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In this age of exaggeration, only the master craftsmen with originality still insist on hand-writing novels. I am in tears. Full marks.

The writing and plot are both good, at least in Tomato. There are also controversial points. One is that the protagonist's waistcoat is female, and the other is that he is somewhat tolerant of the People's League. The latter is okay, but the former is more controversial. It mainly depends on whether the author will be ill and have a lot of fun in changing his marriage. Another controversial point is that the protagonist's hostile forces in the game have also appeared, but I personally feel that they are pretty good. It's 100 chapters, and there is currently no content about changing the marriage, but it's just a bit watery. But actually, it's okay. The plot is still advancing. There are not five or six chapters that are all about one thing, which is to feel nourished. In the end, I hope the author will not be a eunuch.

Your interesting interstellar novel. Although it is not Stars in Star Wars, which I often follow to completion (I have only finished about ten books), there are elements of this Stars game. If this novel continues, there is a high probability that I will finish it. Of course, I looked at the author's list of novels. Uh-huh, if a male protagonist appears, I will immediately withdraw.

It's rare to have an interstellar article from a high-dimensional perspective. It's not limited to the Earth and looks at the unlimited expansion of galaxies. The star battle scenes are also very exciting to watch, but it's a pity... It stopped abruptly [crying]

It's good-looking, the author is nb, it's a great product😋The main character is too tight right now, it should be fine after the early stage, right? 🤨 The book review section is amazing too [laughs awkwardly] There are too few, not enough to read🤪

As an interstellar novel, it is actually quite good. There are several major turning points. The first one is that when meeting humans, the attitudes of both parties are generally not a big problem. The main character has always focused on himself and is not a human nanny. After all, the main character is a Gestalt civilization. The second turning point is when the third civilization is inserted into the war. Generally speaking, it is very good. It first states that you need to avoid the large force on the opposite side, but then also gives a solution. The description and plot of the battle on the human side are very good and well drawn. It does not feel like you are just clinging to the protagonist. Human beings have their own strength and are able to resist. I have also read the updated new chapters. The plot of the prisoner is a bit too little. In other words, the one or two highlights are not bad but overall it is not good. However, the protagonist's character is fun. It depends on the development of the prisoner's technology later. If it is purely a drag, it feels like the number of words is water and Samsung, wait and see.

Yes, I personally feel good about it. The protagonist has a self-made human form with no emotional lines. The way he interacts with humans is that humans are attached to the protagonist. Currently, the protagonist is fighting with other forces, and humans are just watching the battle [face covering] [face covering] The forces fighting the protagonist are also from the game the protagonist plays. Some are AI and some are aliens.

It can probably be clearly felt that after the talks with humans, the enthusiasm after two or three wars has obviously dropped. It feels like the author didn't grasp the rhythm well. At the beginning, it was the familiar interior of the solar system and Alpha Centauri next door. As the plot continued to advance, other ship types and other forces were gradually introduced, and then there was constant war. The main reason is that there are too many nouns, and it feels like a destroyer is a destroyer, and a frigate is a frigate (meaning that pure and pure names only increase combat power), which makes it difficult to leave an impression. I feel like the author could pay more attention to this aspect, even though technological upgrades are mentioned casually, and the appearance of two hostile civilizations is also very sudden (it feels like he just wanted to write about an alien country with higher technology than humans, but accidentally discovered the jealous dumplings of humans) But overall it's still very good. The meeting between the protagonist and humans was full of tension and fun. Come on, come on, come on.

The writing is wonderful! The defensive protracted battle using planetary fortifications is well paced. I have never played games like Stellaris, I have only seen some memes and screenshots. I read in the book that there is a technology called a detection array, and if you have it, you can enjoy real-time information on the entire map. Are there any effective coping strategies? In addition, from a human perspective, Titan was very clean and natural before. After the protagonist colonized it, all kinds of alien devils came out to join in the fun, creating a feeling of "Did you lead the devils into the village?" Of course, although this is not the fault of the protagonist, and most people may understand the situation, this kind of voice may still appear. The official treatment is on the one hand. How will the protagonist respond out of humanity? I hope that the following article will include a description of the protagonist's spy robot fighting behind enemy lines to reduce human mortality (although a hundred is just a drop in the bucket) The protagonist who transforms into an omnic but retains human conscience and emotions, and has good intentions towards humans is already very good. Author, please continue to work hard!

