Quick Travel: the Promised Bai Yueguang Turned Out to Be a Heartthrob

The author's writing is quite delicate, but the setting is not very strong. Maybe it is because the female protagonist's perspective is the same as our God's perspective. She does not assume the original protagonist's feeling of always wandering outside of these plots. She just goes to work and completes the tasks. It lacks a bit of pulling and emotions, and lacks realism and human complexity. If the first world was the original protagonist's own intertwined unwillingness, resentment, and feelings, I feel that I would cry more happily. , The world of the heroine is a bit dull, and revenge feels a little less painful. I don't understand the second world. Maybe the heroine cannot embody the original ambition and nagging. She longs for the right of the four families to be in power, and she also hates it. Why are they the Celestial Dragons and the protagonists, but she is just a vicious female supporting role after working so hard! In fact, it feels like having these emotions is playing with their bodies and emotions, and in the end they lose their identity and rights and are abandoned. That is really refreshing. Give it a five-star rating. It's really refreshing to not have female rivalry, and it's also very normal. I really like the author's description of female friendships.

I like the volume of Oiran Bai Yueguang the best! The emotions and actions described are very detailed, and the strengths and uniqueness of each person are written out very delicately. This volume is the one I can most relate to. The heroine has a very gentle mood in this world. Only when she gets extra points will she realize that it is a task. I am more involved than the heroine. The writing is very delicate. I like it very much. ˗ˋˏᰔ I even greedily want the heroine to spend her life peacefully like this, watching the world slowly get better, witnessing the changes, and then go to the next world.

Yeah, yeah, I heard it looks good [salute][salute] Before reading, please be sure to read the end of the first chapter and the demining of the words. Thank you for all the encounters (sympathy) [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Everyone, please read this book to me! , I feel that the first world is well written, but because the heroine's first world is not immersive, there is not a great sense of immersion, but it is also very interesting to watch. The most important thing is that the courtesan and the prime minister in the third world are completely divine. It is so well written, my God, it is really beautiful. I go, pull it, and then it is ambiguous. These plots are very well written, and the heroine's world view, values, the whole Worldline is very well written. Don't worry, the rating is a bit low. This is because too few people have read it. This book has just been published, but it is really good. Anyway, I highly recommend it! Highly recommended!

It's good. I finally found this White Moonlight article on Tomato. It's the ending. But I don't understand it. It's the ending. Why did Qi An use such a decisive method to kill the emperor? And why did he hate the bamboo horse? Didn't he have a good relationship with the bamboo horse? I always thought that because of other be, it turned out that both of them died [exploration][exploration][exploration]

The heroine in the first world is less immersive and more disengaged. In the following world, the heroine gradually became immersed and put herself into the emotions of the original owner. This is good and bad. I think it is better for the heroine to be ruthless and keep doing the tasks. Otherwise, sometimes she may get to the point where she cannot escape. However, there are also readers who prefer a more immersive experience. There is no competition between girls, the heroine is very good to girls. Words such as "youth" and "boy" were well received. Moreover, the author of Lei Diansha has made it clear. For example, there will be occasional "torture" to the protagonist (actually, I think it's okay, not too abusive), but in fact, the protagonist's method of completing the task is what she expected. Just think of these as some techniques for going to work. There must be techniques for strategies and other things. As long as the protagonist always controls the rhythm, I think occasionally showing weakness and embarrassment is just a tactic. There may be some abuse of men, but this is the mission. The heroine is the first protagonist, which is very cool. The author will read the comments carefully, and often when I click on a comment, there will be a sign that the author has liked it. In fact, there were some foreshadowings in the first world that were not clearly written, but the author later completed them, and I feel that I have been absorbing the opinions of readers and making progress. The second world does have the problem that the author mentioned that the modern world has an old-fashioned tone, but sometimes it is quite funny to watch. The modern world that follows does not have this problem. The author is really making rapid progress! ! Very good at listening to opinions. I hope the author gets better and better and this book can be seen by more people! Currently, my favorite person who has an emotional entanglement with the heroine is the Prime Minister. He is really well supported and there is nothing wrong with his various behaviors. He figured out his feelings and fell in love immediately. Finally, there are many people who think deeply about the type of character who has an emotional entanglement with the heroine. Maybe the type can be enriched, such as a happy and cheerful puppy (a similar one has appeared before), a coquettish, vying and vying man who wants to be a "love-making man"?

