Crazy Criticism of the Male Protagonist Who Always Thinks I Want to Die [Infinite]

I was particularly surprised. I accidentally clicked on this book and was attracted by the introduction. I didn't have high expectations, but I was amazed after reading the first copy. Although I haven't finished it yet, this book already deserves five stars from me. The protagonist has long black hair and silver-gray eyes. The author seems to want to become an image with white hair and red eyes (?) I boldly made a wish. Haha, in fact, I want to see it. Every person with a name is well portrayed and full of life. The protagonist is the image of a god in the eyes of everyone. There is no frustrating plot. I enjoyed watching it. And according to a little bit of information revealed in the first copy, the protagonist is probably closely related to the God of Creation, so the protagonist will definitely not always be weak (he will always be very strong in the eyes of others). The author's writing style is also good. Although it still needs to be polished, the first book is still very impressive! I have rarely watched Infinite Streaming, so I don't understand it very well, but I think the author's first copy is very creative and makes people want to read more. It also makes me look forward to reading the second copy. To summarize the cute points of this article: the protagonist has long hair and very good looks with silver-gray eyes. Gong falls in love with the protagonist at first sight (?) Shuang Jie and Shuangqiang. The protagonist is beautiful, handsome and strong in the eyes of others, but in Gong's eyes he is beautiful, handsome, strong and miserable. The protagonist of this book is so controllable and brainless! The author writes very well, Klaas. Come on, come on!

I guarantee that there will be no pitfalls after the completion, please interact more and encourage me~ It's my first time writing and I'm not very proficient. I've been studying the writing styles and techniques of my teachers. This one has already set the tone and I can't change it. The next one will definitely be better! I thought I could continue to revise the article after it was completed, so I applied directly for completion, but it turned out that I couldn't revise it. He said there was a reminder when sending the application. I... (Huh? What is written in gray should not be important. Just click to confirm. Anyway, if it doesn't work then I won't change it.) As a result, nothing can be changed now. I am guilty Orz

How to say it. . The story is good and the plot is exciting. But there were a few places that made me uncomfortable. From the beginning to the middle, almost every chapter appeared: "It's not... But..." This sentence structure made me uncomfortable. Many times it made me feel as if I had read the article many times, and I also wrote about curling up my hands many times. I enjoyed reading it at first, but the sentence patterns described were too similar and I couldn't stand it anymore. But the plot is really good and the subject matter is novel. I hope it gets better and better [Sending my heart]

Well, after reading the first two copies, let me write a book review. First of all, I think the explanation of the title is very good. The setting is not bad, but the author is very repetitive in some places, and the sentence structure really keeps saying "It's not... But..." It's a bit exhausting. The writing needs to be improved a little more, come on boss! Then the first copy was fine, but the second copy was a bit confusing? I don't know how to describe it, and I don't really write book reviews. The above are just my thoughts. Originally, I really thought this book would only be rated two or three stars at the moment, but I thought I would encourage the author. If the setting is well written, it will definitely be good to read. Again, come on, boss! I prefer to stock up on books, and I will probably finish the third copy before reading it. I'll see if I want to change the book review then. By the way, this author is very active and cute. The little theater is also cute [full]

It's pretty good... Mark it up. The writing is quite green. It's probably the first time I've written an article. I'm a bit young and it makes listening a bit uncomfortable. There are too many adjectives and repeated descriptions. After listening to it for a long time, I kept wandering around in one scene and one action. Other than that, it's pretty good.

It's so well written, it's funny from Feng Bao's point of view, but from Ha Jiming's point of view: the person I like has been begging for death, and I want to save him. If I separate from Feng Bao, he will go crazy and die. Feng Bao's identity is not simple, he is very smart, courageous, and dares to try. He is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Feng Bao is always making progress. I like it very much.

