The Magical Girl with the Contract Is a Bit Strange

It's very interesting and well written, but I've always had some questions: Why do ordinary people dare to deduct wages, reduce benefits, and even develop commercial value after killing monsters for those with superpowers who protect them? Aren't they afraid that they will take on the burden and quit?

Relaxed, everyday, with novel settings, but overall a more classic magical girl type. Judging from the current main plot, there should be no huge ups and downs. As for the emotional line, it seems like there should be multiple heroines in the harem? Will the vest fall off in the future, and the two organizations will directly reconcile and fight against evil? I would like to give some advice (the author has his own rhythm and can be ignored), it might be interesting if Wings of Liberty had a mission: Impossible. The setting of the association is very normal, not so righteous, and very neon. The main plot can definitely be more intense, but it won't work without a civil war between magical girls, such as the protagonist and Ming Yue. If possible, Ming Yue can completely take the route of focusing on girls and being slightly yandere (very potential) to add some tension to the emotional line. Because, whether it is the main line or the emotional line, it does not feel very healing or multi-surgery. To say it is good is ordinary, to say it is ugly is mediocre. It can be seen that the author has written out the tragic past of the members of Wings of Liberty to add some knives, but these settings are already very cliché. The knife should not be described in terms of the past, but in terms of the present and current experience. Oh, it's normal for a magical girl to have a sword. It should be a foreshadowing that Yozakura has the ability to predict things, right? It's like a setting where someone sacrifices himself to protect the protagonist in the future. Well, that's it anyway, I originally wanted to give it four stars, but five stars because of Pure Hundred (well done to the author! It should be Pure Hundred!). Nowadays, magical girl themes are basically changed to 100, and I can't stand changing to 100. Although I also know that some works are changed to 100 to make it easier to pass the review, but I just can't accept it. I will continue to follow this book, and I hope the author can give me some surprises. Oh yes, one more thing! You can divide it into more paragraphs. A lot of text squeezed together looks very tiring. It is best not to exceed three paragraphs.

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on!. ~Meow

(The following views only represent personal opinions) I saw this novel today, and I felt very good at the beginning. It has a relatively innovative world view, and Qiluo's shaping is also pretty good at the beginning. But I don't quite understand it later. In my opinion, the overall tone at the beginning should be to hide yourself and act in a low-key manner. Even if you transform, it should be as infrequent and concealed as possible. Later, he suddenly wrote about how bad the association is, and then introduced the Wings of Freedom. Qiluo actually decided to go see this organization in person to resist the association after being followed by the other members for seven consecutive days (?). The leader of the Wings of Freedom is indeed an older retired magical girl who decided to fight because of the injustice of the association. But what are the other people in the organization doing? Are they fighting purely for the sake of confrontation? In my opinion, this Wings of Freedom is A somewhat inexplicable organization (both the core and the introduction make me feel a little incomprehensible and abrupt. As far as the current content is concerned, I don't think other members of this organization have similar experiences and purposes to the leader), and Qiluo, who wants to keep a low profile and use her identity as a magical girl, actually directly stated that she knew the leader as the manager of a convenience store, and then used her identity as a magical girl to follow the people of Wings of Freedom, and then joined the organization. The story lines of Kurokawa Yuki and Shizuru were suddenly interrupted after the appearance of Wings of Freedom. Later, the content related to them probably said that they would have conflicts with them after joining this organization? In general, in my opinion, the sudden appearance of Wings of Freedom interrupts the main story in an abrupt way, causing the content of what I think are the more important characters (Yuki Kurokawa, Shizuru) to be suddenly disconnected? At the same time, there are some contradictions with the preliminary shaping of the protagonist's character in the early stages of the novel and the foreshadowing of the content mentioned in the introduction, making it feel a bit disconnected when reading. I think this novel still has its own characteristics (this is the first time I write such a long review for a novel [Blowing Kiss]), and I will continue to read it. I give it four stars to show my support. I hope the author will continue to write better and better (if I can persist in reading later, I will change it to five stars [Blowing Kiss])

