HP: the Pure-Blooded Daughter of Hogwarts

The heroine is quite cute, a beautiful pure-blooded and arrogant little princess, but there are too many quarrels and the scolding of the heroine made me tired after watching it. Also, when will they take revenge? Blake and James started to complain when they saw the heroine. They wanted to slap the heroine, but they felt helpless across the screen. By the way, is there a relationship between the heroine and her brother? I always feel that this is what it means. The brother and sister are quite cute. I originally thought that the brother did not care about his sister at all.

James here is really annoying, a complete campus bully. Throw feces on the heroine in public. I can't imagine how scary it would be in reality

The Slytherin flavor is too authentic, the princess is here, and the Marauder is terrible from the Slytherin perspective. The heroine's slightly unworldly flavor is really wonderful. Changes are called growth, and unchanged are called Princesses. It's shocking and delicious. Oh, by the way, this book is very new, and the introduction of the book is very short. Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. The female protagonist is a Slytherin genius who is pure-blooded and unconventional. The wizarding blood is supreme. She has a sense of innocence and cruelty. The male protagonist is unknown and slightly charming.

It's so fun to watch. The arrogant brother hiding his sister's control is the best. Can you please arrange a plot for James, a foul-mouthed guy, who can't love you? It's so infuriating [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's pretty good to watch, but as a heroine who is number one in grade, with excellent family background, appearance, and grades, I feel that her leadership and attractiveness are largely not written about. Her leadership skills and attractiveness are directly praised. I feel that some side highlights and descriptions are needed, such as writing from the perspective of suitors or professors. However, I feel that the excellence of the heroine is not actually highlighted. After all, with such a good family background and ability, she will always be sought after by thousands of people.

As far as my personal subjective feeling is concerned, the dialogue on the train in the original book prompted the Marauders to start teasing Snape from the first to the third grade. I was very disgusted with it (if you don't talk about it for more than a few words, you will stay away from me after that, what is the meaning of provocation). At present, James cares about Lily. If James becomes the heroine CP in the future, it will be a disaster... Looking at the comment area, some people support the lion Sirius + James taking the position. Uh-huh, James obviously cares about his original official partner Lily. How to explain that he actually took the position later? I had good feelings when I was young, but it's all in the past tense... I don't like this kind of fanfic

It's very interesting. I found this book today and I read it all in one go. The heroine is a standard pure-blood person. Finally, she is not the kind of character who was born in a pure-blood family and secretly opposes pure-blood ideas (I have always thought that such a character is very unreasonable.) In addition to being an extreme pure-blood, she is quite upright and has a high emotional intelligence. She also gradually began to have her own subjective thoughts after coming into contact with many people. Her thoughts have undergone a process of change. I feel that the author's outline is very clear. It's great to be a heartthrob. Remus does have a lot of scenes, but I feel like he is also an important link between the heroine and the predators to conquer James and Sirius. One minor point that is annoying is that the heroine promised to wait for the opportunity to take revenge and go back to James and the others, but then she seemed to have forgotten it. Now the relationship between James and the heroine can be said to have basically reconciled and they have apologized. It feels like it is impossible to take revenge and go back under this situation. I hope Evan will be fine. I feel like he has been successfully brainwashed by Tom. Although he is not a good person, he is a good brother, so from the perspective of the heroine, I still hope that their family will be fine.

It's super beautiful, and the writing is very immersive. The real Hogwarts will not be biased in one direction. Whether it is Harry Potter or the previous generation, there are happy and gloomy times. I just want the heroine to not get too close to Sievers because she can't stand a sloppy kid.

It's okay. The author wants the heroine to have a good time. They are all female videos. The heroine wants to take revenge and go straight to the big things. And I feel that the heroine's character in this book is the innocent, romantic and cruel beauty. So I have a small opinion. It can make the heroine feel like she is doing something big, and add a little innocence of the heroine. I think it's okay. It's a very satisfying feeling. Okay, okay, the author is great.

Evan doesn't have a CP, he's also sister Bao's roommate. It's so weird, so weird, so weird, so weird, really weird…

Damn it, the heroine is a Slytherin pure-blood, please let her keep it that way, and don't have another plot in the future where she doesn't have a bad feeling towards Muggles and changes her ways. . .

There is a bit of a gap between my brother and my sister, don't do it! I still like this brother and sister very much. I thought there would be some kind of revenge for the first graders who were hit with shit, and even said that they would be taught a lesson, but it turned out to be nothing, and there was a reconciliation later. After suffering such humiliation in public, there was no follow-up. Mei Bao is not even happy to get her hands dirty in herbal medicine class.

