Very interesting, the subject matter is something I have never seen before