After Rebirth, Childhood Sweethearts with Bai Yueguang's Daughter?

It can be seen that the author's writing skills really need to be improved. The development of the story often conflicts with the setting, the emotional description is not obvious, and there is basically no psychological activity. There is no side description to enrich the characters, and there is no background expansion to highlight the main line. Most of them are narrated in one line: cause, process and result, which makes it a bit awkward to read. However, I have to say that the author's imagination is really good. The dialogue between the characters is simple but the emotions are shown very profoundly. The events lack details but the overall description is in place, which leaves a lot of room for imagination. Nian'an's misfortune is objective, Chen Mo's companionship is silent, and the feelings of the male and female protagonists are pure, natural and direct. Setting aside, it is a perfect masterpiece of pure love [like] Not giving 5 stars is not because the work is not good, it's because the author's writing needs to be improved. At least check it more. Every revision is better than the last one. Come on

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope we can meet again by chance. Because I encountered some unexpected things, which had a greater impact and blow on me, I would like to formally say goodbye to you here. I'm really reluctant to let you go. I'm really happy to get to know you. I came across your book by accident and I feel it is a treasure. After reading this book for so long, the happiness and touch you brought to me are unforgettable, but there is no way, life is like this, full of helplessness and parting. I hope you can always stick to your original intention and keep going. Finally, thank you again for the joy, touch, sadness and anger you have brought to me. Thank you for staying with me these days. The main reason for leaving this time is that I have finished reading it and I am going to read something else. I will come back tomorrow and remember to read more chapters. [Sinister smile]

It's not easy to write a book, so I'll give it five stars first. This is opening up a new track. The number of words is currently too few and the plot has not yet been developed. I hope the author can stop writing the story and allow it to be perverted and have a harem. However, betrayal is betrayal, and killing is killing. It does not violate these two points. I will update this book every day. Another point is that the conversation feels like a human-machine, cold and without any warmth, as if I saw two expressionless people having a conversation, without any sense of vividness, like Gu Long's novel.

The male protagonist died when he was in college and was reborn 5 years later. How did he know these things in his previous life [face covering]

In fact, it's quite good. Putting aside the plot and setting, the portrayal of Qingmei really made me feel some of Qingmei's taste. For example, because two people are together, they have natural habits, and they are familiar with each other, so they can understand the twists and turns of both parties and be infinitely tolerant. Looking back on other childhood stories, in fact, most of the childhood feelings have not been written, and there is no familiarity between the two since childhood. In short, to borrow the words of the male protagonist "It's okay, I feel okay, it's okay anyway" To be honest, I read about this style of writing on Tomato last year. After reading it, the author turned out to be an old author opening a new account.

I want to know the future, where the male protagonist and the female protagonist have a baby, but the male protagonist's ex-wife's expression when she knows the protagonist's past life identity [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs]

Wasn't the protagonist reborn 5 years after his death? But it's not a rebirth. How does the protagonist know about the company's development? I hope the author can explain it more clearly. Earlier I said that the girl was born earlier than the male protagonist. Later I kept saying that the male protagonist is one year older than the female protagonist. I forgot the previous setting. I hope the author can pay attention to the small details, otherwise it will be a drama.

I think the writing is actually quite good. Although the author's writing style may not be that good, the characters and story descriptions are indeed quite perfect. This author is better at writing a good story with not-so-good writing style. I kind of like you now.

Why do I always feel like the author wants to kill me when I read it?

Tiezi, don't stop updating, you haven't avenged yourself [what]

Let me give it 4 stars first. When will I eat meat, I will change it to 5 stars [Blow a kiss]. I will report my eating progress at any time [Cool]

It looks really good. It looks like freshly made. It's fresh.

8-Word summary: The introduction is explosive and the plot is serious.

Okay, more revenge plot

When to attack the base?

This kind of weird literature is quite fun

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

Very novel subject

It's beautiful and the writing is sweet.

It's interesting, come on, author [Like]

Writing is not easy, come on.

When the protagonist goes to college, I feel like I'm in a different high school.

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration], the writing is very good, very touching, the author is great, I hope there will be more chapters

Come on, come on, come on

Hurry up, hurry up, I want to see the protagonist take revenge and go back

The teacher said that there are some loopholes in the logic, but he is still looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It looks okay, I wish I could keep writing.

It's still possible, keep it up, author [upvote][upvote][upvote] The author must work hard, the subject matter is very novel