I like the world of Oiran the most ~ the characters are well-developed and each character is very three-dimensional, especially the heroine! (The restraint and sadness of the gentle courtesan are expressed very well. It is the image of my goddess!) I kind of like the pairing of the original heroine and the heroine, especially the original heroine later became the queen! The heroine is Zhen Bai Yueguang ~ I want to see the story of the rebirth of all the members (seeing the original heroine fight and fight for each other, and the other people's faces are shameful, it feels good to think about it ~ Of course I also like this kind of regretful one) As for Feng Xubai's love, just as the author said, he is very capable, so I think it's okay for the heroine to marry him, and I feel very happy. I like the interaction between the two of them and the heroine the most!

It's a super good-looking story about fast-traveling. The first world is very attractive. Now I'm going to read the second world. I hope the author can update the text non-stop. I always believe in my vision. The data of this book will definitely explode. It's super good-looking.

I really like this book, and now I am afraid to read it all at once. I love the heroine Qi'an so much, she is sober and gentle, she completely touched me. The author's writing is super good. I can really understand why others fall in love with the heroine Bai Yueguang, because no one can't fall in love with Qi'an, and I am completely in love with Qi'an. Another thing is that this book is completely female-oriented. No one can force Qi'an. Qi'an can only do what he wants to do. I really love this, and it's rare. I really hate those novels that torture female protagonists in the name of chasing their wives in the crematorium, and I even hate novels that torture women. I felt sick after reading them. There are also many heart-throb novels in which the heroines are loved but are snatched away by men. Reading them really made me feel uncomfortable and disgusting. I don't know if any sisters can understand this disgusting thing. So I was really touched when I saw this book written by the author. I love praying for death and this kind of female standard. I hope the author can keep writing [love] [love] [love]

It's okay, but the emotional line is quite average, and I fell in love with it out of nowhere. . But at least there aren't too many holes in the plot, so I barely give it four stars.

This book is really beautifully written. The emotional confrontation between everyone is fierce and delicate, and the plot is also very ups and downs. It is very refreshing to read (really give it a thumbs up). This Qi'an has such clear goals and methods. Of course, some of the very gentle and delicate emotions in the book are also very heartwarming. Whether it is Mo Lan and Lu Miaochun, or Xi Zhi and Gu Yu, they are all very, very beautiful female characters (I am so moved [send my heart])

I feel that the previous worlds are very, very well written and very immersive. Every time I read them, I feel heartbroken [I almost cry]. I feel like in the campus novel, should their age be raised a little bit? I always feel that it's a bit weird to watch the heroine and the hero kiss when they are in their first year of high school. Moreover, I feel that in this world, there are not many plots. I feel that a lot of them are written about the heroine's chicken soup for the soul. I feel that it is not as interesting as the previous few worlds. Of course, it may be because I haven't finished it yet. Anyway, I really like this book [Adoration]

Alas, after watching the first episode of Small World, I wrote a review with tears in my eyes. I walked through the story semi-immersively from the perspective of the heroine. It was so uncomfortable that my heart and liver ached. The portrayal of the cannon fodder, both the male and female protagonists, and the supporting characters are all three-dimensional. There is no simple distinction between good and bad. The writing is delicate. Emotionally... It's hard to feel relieved. At the beginning, I thought that I deserved to be tortured by this dank and paranoid king. After reading: Ah Chen is certainly wrong, but I feel sorry for him. The abuse made my heart ache [I almost cried][I almost cried] And the poor gentle male protagonist Yun Lian lost his love and died alone.

Qi'an is the real Bai Yueguang🥰I also really feel the author's care for this work, for Qi'an, and for each character. I hope that my wife can always write according to her own wishes! I will always support my wife~

It's so beautiful😭Especially the world of Oiran, the sense of immersion is very strong, and the descriptions are also very delicate. I think the author must have the correct outlook on life to write such three-dimensional characters. The female characters are also very good [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's so uncomfortable. Can we make a healthy extra story about Zhu Ma's world? I really like this Zhu Ma so much [Send my heart][Send my heart] The heroine in Da Da's novel is also super charming [Adoration]

Amazing everyone! The BE setting makes the whole story more tense.