The emotional scenes are really good, not awkward, not messy, polite and respectful. The protagonist is a particularly good person and smart, and the author's emotional descriptions are really delicate. In fact, I didn't feel a stomachache at all. The writing of Shura Field was not vulgar, on the contrary, it was very interesting. The pace is slow, and it's not the kind of story where emotions develop quickly. I like it to be a bit slower. However, the description of the worldview is somewhat lacking. At present, it is still dominated by magical girls, and the boss has not yet appeared. Just a little bit, of course, I think could add a little bit to it. Overall, it looks great, and it shouldn't have such a low score. Personally, I think it's possible to get 9.4 (Provided it lands smoothly). Come on, author, I am very optimistic about you.

It seems to be a pure love structure. The protagonist is kind-hearted and intelligent, and will not panic or get confused when facing most things. Almost all the characters develop around the protagonist Qiluo, which is related to Qiluo's serious attitude towards everyone. Generally speaking, it is the scope of daily literature. Except for the eye of terminal in the sky with the sign of death, it is basically a stable life for everyone. This book is very delicious (≧∇≦)ﾉ

The characters stand out and the dialogues are interesting. At present, there is no real sense of the main plot, it is more like daily life. Of course, there seem to be a lot of characters, and I am worried that there may be uneven roles in the later stage, causing some characters to become roadside problems. I hope the author has prepared a plot allocation plan.

It's good-looking, it's the writing style that I like very much, but I feel like the first half is more in line with my liking, but it's still good-looking. And how does the author plan to deal with the relationship between several people? (｡･ω･｡)

Is the main plot considered going home? But I still don't know how I came to this other world, and I don't know how to go back. I just have to survive and work part-time (.) At present, there should be 4 magical girls in contact (Snow, Moon, Tachibana, and Warbler), and there are still a few whose names are only known but not seen. The one who is developing the fastest should be Yuki. She is a working magical girl. She has a spirit bond. She is also a classmate and friend (with a favorable impression) and is about to meet her parents (referring to her sister). Although Yue is also a working magical girl, she is not on the same level and has much less contact, and her magical girl posture was also rejected (poor). Tachibana and Tachibana are both in Wings of Freedom. Tachibana will probably return to being a magical girl in the later stage and make a contract again. The relationship will be better. Yingying's efficiency is really beyond the standard. First, she relies on magic to wait for get off work, and then follows her around every day like a puppy girl. It feels like she has to catch up with Xue quickly, and the latecomers have to fight for it.

It's very interesting. The protagonist is a being who can be my mother.

So pretty. . . In the early stage, it was more routine, and now I should start pushing the main story. I am really looking forward to the following plots [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more]

Personally, I think it's a good book with a light-hearted, everyday feel. The plot is well connected and it doesn't make me feel stiff. If I don't go too far in the setting, there won't be any big flaws. But it's true that every relationship is love at first sight (? Although I also like it very much. I also like the character of the protagonist very much. In the era of time travel/rebirth in Persimmon and the character of the protagonist whose normal personality is to yell, it is still rare for a protagonist to be relatively rational. (Personally think There are very few books that I can read on Tomato. The only drawback is that they are serialized. I like it very much, please support the author

What are [ordinary] and [natural]? 👋I have a ruler in my hand📏 But I don't know the measurement at all😮‍💨 Breathing rises and falls with uneasiness😰 👐I was helpless and could only stand there🧍 😳Clumsy and ineffective😿 🏃I always run away from pain🤕 📒Wandering between real notebooks to soothe yourself☺️ Ah why is it so difficult to live in this world😫 ⤴️However, however⤵️ All this, everything is me 😉 Hesitating😕 It's me who's sobbing😢 Hold everything😄, all joys and sorrows😭 in your arms🤗 Let's take a little sleep 😴 😣Fly away the pain and pain🪽 In order not to let sadness take away everything from me I will stand on my side🧍‍♀️ 🙈On this road with no end in sight🔚 💤Even if you take a short break🕐 👉There will be no one to blame🤬

