Ye Bufan is a modern-day transmigrator who knows the entire plot of Renegade Immortal. He transmigrates to a hundred years before Wang Lin’s birth, arriving in the Zhao Kingdom on Vermilion Bird Planet. After transmigrating, he gains a faint understanding of the Heavenly Dao. His cultivation speed far surpasses that of the local cultivators, and his comprehension is exceptional, allowing him to study the core elements of the Renegade Immortal world ahead of time, including its cultivation techniques, restrictions, and ancient god inheritance.
Reserved, obsessive, meticulous, and decisive in killing, he is cold and distant to everyone else, yet utterly gentle and unconditionally loyal to Wang Lin. He is willing to set aside all pride and ambition, considers himself Wang Lin’s servant, and makes Wang Lin’s path to defying Heaven the whole purpose of his life. He buries his secret love deep in his heart and never lets it show, choosing only to protect Wang Lin in silence.
He changes every tragedy in Wang Lin’s original story and helps him defy Heaven and attain the Dao, staying by his side forever. Even if he can only be the lowliest servant, he is content.
I think the author's writing style has a lot of room for improvement. I don't quite understand the previous logic. I don't know if I missed something, but I just feel that some places are a bit abrupt. When I read the previous content, my impression was that "Licking a Dog Gains Nothing" or "The Price of Falling in Love with a Straight Man", because Wang Lin still had a very different reaction to Li Muwan and it was a very normal reaction. But by about Chapter 28.29, It can be said that there are two male protagonists. Wang Lin understood his own feelings and Ye Bufan's feelings for him, but he did not say it directly. Wang Lin later said to Qin Yue: "He (referring to Ye Bufan) is the reason for me to live." I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good, I just want to ask if he has learned anything from bean bags or the like? Because some places always feel like they have been repeated many times? Mainly the content feels familiar to me. I feel familiar once or twice and many times (っ- ‸ - ς). I still hope the author can finish it and not stop updating,🙏🏻
It's nice to read, but if I write more, it just feels a bit cheesy.