It's okay, it's just that I'm a little crying and a little bit regretful. I'll continue to update...

No, the author got mad and forgot about love as soon as he wrote the story. The heroine is so beautiful, Bai Yueguang in the true sense. The writing is very sour and immersive. Sometimes tears will flow down inexplicably while watching it. I feel for every sincere emotion in the story. When you meet such a person in your life, How could I forget it? The heroine is really sad for the people in the story. Sometimes I really sigh at her tenderness. Her emotions are so delicate. The author really loves the characters you write. It's amazing. The sour love-hate despair is so good. I will always surrender to the charm of the strong heroine with a gentle core.

Very, very beautiful! The character of the heroine particularly touched me. It is not a rigid heartthrob setting. Readers can really feel the charm of the heroine from the author's writing! It is human nature to fall in love with Qi'an. Moreover, the emotional line is delicate and gentle, and it is not a bad routine. When the heroine is conquering the task target step by step, she is also conquering me outside the screen! The author writes really well, I hope he can keep writing more!

It's not mine. The introduction is clear but there are still some parts that cannot be given five stars for this reason. I only watched three worlds. The one that impressed me the most was the world of the Oiran. The heroine was so beautiful. Instead, she gave me the attributes of a tool person in a bright-moon world. It disturbed a lot and left me with countless regrets. The author's writing is very delicate and good.

Very nice! Is it the chosen ancient sour holy body? It made me sad to watch it. PS I like to watch ancient movies, so I skipped it and watched it. I burst into tears when I watched it. In terms of concept, the heroine gave me the feeling of Bai Yueguang. I strongly recommend the third one. She seems to be ruthless and lifeless. It is really good to watch. The plot of each person is also handled very well, and their characters are also very three-dimensional. And I really like the sour and ambiguous, and the memoirs of my deceased wife! It's my favorite, I've watched it over and over again!

I have read so many fast-travel novels, and this one by the author has the best writing and the best storyline. It also has some quirks. The heroine is also very smart, not like Mary Sue. Why did the series just start? [Crying] I beg the author to update more [adoration][adoration][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The first world I saw was five stars! ! ! There is no female competition and no abuse of women and men. It is highly praised by everyone ~ Lianjun has become everyone's Bai Yueguang [shy] The childhood sweetheart line and the yandere emperor line are both very easy to fight, but who made the emperor go wrong in the beginning? At least being with Lianjun is considered a blessing for you.

The writing is very good (Gu Yan Tian Xuan's writing style), the plot is great, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the emotions are very delicate [Like] I have finished watching the third world in one sitting⦁⩊⦁I don't understand why the rating is so low! Come and see, okay? Although it is BE, it is a logical BE article! (Every bit of abuse is reasonable) Even though I don't like watching BE, I think it's delicious🤤 (ps: I'm going through it again because of the good article. Wait until I wake up to continue reading. Hehe

Oh my god, sisters, please read it. The author's writing is so delicate, it feels like some big boss came to fry fish with tomatoes, especially in the world of Machiavellian writing, I highly recommend it! I have been reading Tomato for almost ten years, and this skill has really saved my book shortage [almost crying][almost crying]

It's very beautiful. The writing is very delicate and gentle, and the friendship between girls is also well described. There is no female rivalry. The extras are also very interesting and make the characters more full [full]. However, I am still a bit greedy. I also want to watch every solo and extras (I really like Pei's puppy image, but it's a pity that I have no fate)

This strategy is okay, but I don't understand the purpose and reason.

Highly recommend The Third World!!! Feng Xubai is so touching [crying][crying][crying]

The second world is beautiful. The ending of this book can be regarded as a heartthrob without CP. The heroine has a strong personal charm, the author has laid out good foreshadowing, and the supporting characters are also flesh and blood. I'm used to watching romantic dramas with heart-throbs, and this sudden sadistic one really made me feel sad and sad.