One Piece, Unrivaled Combat Power, Ultimate Physical Skills, Fruit Awakening
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Qualified cool writing, fast pace, decisive killing There are still some problems with the details, but it's just that the brain-fresh writing is enjoyable enough. However, what should be reasonable should be as reasonable as possible. It is not necessary to completely restore the original character's personality. At least the villain should have more brains, otherwise the conflict plot will be too unreasonable and easy to play out.
It's a good pirate fanfic. It's strong but not overwhelming. Most importantly, I saw it written about the navy again. But can the author check the information? There are many mistakes. For example, the Thunder Fruit is in Bika, not the Golden Land.
It's pretty good. Some minor flaws are acceptable. Is it really good for Luffy or Sabo Ace to be a marine? Their character is not suitable for the navy. As for the Draconians, the three brothers cannot kill the Draconians when they meet. Especially, Sabo ran away from home because he hates nobles.
It's nice to watch, and very suitable to my taste. It kills decisively but not indiscriminately. It recruits female officers without any ink. There is no plot where the world government deliberately disgusts people. The protagonist and the world government are in vain but they have the initiative. Only two updates per day are too few. It is better to have ten per day. Give me more
It would look much better without those mind control skills.
Very well written and exciting! The protagonist group has all joined the navy, and the revolutionary army really has no plot at all. Not long after the game starts, the protagonist kills Usopp's father, cuts off the red-haired arm, kills Brother Ming, almost kills Rayleigh, kills the Golden Lion, and kills Blackbeard. There really aren't many pirates left.
Read it at night until the lights go out, and five stars float in the palm of your hand like fireflies✨. The pages of the book turn, the sound of wind passing through the bamboo forest🍃; The words fell to the ground, like the echo of raindrops falling into a deep pool💧. Good books are not noisy, but they quietly awaken the soul. In silence, there is light.
After finishing it, I saw other comments saying it was a nanny story, so I asked. The protagonist is Garp's disciple, and having Luffy become a marine, and bringing the teacher's grandson with him for training is also a nanny story. I have nothing to say.
The number of times the system appears is a little less, and judging from the current performance, it seems that it can't beat Im, and it should be strengthened.
The author writes very well, and I enjoyed reading it. It's a very good book. I hope the author can continue writing.
It's pretty good. It focuses on physical skills, supplemented by fruit abilities. It's not too mindless and reckless. It has clear goals for growth. It's good.
Very good, good luck to the author!
The character design is okay, just don't become Tang San
It's quite good. It took me three or four hours to read it. The author should update it soon [laughs][laughs][laughs]
Not bad, one of the best-looking ones in One Piece
Come on, author, this is very well written. Although it is a bit short, it is very good. I look forward to the subsequent plot.
It's a very interesting book. The protagonist eats the phantom beast fruit and becomes the second dragon in One Piece besides Kaido. The three-color domineering is also very strong. Influenced the three little ones to become marines, they no longer have to regret the death of Ace in the war, and recruited many characters that Haimi liked. I personally highly recommend this novel. I hope the author will work hard and finish it as soon as possible
As soon as he drew out the Supreme Sharp Knife, he was knocked down on the Supreme Stairs by the Supreme Slippers, and fell out of the Supreme Mark. [Laughing awkwardly]
It's quite good-looking and suits my taste, but the rating is so low, just over 6 points.
Beautiful, so exciting 🐶
Cool writing, fast plot, harem
For qualified rations, I don't understand why the score is so low. I think it should be around 7.8/8.3 Normally?
It looks good, but there are too few words. Please update it quickly.
The setting is good, very good, cheers for the author
I feel that this book is very good. Please keep improving the author. I think this book should not only be rated at 6:00, but should be at least 8 points or higher.
Not bad, Chapter 14. Luffy had already eaten the Nika Fruit when he met Ace and the others. Luffy also wanted to be a pirate at that time.
Okay, support me! Well enough
Look! [Angry][angry] It's so delicious! Fighting is fun + naval style, you can check it out
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I caught up with the big army in one day. Author, you haven't updated much.