The Writing Is Tough, Not Bloody, and the Writing Is Unpleasant. the Male Protagonist Is Not Playful and Smiley, but Is Cold on the Outside and Cold on the Inside.
The writing is tough, not bloody, not funny, the male protagonist is not playful and smiling, cold on the outside and hot on the inside, traditional fairy tale, fantasy, rebirth, urban, can be knifed, can be tortured, that's it bt
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1. The author's subjective emotions are injected too much. 2. The characterization is described too much and the details are expressed too little. It feels like a stamp of thought imposed on the reader rather than shaped by details. 3. The appearance of the characters and the description of the scene are insufficient, and there is no good sense of picture. 4. There are too many dispensable characters appearing at once, with almost no description, and some have no function and only have a name. Come on, author!