It's so good-looking. The character of the protagonist is very cool. He's not just spoiled. What I see is that he grew up with bragging and has absolute self-confidence with his family backing him up. The protagonist doesn't care about or fear other people's opinions and has his own opinions [heartfelt]. As I write this, I can already vaguely see the friction between the pure-blood family and the corrupt thoughts of the girls in the family and the independent opinions of the protagonist. Then we are in the opposite camp with the predators, and there is still a little sense of confrontation. Goddess, you can write according to your own wishes. We really like to read it. By the way, the protagonist is completely a succubus.

Seeing Chapter 109, I only represent my personal thoughts: I think this is a popular story, but I don't know what kind of story it is. I hope there will be no sub-CP and the ending will be all or no CP. If it's cp, there should be the Marauders, Snape, and Rell. As for Evan Malfoy Riddle and the original characters, I don't know. It's possible that cbc will be in the cast, and Barty Jr. Hasn't appeared yet. Snape was more obviously in love with Lily, and Potter showed it a few times. It was hard to define, but they were both attracted to the heroine's appearance. Snape accidentally kissed and danced with the heroine, and it was him who he met during the heroine's vulnerable period (why is it always him! I feel like The heroine is too kind to him, oh, to be honest, I dislike him the least, but he has quite a lot of scenes like this, so I have to endure it). Porter's feelings started to start to like the heroine from the transition from first to second grade (well... He is still a bit young, the specific emotional scenes should start from the fourth grade) As for Potter and Black not being nice to the heroine, Slytherin and Gryffindor have nothing to do with each other, and the heroine is pure-blooded. Without any special circumstances or emotional basis, it's strange that they have a good attitude toward the heroine. Isn't it just this kind of confrontation that Slytherin heroines see? I quite like confrontation. If you are a CP person, more confrontation is good for your physical and mental health. The heroine is not the type who can't fight back or retaliate, but can she strengthen her counterattack? Everything was fine in the past, but the counterattack in the feces and eggs incident was a little light, and they are all waiting for the heroine to punish them. It is best to remember the heroine's revenge, and it will be a big deal in the future. There is nothing wrong with anything else, the author's writing is good, and the content is normal so far. As of Chapter 214, it is suspected (high probability) that a deputy CP will be formed, but I personally cannot accept it, so I quit. If not, please give me a kick later.

It really feels pretty good-looking! I feel it is unique among the novels that generally feature the heroine of the Snake House. I'm also curious about whether there is CP. And then include the heroine's character growth path in the future. I'm curious to see what kind of character she will become in the end. Then I hope the heroine can fight back against James and Sirius quickly. After all, these two are so annoying. .

The heroine is quite good, but she seems to be indifferent to others no matter what they do to her. This does not show that the heroine is noble but appears to be incompetent. I hope she won't be so weak next time. Also, can you please not mention apologizing to Lily in the comment section? Later, maybe as the heroine grows up, she will have similar ideas to Lily and become We are good friends, and they are already in the first year, but they will never accept the heroine's apology. The heroine grew up in such an environment, and it is normal to hate Muggles. In the past, Muggles did kill wizards, which made the heroine really make some mistakes. Do so many people say that Muggles have to apologize? Why do you have to press the heroine's head to apologize? ? ? The female protagonist does not accept the female protagonist bowing her head. There's nothing much to say. After seeing this, I thought the heroine would make some progress, at least become mature and stable, but not now. Just because she has experienced life and death, shouldn't she have a clearer understanding of new words, protect her own life more, and be more mature and stable? Why do I see here now that I only see the heroine getting angry at her brother and her friends? Isn't this still the character of a little girl? Even James is the same. His optimism was reflected in this battle, while the heroine was like a brainless person. She immediately lost her temper at the friends who cared about her, and then started to defend Muggles. And this inexplicable change, did he change from a pure-blood position to a Muggle position just because of the death of that little boy? So what do you do with the initial situation you put the wizard in? So many people died? I think when writing fan fiction, you should at least read all about Hogwarts, such as Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, and why Dumbledore changed sides. You can start writing from the beginning. It can only be said that the heroine's character is a complete mess, and so is Evan's character.

The taste is so good! That's right, Iron-Blooded Slytherin! Super super super beautiful! I'm super looking forward to our eldest lady's counterattack now. James and the others are really annoying here.

