Morgan Becomes Shirou, but Everyone Around Him Is Normal

Still very good. Sure enough, Morgan Shirou's strength is still online. I still suggest that the author allows Shirou's gender to be changed at will, which should be more fun. In terms of plot, it's really hard to see Morgan with such a good character.

The book and the subject matter are both good, but it always gave me a very bland feeling. Jin Shining killed Sakura, even though she could be resurrected. But later on, I felt that when I was dealing with Jin Shining Shining, my mood was a little too dull. I thought I would just go up and break his elbow, and then hit him in the face with the Noble Phantasm.

Children, run quickly. This is Ben helping her.

The subject matter is very novel, and there are no big problems at first glance. The first three pictures do not make people feel discouraged, and the content is quite interesting and will not make readers feel embarrassed. However, the writing style can be further strengthened.

Kind of nice to look at. My favorite part is actually the information at the end of almost every chapter. . It feels like a preview of the next chapter. The writing style is quite calm and tranquil, with a relatively large amount of information, but not tiring to read.

The writing style is average, but the victory lies in the choice. It is not like other fan fictions that have crazy and nutritious content (some of the writing is not good and the writing is poor, and the settings are in vain). There is no twists and turns, it is just telling stories, and there are a lot of updates.

I would like to make a suggestion, the normal posture should be all women, the middle posture is too nondescript. But on the contrary, I came up with an idea. In the future, I will gain the power to suppress the fairy transformation, and I can change back temporarily, which will also provide convenience for the normal reproduction.

It was very fun, just like ants walking on the ground. Afterwards, elephants could not be eaten because Lu Bu was sweeping the army with ak. Sun Wukong just ate a banana in the air. Diao Chan was caught by Cao Cao. Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo were together. The author was loved by readers. She got pregnant. In the end, Beria defeated Ultra's father with the ultimate combat instrument and took back Xiao Wu. After Tang San found out, Diga took it away and Gatlin chased him, causing an ant to be trampled to death, triggering an outbreak of the zombie virus. I also finished eating the apple. Fruit, threw apple cores on Mount Everest, angered a giant beast, cooked me a barbecue, and said lions were inedible, so Qin Shihuang ⚧ was at the entrance of the mausoleum, using a sister control and a 61 bomb holder to fight with archaeologists for several years, especially It describes how slimes transformed into Lu Bu and fought for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong Q for hundreds of rounds in the demon war. However, Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have been inevitable. It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. But I'm more concerned about what Horus said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, you're all made of bones, don't show off in front of your Brother Lu. Do you know how Archangel Sauce is made? Ahem, I wish that there will be a female version of Shirou in the end😋

The subject matter is very novel, and it's pretty good so far. The author is working hard! [Full]

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the development of Artoria Pendragon's emotional line is very weird. It's not that Artoria is weird, but Shirou's reaction is weird. Morgan's small reaction can be explained, but why is Artoria treated the same? He was also powerless to fight back, with no resistance at all. The problem is that Shirou has no emotional foreshadowing for Artoria. Is it possible that he saw his own memories in other timelines because of the connection to the root?