After Traveling Through Twelve Years, He Was Summoned by Illya After His Death.

The servant who traveled through the second time, the alien among aliens. Alas, Brother Shen is going to have his dream shattered again [crying] Looking forward to the day when Illya changes her profession to a magical girl.

Loli five stars. The writing is also good. It's just that sometimes it feels too literary and youthful, and it's obvious that it's intended to be sensational, but I still felt a little embarrassed while reading it. For example, in the bedtime story session, I wanted to write about the protagonist's past hardships and ordinary life, I wanted to write about a blacksmith who treated him like a son, and I wanted to write about an ordinary person from another world. But this sense of intention is too obvious. From the protagonist's mouth and speaking in this tone, it is like the protagonist is trying to prove himself and say how ordinary and pitiful he was in the past. My story is also very warm and profound. There is an atmosphere between the lines that is similar to "moaning for no reason" and trying to "move yourself". But no matter what, the excellent writing and the lovely Illya are full of stars! Come on, author, don't cut it or pigeonhole it

The writing was okay, but it was very frustrating and I was beaten throughout the whole process. Also, the author kept emphasizing how ordinary and hard-working the protagonist was, which made me moan for no reason. Apart from these two points, everything else is fine. As for how much money is left after excluding these two points... Overall, I can give a four-star encouragement.

The writing is very good, and Illya is cute. The only small flaw is that the character of the protagonist is still a bit unsure, and he keeps jumping back and forth between the ordinary and the extraordinary (brother, you have already fought with the devil, and you are still ordinary. You have to get a special attack against the devil anyway). In short, it is quite good-looking.

Yes, someone finally wrote a story about Illya as a female protagonist😋 Also, I want to see the knife🥺

Love watching the tsundere little Illya [like] and the Brave Time Travel article

5 Stars! It must be 5 stars. It is not a cool novel, but more like a true story. I saw in the comment area before that the protagonist was not strong enough to crush me and felt aggrieved. Fortunately, I was not persuaded to quit. This book is not the kind of book that is crushing and enjoyable all the way. What I read is the plot. The writing is very good. The interaction between the protagonist and Illya is also great, Loli Sega! (Don't call me)

This is the Fate fanfic that touched me the most. The author nailed the plot, settings, and characters so perfectly. The emotional development between the protagonist and Illya is also very perfect. The relationship between the two develops in daily life and sublimates in choices. This is what I want to see! ! ! ! ! Byakuya's identity as a hero is portrayed extremely well! He integrates responsibility and tenderness into his bones, and casts his commitment and responsibility into his inscriptions. He is a protagonist who brings endless laughter and tears to people [love] [love] [love]

The writing is very good. It's rare to see a single female protagonist named Ilia. It's okay. I like the protagonist's character very much. Although I can already predict the knife, but come on, the author is great. I'll give you points, so hurry up and update it!

It's very honorable. It doesn't have any negative points for me. It's very comfortable to read. The author's update efficiency is so high that I don't even have to think about raising the book. The heroine Illya is really good. Keep up the good work [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] To review, I just saw that the books that Lao Zuo wrote before are all about 20,000 to 300,000 words long. I hope Lao Zuo will not be a eunuch this time. Come on, Lao Zuo [blowing kiss]

I don't know why it has such a high score, but it must be well written. It's just that your description gave me the feeling of cutting off half a sentence to say the next sentence, and then cutting off half a sentence before saying the next sentence. I haven't read much, only one or two.

I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time. I really like the hero-style protagonist of San Guan Zheng. Thank you to the author for writing such a good book. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

There are still too few good Fate fanfics, and this one is really good. It's not a cool novel, it's not brainless, and it respects the original settings without too many personal settings. Except for the slightly OOC personality of Shining that I have seen so far, there is nothing poisonous at all. One small drawback is that there is a lot of repetition in the battle descriptions. Some of these repetitions can be said to be emphasis, but most of them are not. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. After all, not everyone reads the text word for word like me.

As light as water. It's a dialogue style that my friends wouldn't say is good-looking, but I can get immersed in. The visuals are not strong, but the characters are distinct. Two parallel lines, a typical story, and in line with FGO's plot style (highly praised by PPT). The weak image quality is probably my misunderstanding, but it looks pretty good now.

