Earthbound: Two-Faced Ghost, Stay Away From Me!

Generally speaking, the writing style is not awkward and is just right. The review is divided into 2 parts. It is a normal personal opinion and can be deleted if you don't like it. Good points: The writing style is just right and it doesn't feel awkward. The personal setting is reasonable and adds a lot of points of view. The protagonist's personality is obvious. She is kawaii on the surface, but dark on the inside, with psychological drama, super cute, and occasionally silly. It's very cute... Os: I really like cute little girls with dark underbelly. . Just step on my xp accurately! It's not too OOC and the character setting is completely acceptable. Shortage: Too many original plots!! You can read more exercises in other fandom circles, but the author is purely for love and doesn't care too much. Students should focus on their studies and don't have too much mental burden. Hui-senpai's black-faced design is not fully expressed because the article is too short, so you can be more productive in your spare time, okay... ⸝⸝ ᳐ʚ̴̶̷̷ ‧̫ ʚ̴̶̷̷ ᳐⸝⸝ It's purely a personal opinion. I know it's not easy for the author to make money, but I think you can put forward more opinions when reading novels, otherwise the distance between the author and the readers will be too far, right? ૮₍ ˃̵͈᷄ ᎔ ˂̵͈᷅ ₎ა I really like this book. When I read it, I really liked the character of the senior. But there are too few books about this aspect. ૮ O̴̶̷᷄ ·̫ o̴̶̷̥᷅ ა Come on, author, don't put too much burden on your heart and put yourself first!

Nice! It's rare to see a novel with Yuan Hui as the male protagonist in Tomato. The writing is quite good! I just feel that the main plot is a bit slow to advance, Yuan Hui's role is also very small, and there are also very few emotional scenes between the two (to this day, I still feel that Xun and Yuan Hui are not very familiar with each other ●▽●), but the writing is quite good! At least now I feel like I have a more general understanding of Xun's life experience and personality! Please take good care of yourself, don't catch a cold or anything 😘 Also, I hope you can write more, it's still too little, I just finished reading it in one go [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

After reading it, I will briefly summarize the advantages and disadvantages. My personal opinions are for reference only: (*¯¯*) Advantages: ① The writing style is good, and it corresponds to daily narratives. It is not too complicated and there are no parts that are unclear. ②The private settings are well established, such as the wizard, which is a very interesting setting. ③I feel there is basically no OOC. I think the way characters speak and behave like Kooi Ningning Hanako can be done by myself. ④The heroine has a very good character, she has a complicated and mysterious background, and her character is very interesting. ⑤ The duplicity of the male protagonist must be reflected. This is difficult to write. I feel that it is very powerful to write it clearly without making it appear OOC. Disadvantages: ① There are many plots in the original work, which are basically unchanged and only include the heroine of this article. It looks a bit boring. After all, those who come to read the fanfic must have read the original work, so it makes no sense. ②Although it is an otome novel, there are very few emotional lines between the male and female protagonists. The latest Zhang Yuanhui has not appeared a few times. ③The pace is relatively slow, but it depends on what you think. Maybe I prefer something faster. Overall, this is indeed a very good fanfic. I still like it. I hope the author can get better and better ^_^

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression pictures😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God, it is my rose that lights up my dark life and makes my world map meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist in me I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people. Shockingly delicious! 😋

It's great to watch. Omnivorous people are a bit addicted to CP now! It's very lively (updates are a bit slow, but you can wait!), The boss who comes from CP will definitely 👍 (self-titled) Anyway, don't care about these details, go read the book, kids 👍

It's not bad. I have a small suggestion. My wife can write her thoughts into the author's words. Every time I am very anxious to read the subsequent plot, I will skip the thoughts when I see them. It will be easier to read if I put them in the words of the author.

It's a very well-written book, not awkward, and the author would like to thank you for writing it.

Like!!! (OS: Hui is handsome!) Good looking good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good good looking good good looking good good looking good good good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good good looking good (OS: I can't find the adjectives, my language ability melts like yogurt)

Looks good! 🥰[Admiration] The author is awesome 👍👍👍

The author writes well. Please pay attention to your health. Come on!