I have been reading this novel for so long and have been following up until now. I would like to say a few words about this novel. It can be said that the writing is still very solid. There is no fantasy, or nonsense like supernatural powers, rebirth, etc. The male protagonist has become something like an AI hive mastermind, and he does not kneel down to lick the earth or human beings from the beginning and treat every race equally. It can be said that the overall storyline of the story is complete and solid. Except for the fact that there is not much mention of technology, everything else is very good. The most important thing is that there is no heroine or harem, so it is a relatively good soft science fiction. If you are interested in science fiction novels about the rebirth of a heroine without a harem, you may want to read it.

It's rare to see serious writing about interstellar civilization here on Tomato, and the quality is also very good. It's really good. After reading it, I will click on the author to see if there are any old books. If there are no old books, I will search the author's bookshelf again.

It's really well written, but a little short. Although the portrayal of the protagonist is a bit vague, the writing of the people of Blue Star and the Great Khan is very realistic, and the details of the battle are also described in detail. In short, grass jelly 🌿 Suddenly the eunuch was done.

Very good, non-AI writing, with brains and normal people, not mindless cool writing, with communication, development and confrontation.

It was an unfinished regret that I left the story of Gray Wind blank. It was quite sudden. I kept it for a while with another book that had been updated. When I came back and saw that the book had updated more than 20 chapters, this one was only in the single digits and I had an ominous premonition. Alas, it was caused by high-dimensional force majeure. The perspective and main line of this book were carefully conceived, and it broke away from some clichés and stereotypes. It also gave me some inspiration. Maybe I can consider this theme and design when writing my own novels? Finally, I wish the author a success in his next book, a spring of literary thoughts, and wonderful writing.

It's more interesting than most of the alien novels I've read.

Great, I finally read another interstellar-themed Civilization War article. Come on, author! ʢ˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂˶ʡᶻ

A very imaginative novel, the pace is well controlled and very comfortable to read. This novel is especially suitable for those who have played games such as Civilization and Stellaris, and is about city expansion, development, and technology tree climbing. The sexual transformation content mentioned by some people is completely worth mentioning. Just like when you play a two-dimensional game (similar to Genshin Impact, Ming Chao, etc.), Does it have much to do with you whether the protagonist is male or female? It is just an avatar or spokesperson for you, not to mention that this book does not have any emotional lines. The first volume is about the solar system, with a very detailed introduction to humans, assimilated people, and wanderers. It does not introduce too many civilizations that are very different from humans. In the second volume, Galaxy, I hope the author can use his imagination to describe other civilizations, especially their unique ideologies, social operations, and cultural values ​​that are very different from humans. Finally, let me talk about a small shortcoming. The introduction to interstellar warfare and battleships takes a lot of space, so it is a bit difficult to read.

I loved reading it. I even forgot to rate it as I watched it. [Pause face] The book is very interesting and rigorous. I can even read this book as a semi-popular science book. The author's little knowledge about the universe is very interesting! No kidding, you can really learn something! The core attraction of this book is watching the protagonist's fleet engage in space combat with the enemy. The author writes this aspect in great detail, more detailed than most similar works on Tomato. We can clearly see how the fleet is strategically and tactically deployed, and what the protagonist relies on to win in the end. There are really fewer and fewer books about fleet battles like this. The same type of science fiction books are all about improving personal combat power and cultivating immortals, which is almost boring.

After watching some, I think it's okay. At least it's not Invincible. In terms of plot, there are continuous battles and a sense of urgency. I have a saying, I have read a lot of science and technology articles, and most of them are opened by humans, or by human superpowers, or by the will of the planet. This is the first time I have seen this kind of gray wind. A little bit poisonous. The protagonist is the will of civilization. You say it's okay to be kind to humans. Why do you still judge others based on the moral values ​​of human civilization? The correct operation is not to accept and be a dog? This is a failure. You don't care how many natives he killed, it's useless.