The single female protagonist Illya does not sympathize with Illya, but treats her as a normal girl. The emotional line is well written and not abrupt. The five battles and Mo Yi's line are natural and reasonable. The reasons for Illya's physical improvement are also reasonable. None of the characters currently appearing are OOC. If you like Illya, you can try ദ്ദി (⩌ᴗ⩌). Illya is the cutest in the world🥵

Chapters 2 and 3, when the protagonist was just summoned, were a bit too frustrating and I almost gave up the book, but the rest of it was really interesting. The protagonist is indeed the one who can make Illya happy, and I also like the bedtime story session every night. The restoration of Fate's original character settings is quite good. It's not a cool book but it's a very unique book in the current online book market. The author gives it a thumbs up.

It's good-looking. It has a single heroine, Illya. It's not an invincible novel. The daily interactions between Bai Ye and Illya are also very sweet! [Note] There is a little knife in the back, but it was saved by our great work. It is still highly recommended [Request for more updates] [Request for more updates] [Request more updates]

It's the first time I've seen this type of movie. I was summoned to a different world and the Demon King exploded, and then I was summoned to the moon-shaped world. At least it was interesting [thoughts]

It's very beautiful, but I hope it can be stronger. Regarding the Noble Phantasm, I think it can be improved. It is not the Holy Sword that determines the brave, but the sword used by the brave is called the Holy Sword. Let Brave turn everything in his hand that is similar to the concept of a sword into a Holy Sword, just like the Lionheart King.

After reading, you can see that the protagonist is not a single-faced character, but has a story and a soul. This is not a cool article written by Long Aotian. The protagonist Bai Ye is not a strong man who can crush his opponents, but he has the courage to fight against the devil with a mortal body. The daily and combat plots are also well controlled, making it a masterpiece among fate fanfics. Recommended reading [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The background story of the main character is quite fascinating. I hope more can be revealed. So far, it looks very good. As long as I don't pigeonhole, it will definitely be a masterpiece [Like]

How to say it? It took me so long to read it, and the gift list looks pretty good, which shows that this book still has many advantages, but as a Tomato book, its shortcomings are also obvious. But after reading it, well, as a story, it is still good, and the sense of narrative is still very strong. At least it allowed me to read it. As a Tomato book, it is still passable.

This book is powerful - how do you know that I have not read Fate on purpose... An outsider who is similar to the main character and knows a rough idea of ​​the setting is quite good at accepting it. If you have not read the original work, you will not have dyslexia when reading this. The writing style is smooth and the description is delicate. The disadvantage is that it reads faster, which may also be a problem with my reading speed ()

After reading this book, I felt like I was fed knowledge candy by the author. It was so sweet that I felt so sweet. The five stars are not given by me, but by the pages of the book. The structure is as clear as a navigation app, and the content is so substantial that it can be eaten as breakfast. After reading it, I silently changed "reading blogger" to "knowledge delivery person" to express my imagination. Super beautiful, real spiritual food.

It's not bad. I've read it several times in the recommendation list before, but was dissuaded by the name. I thought it was a very boring and bad article. Then I ran out of books to read, so I came to read this one. It was surprisingly good.

I have read the latest chapter so far (100 chapters) and overall there is nothing wrong with it. It is very rare to find a good fate article on Tomato. The protagonist is well portrayed and the emotional description of Illya is also good. I think the descriptions in the latest chapters are very good. Anyway, keep up the good work [Like][Like][Like] How can I tell people who haven't read this book how good it is? Anyway, if you like Illya, you must read it. It's really cute [laughs] The interaction with Bai Ye is also very sweet.

It feels like only Illya and the male protagonist are exerting their strength, and the others are playing catch-up. However, the previous Holy Grail War is well written and has a lot to watch. I feel that FZ is over here. The subsequent magical girl plot [awkward laugh] If you like it, you can continue reading.

The rhythm of the plot is well controlled, the characters are interesting, and the writing is good. It is a good product worth watching.

The idea is okay, and it can be seen that the author has a framework in mind, but the writing style cannot keep up. Some of the plots are a bit offensive for young people. The protagonist is not portrayed thick enough. Overall, it can be encouraged by five stars (but to interrupt, the protagonist can actually beat Jin Shining in a duel, and he doesn't use EA or open most of them)

Generally speaking, the writing is good. Although the part where the protagonist tells his own story seems a bit disappointing, it is actually okay (mainly because it is a bit awkward to read this kind of plot after reading too many novels of this type). In fact, skipping the story part will not have much impact on the reading. I hope I can continue writing without being a eunuch. [Praise]