I want to see Sister Rin transform into a magical girl [shy][shy][shy] It feels delicious [punch out] [punch out] (The author can be satisfied, (I'm looking forward to it) if you have your own outline, you can follow your own ideas) To change the rhetoric, if the author thinks it can be adopted and written, he can add settings if he likes it (just follow your own ideas!!! Author, the writing is very beautiful~) [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] It feels a bit presumptuous [I'm about to cry]

It's good-looking, the characters are three-dimensional, and there are no surprises so far. It mainly describes the daily life of the protagonist and the flowers. The protagonist is a lazy, hard-spoken and soft-hearted little tsundere sister (but not suitable for being a mother). You are welcome to try it.

How to say it? It can be seen that the author does have literary skills. I feel that the style of the novel is a bit light. It is good to read, but the front part is indeed a bit too bland, and the emotional line is pushed very slowly, but overall it is still good to read. Five stars [love]

Yes, our protagonist plus his own 3 vests, each vest can provoke more than 2 people. I saw that this place has become completely chaotic [crying] [crying] [crying] Well written [crying] [crying] [crying]

At first, I thought I wanted to portray the association as a villain. After writing this, I seem to have given up on this setting. He even generously let the protagonist join the association. What I write next is just pure daily nonsense and cuteness. Without dwelling on the details, the first 200,000 words of this book are very exciting. The range of 25w-43w has become a daily article The daily writing is not as good as the previous ones, but it's still okay. Those who can accept some book-eating settings can give it a try.

The only feeling, the only ice, please give me another chapter [crying]

It's so beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [angry] [angry] really beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [anger] [anger] really beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [angry] [anger] really good-looking [admiration] [love] Admiration] reminder [anger] [anger] so beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [anger] [anger] really beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [anger] [anger] really beautiful [admiration] [admiration] reminder [anger] [anger]

So far, it looks like it's all about daily life and Hidden Horse Armor. I haven't updated the main story yet. Hidden Horse Armor and the heroine's straight daughter are very attractive and the descriptions are very delicate. The scores for Ten Thousand Female Queens are definitely low at the moment. The reading experience is very good.

I like this kind of article. Everyone is a good person. I hope everything ends well and there will be no knife.

Brother, just one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. Brother, just one more chapter. I'll never touch it again. Please. Brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't stand it anymore. Brother, I'm tossing and turning now. Brother, I'm begging you. Just one more chapter. Brother, please add one more chapter. I'm about to die. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants on me. Climbing, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Please, bro, just update, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, bro, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I can't sleep now. I beg you, bro. Just one more chapter. I can't do it anymore. Please, bro, I can't stand it. I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep. Brother, please update another chapter! ! ! !

The protagonist is really good at flirting It's still the kind of flirting that doesn't take it lightly or seriously and you don't even know about it. Also take special care of others in your actions Looking forward to the day when the vest will be cosplayed (*^o^*)

It looks great. The author can add more action descriptions and so on to make it more natural.

I like this book very much. All the characters in it are perfectly created and the plot is very interesting. However, it always gives me the feeling that the protagonist will be gouged to death after his vest falls off [laughing evilly].

It's okay, but I have a question. Is the protagonist's magic power a bit too little? (I've only seen Chapter 12 so far)

I will give you the most direct, the truth, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most painful point, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the most The least sensational, the least nonsense, the least oblique, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least long-winded, the least procrastinated, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most honest answer. This is very good.

It's a very good article. It's mainly about emotions at the moment, but it doesn't have the refinement of ordinary emotional articles. It's a kind of restrained drunkenness, sweet but not greasy. I usually don't read this type of article, but this one gave me a good feeling.

After watching it for a while, I wanted to know when the vest will be removed.