It's so well written. It has a light and eerie atmosphere overall. The protagonist is light but realistic. The several copies are very good-looking. It has a kind of psychological horror like faces and layers of fear. Author, please don't cheat me. It's really my first time to see this style of unlimited flow.

It feels like I'm reading a literary work. The character of the protagonist seems to me to be a bit like BKing, but it's the kind of thing where a group of people will come up with ideas if they don't do anything. It's very delicious. The author's level of writing is very advanced. The overall feeling of the second copy is that of depression and dullness, which well reflects the opposite impression of happiness in an amusement park. After all, it's a horror copy, so it can't be fun. And the main character Gong (fuck, I forgot his name) gave me the feeling of a puppy (?) Well, maybe it's a combination of a dank male ghost and a puppy. Attack is like a loyal puppy following Shou, with little protection, and keeping Shou alive at all costs😍 Overall, it is very advanced, the author is awesome Klass👅 Although I haven't finished this book yet, but I am already looking forward to the second one, so when will I start writing the second one? 🧐

I was listening to the book while playing different colors in Rock Kingdom, and I felt that the frequency of "not" and "but" was a bit too high. I felt tired of hearing that sentence alone, not because of xxx but because of xxx. And in the first book, just when I met someone who looked exactly like me, there were already many people who said, "No, it's not him, it's someone who looks exactly like him." Then he used the template again. There are also a lot of repeated sentences. When I heard the later part, I thought it was repeated, or maybe it was a listening bug and I heard the earlier part again.

Each word of this novel is exquisite, each sentence is sonorous, the conception is unique, and the intention is lofty. The plot is ups and downs, exciting, and the characters are vivid and ready to come out. The writing is brilliant, the writing is brilliant, the presentation is clever, and the conclusion is perfect. The book is unforgettable when you read it, it has a long aftertaste and profound meaning. It can be called a masterpiece, and it is well deserved. It is astonishing and unique, and it is breathtaking. You can't put it down, read it a hundred times, and have endless aftertaste!

I only watched the first copy. How should I put it? The setting is actually very novel, such as the modification of the cognitive level, and the character design is actually very delicious [Send my heart] [Send my heart] But the writing style is very green. In addition to the repetition of many sentence types, I think there is another problem. There is too little interaction between the characters. It feels like it is a one-man show of the protagonist. There is a kind of situation where we can only see the protagonist on the stage, and the others are all black. This kind of thing. In the later stages of this dungeon, there was no sense of presence. It felt like nothing had been done, and there was no sense of presence of other people. In fact, can you add some more reactions from others? [Thinking] Oh, also, the relationship between the protagonists is very blunt. In fact, if you don't like the process of slowly falling in love, I think it is better to add a similar setting that it is not the first time they meet. Then the novel is written from here, but the story between the protagonists has already begun. In the treatment of the novel, it is enough to explain the previous things a little bit. In this way, you can not only quickly see the protagonists together, but also solve the emotional problems [exploration] Contains spoilers: Also, logically, the protagonist has realized that his answer will be the correct answer no matter what, so I personally feel that this cannot be used as a basis for inferring the truth of the dungeon, but the protagonist still uses the "correctness" given by the dungeon as the inference point [staring]. Although I can understand that this setting is for better disification, I still feel weird [full] emmmm, the above are all personal opinions, but it is the author's first book, and unlimited streaming is already difficult to write, and with the addition of Dihua, the difficulty rises straight up, which is also OK. Moreover, in fact, the character design and plot settings are quite interesting. I hope the author will write better and better [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I feel that the author has written very well, the plot is very well conceived, and he is very delicate when writing about the protagonist's personal psychology. I feel that the author is very suitable for writing about passionate love relationships, and is not very good at writing about the feeling of youth at the beginning (os: Gong's emotions enter the state a bit quickly, personal thoughts [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]) and it is really good to lead the brain to the cognitive level [send heart] Come on [send heart]

