When Lane was exiled to a plague-ridden border town, all he had left was a clinic on the verge of collapse, an old ledger, and just enough medical skill to save a life.
He had planned to scrape by in White Crow Town and wait to die. Then, one night, while rummaging through a mass grave, he found someone alive.
A Saintess with amnesia, no less.
She was noble, strong, and able to give blessings. She was also broke.
“I can bless you.”
“The clinic doesn’t take blessings.”
“I’m a Saintess.”
“Saintesses have to pay their medical bills too.”
At first, Lane thought he’d simply picked up a nuisance.
Only later did he learn that he’d rescued the person the Church was searching for, a spark from an ancient miracle, and a disaster capable of turning the entire frontier upside down.
From that day on, the poorest doctor in White Crow Town began saving lives, collecting debts, and settling accounts with the entire Church.
Let's take out one or two chapters to popularize the setting. Many settings, nouns, and logic related to the church in the early stories are too vague and are not explained clearly, making it difficult to read. However, the writing style and skills are really good. Even when people don't understand and want to abandon it, they are always attracted and want to read two more chapters (after all, maybe they will understand it). How much AI is used? I recently read several AI articles and found that the terminology and logicians came from the same school. For example, Tomato has a book called "Three Kingdoms: The Door Blocked by Diao Chan at the Beginning". It is an obvious abuse of AI. You can read it. It is also the Riddler, and the plot rhythm is poorly controlled. Common AI phrases: "That road", "Hold this road", "The road is strangled", "Stop the road", "Line", "Hidden line", "The line becomes clear". Common symptoms of AI: vague and confusing settings, pretentiousness, bad settings, sudden forced introduction of new settings halfway through, and unbalanced rhythm of the main story line. If AI is used like this, I will give it a bad review. (If the author can explain clearly, I will change the tracking score)
The opening chapter is very good, with a kind of animation unfolding. The only shortcoming is that there is no corresponding explanation in the opening chapter. There is no map of Novice Village when opening a new map. There is no explanation about the kingdom, whether the state and religion are separated, and which one is stronger or weaker between royal power and divine power. It would be better if it can be completed.
I just saw Chapter 17. There were a lot of talk about old seals, old equipment, medical patterns, etc., But they never said what they were. I don't know where they came from. The default setting is that we all know the same. If you learn calculus, you will be able to tell you what an integral number is... And why do you never avoid people when using a ledger?
Not bad, the character of the protagonist is a bit like opening a medical clinic in the abyss. There are just too few updates~
The writing is very good, the plot is fascinating, and the characters are also likeable. They are not the refined and self-interested protagonists of mainstream novels, which makes people's eyes bright. So far, I think the writing is very good, and I hope it can maintain its current status in the future. This article is considered a very good topic among the articles I have read so far. I hope the author can stabilize his mind and write it well. I will try my best to send it to you three times a day with love. The writing is really good, but after reading it for a few days, I found that the story is much less interesting and not attractive enough.
The author is very good. If you work hard and persevere, and your imagination and writing skills are both online, at least you will not have to worry about food and drink. Of course, the premise is that it is not written by AI.
It's a masterpiece. The writing style is as clean and neat as the protagonist's. The imagery is very strong. It's different from the novels I've read before.
Not bad, but some of the settings inside are a bit unclear. For example, I haven't seen a clear explanation of what the old seal is. I just know what it is, and maybe it will be revealed a little bit in the future?
It's pretty good in suspense and unique in western fantasy.
The writing is not bad, except for the power system and setting. Maybe there are not enough words to expand it at the moment. I look forward to completing it in the future.