It's so pretty! It's so pretty! The author greatly appreciates the update! The heartthrob girl with a strong sense of subjectivity is so strong! If it were an ancestor, I feel like I could really be a Tom CP. Lucius, Remus, Sirius, Regulus, Barty, Brother Fu all laughed.

Can I not use the deputy CP? I don't understand why so many people don't want to read it and why the author doesn't respond. I don't understand what does it mean to keep abusing the heroine?

There are many shortcomings and many likes. The shortcoming is that Blake and the others bullied the heroine before. The heroine obviously said that she would fight back, but she didn't do anything to fight back. Until the few pictures I saw, Blake and the others sincerely apologized to the heroine, and the heroine has completely forgiven them? I can forgive you, but aren't you a noble lady? Why can't you fight back? What I like about it is that the emotional line is really delicious and the heroine is a heartthrob. Except for some moments, the heroine's IQ is online throughout the whole process, and her writing style is also good. If you don't care about the above flaws, you can read it with confidence.

Good-looking is good-looking. But can it have an all ending or an open ending? I don't want to read the sub-CP but the original is fine. I saw that Evan seemed to be having CP. His face stopped blushing, his heart stopped beating, and his body felt a little light. I want to go to practice immortality.

Really well written! ! ! ! ! The writing of "The Predator" is just like the one who came out. I really like the characters of James and Sirius~ Never mind, they have such a bad attitude towards the baby! ! You must train the dog severely in the follow-up. The kind of regret in the later stage, feeling sour and numb, and regretting why you didn't treat her better in the past... I don't care, I don't care. The author must write Shuangsi! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Please, get down on your knees❤️‍🔥😿😿😿😾😾😾

I want to see the heroine play with the Gryffindors like dogs, whether it's love or academic pranks. Alas, I feel like the author wants to change the heroine's thoughts to accept Muggles. If I like to be bad, I will always be bad. There are good people and evil mothers and so on. Hehe [laughing], because this novel I can't read other novels with non-Slytherin female protagonists who are pro-Muggles.

I really liked this book when I first read it. The heroine has a very distinct personality, the characterization is in line with the original work, and the plot is well organized. Many other readers are dissatisfied with the young male protagonists who bullied Alyssa who wanted "revenge" but did not return. I do agree with this a little bit. Although the subsequent protagonists have experienced more and have more bonds, the casual word "revenge" has gradually become dispensable, but it has also become like a joke. The description of the heroine being bullied in the early stage also seems very... In short, I don't quite understand it. It feels like the heroine was bullied in vain? Although it highlights the characters of the young male protagonists. The most unacceptable thing is that a Slytherin who is so smart and wise as the heroine would clearly express to the Slytherin students that she has leaned towards the Muggle position, and even broke with her friends, Evan and Regulus, and suddenly became a princess and fell into a "Muggle" that all Slytherins disdain. Although the heroine has gone through a lot during this period and is gradually leaning towards Muggles, the instant break with a kind of family and friends makes me feel so uncomfortable😭. She can always be a princess who is admired by all the stars, or she can be independent and neutral camp, or even slowly transition from neutral camp to Gryffindor leaning towards Muggles, but she can't fall from Slytherin to Gryffindor in an instant😭, I don't want to see the heroine's baby being spurned by anyone😭😭😭😭

This is the story of a protagonist from a pure-blood family who joins Slytherin and starts a smooth campus life at Hogwarts. The protagonist is an all-rounder and an advocate of pure blood theory, but he will slowly change his attitude in the future. Advantages: The plot is quite interesting, and the characters are in line with the original characters. Everyone does not like the protagonist blindly from the beginning, but they all have their own positions and thoughts, and their attitude changes are also expressed in their thoughts. The characters are not black and white. Everyone has their own struggles and shortcomings of turning a blind eye to certain things because of their good relationship. This is very real and consistent with the original work. Disadvantages: The protagonist's personality is a bit inconsistent, a bit like it was fine-tuned to fit the current scene. Of course, it may be my misunderstanding. Although all directions are very good, I still can't accept the original CP. My aesthetic level is very average, so the above content can only be used as a reference.

Why haven't you taken revenge yet?[Code][code]

Dear author, will there be James in CP later? (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

It looks good, but I want to know if my brother has CP. My heart almost went cold when I saw it...

It looks good, but my brother doesn't want to have CP!

Can my brother form a CP with the heroine? Anyway, they are not biologically related. The Sirius family also has consanguineous marriages. Anyway, I just don't want my brother to fall in love with other girls besides the heroine. @I am really a code god