Well written, but eh. Author, I think your narrative is a little too fast, or a little too messy. There are so many descriptions that people can't clearly see the essence of the copy. I have finished reading these 30 chapters. The main problem is that it appears in the second copy. This phenomenon is understandable for new authors. I will change it appropriately later (˵>ㅿ<˵)♡ However, I still like this article very much. The writing is in line with my wishes ꜀(˘꒳˘ ꜀) Come on, author, I will always support you ᗴ͜ꩰ(՞⸝⸝o̴̶̷̥᷅ ̫ o̴̶̷᷄⸝⸝՞) ꩰ՜ᗱ

I haven't finished reading it, but I can't stand it anymore and want to leave a comment. The author is Not... But... The king It's not... It's not... It's... The king Yes... No... King dash king Take two steps to see a similar sentence pattern The writing is a bit awkward, but the content is still readable. I'll take a closer look. I want to deeply repent, I shouldn't have posted this comment I was devastated. After posting this comment, the sentence structure of "not but" kept lingering in my mind, causing my focus of reading to shift from the content itself to counting its dashes. Then I skipped the main text to watch the extras, and looked ahead to see the writing behind it. The good news is no more Bad News I can't see paragraphs of more than three lines. Writing has evolved to the point where a line of egrets ascends to the sky I no longer want to try to watch it, although it is rare to encounter a subject that I like (speaking of this, the two protagonists in the early stage of the dungeon walked a little too much on the single-plank bridge, and the only person who can pretend to be Dihua is Gong).

I've been under a lot of pressure recently. This book helped me relax. I like it very much. Although not many people have read it, I think it's quite interesting. If you can add a little more depth, it will be more advanced. I've really become obsessed with Dihua Liu recently, okay?

Yes, yes, although it is the author's first book, it is generally good. However, because it is a new book, the problems in language expression are easy to see. For example, the author often uses turning words such as not but or not is. If you are reading, the problem is not really big. But it becomes a big problem when listening because there are many similar words in one article. These words appear very frequently in chapters 20 to 30, so they will greatly affect the listening experience. But it's already pretty good for a novice to write like this.

It's not bad. I've been out of books for a long time. After reading this book, I feel like I can read on. It feels good, but the character creation seems a bit unclear, but it's really delicious.

It has a youthful spirit and is very cute. Some parts are a bit embarrassing. I don't know why. The teacher can try to practice the description of the characters, such as how to write a strong person. Dihua is more difficult to write. It's great that the teacher can write like this.

It's very interesting. I want to ask the author. The protagonist is one of the fragments. Will he eventually become a complete God of Creation?

After reading through the comments, I felt like everyone pointed out what I wanted to say, so I decided not to repeat it again. I feel that the setting is quite interesting, but I am also a book listener, and it is really uncomfortable that I can't listen to it anymore. I saw that the author said he would revise the article, so I gave it a five-star rating and will come back to it after a while. Come on ˃w˂

Looks good! ! ! Like it very much! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

More primitive, more ancient appears too many times. Reduce it a little "Instead, there is a small, glowing light spot like a firefly." I think it would be better to reduce the adjectives "Instead, there is a light spot like a firefly." This would be better. You can know what he looks like by writing "like a firefly". "Small and glowing" are meaningless and cumbersome. There are also too many "of" and "like" in other fragments, making it very verbose to read. Just delete the sentence "step by step, like stepping on their heartbeats"

The plot of this book is very novel. It is the first time that the author has written like this. I think he has carefully polished the work, and I feel that basically every review has been answered, which shows that he is very serious [Like]

An alien actor who is becoming a god, a true believer who blasphemes God

The writing is pretty good. I don't think it's the first time I've found a treasure.

It's tied. It's pretty good but there are a lot of repetitions... I feel like some chapters end too quickly and some chapters end too slowly.

It's very delicious, that's how good it is!

The author's writing style is very good, and the inner profile of the protagonist is also very smooth (good-looking

It's okay, but I can't understand it a bit

Oh, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, why are you so cute?