Overall, it looks very good. Although the author's writing style is not top-notch, it's still pretty good. I've read more than 70 chapters so far. It is recommended that the author improve some worldview details [power, technology, history, ancient wars, etc.] Add specific image descriptions [Character appearance (the secretary-general only remembers a blond woman and no other description), ship appearance (the author's current description of the ship's appearance only has certain features, which is a bit abstract. I really can't imagine what this ship should look like)] Add specific time descriptions [for example, how many days will it take, how much time will it take to build a single ship, how many docks are there and how efficient it is, how long the hyperspace channel will take to sail, how long it will take for the fleet to move from one planetary system to another, how many days or months the entire battle or even the war lasted (I feel that this information is not clear from the assimilation in the early stage, so it is recommended to make a war summary)] Especially when I see that in a few days or more than a month, hundreds or even thousands of combat ships with a length of more than 500 meters to more than 1,000 meters can be exploded from the space dock. By analogy, it feels like it takes five days to build an aircraft carrier with a displacement of more than 300,000 tons. This speed of explosion is a bit outrageous. These points are really important! It greatly affects the sense of immersion and substitution! ! ! [Sending Hearts] Add characters and enrich the character image [Although the human government is called the Human Federation, except for the secretary-general, almost all of the current characters are Asian. It is recommended to add foreign characters, buildings named after foreign characters, etc. To enrich the culture and diverse attributes of the Human Federation. Just add a few foreign names to increase the sense of immersion] If the author still has the writing power, he can appropriately describe the personal experiences and behaviors of some characters, as well as the character traits created, etc., To enrich the flesh and blood of the characters and their personalities. I have never played games such as Stellaris. I want to play but I don't have a computer. My personal advice is not to troll meow if you don't like it, but for a science fiction worldview, these data are really important, meow, I hope the author adopts meow! Meow meow meow, ha!

It can be said that I found a treasure in tomatoes. If it was just a simple StarCraft, it might be boring, but the protagonist's Gray Wind clone and the human epileptic reaction of the earth make up for this. It is just that the writing is too slow, and there are definitely not many people watching it at the moment. I am very worried about pigeons.

This novel is written based on Qunxing. It is very beautiful and highly recommended. It is just two chapters a day. The update is as slow as constipation. But this book is handwritten and you can see it, so I can tolerate the slowness [face covering] Speaking of which, I sell Kaiselu, does the author want to buy a few more chapters? [Makes a face] Waiting for this update is really torture, I want to start raising it [face covering]

I have read a lot of books, and this one is one of the few that is satisfying. Both the plot and the portrayal of the protagonist are very good, and the pace is also very comfortable for me. And to be honest, I don't think there is anything toxic about the fact that the protagonist has a female leather sheath. I think it is even more nonsense about changing marriage. Why should we talk about changing marriage in a novel whose main content is about interstellar strategy? Can the earth still marry the moon? However, the author has stated it in advance in the introduction, so he must have certain expectations for this pace. So I don't think I need to worry about any emotional issues at all. Now that we have transformed into a civilization, it is naturally impossible to fall in love anymore. Finally, I hope the author will update it soon.

This is a very good interstellar novel. The author has very good control over the God's perspective. It is set to be another powerful civilization. The overall feeling of this book is between civilizations and civilizations, and between generations. It also uses the objective and God's perspective very reasonably. Except for the hasty ending at the end, there are no shortcomings.

There is no meal replacement in the whole network. In addition to the exciting interstellar war, there is also a link where the protagonist leads the development of the younger brothers as the big brother. It is a particularly good article. I will always remember you [crying]

It looks good, but it's even more uncomfortable when it stops. During this period, I checked every day to see if there was any update. In the first few chapters, I also had ideas for conquering the empire. It's so uncomfortable to have it stop so suddenly, so can you post a general outline and storyline? So it was done hastily. . . . . .

It's a very interesting novel, but it's a pity that it's too late to sink into Simu's life. [Laughing and crying]

A science fiction novel worth reading, the setting is well supplemented, and there are a large number of excellent readers who can interpret other people's questions. It also includes the author's answers, which can solve most of the plot design problems. Plots about human beings are also highly anticipated (reader)

Okay, the more I look at it, the more it looks like Sweeping an Army (the Chinese name of the game was translated 7 years ago, but I forgot 8 years ago) Okay, come on, keep going

The subject matter is really good, I found the right track, and the writing style is basically okay, but the subject matter is really good, so I have to praise you, author. Why is it still connected to humans later on? It's a bit licking, personally I think it's a bit. And are you serious about letting people on earth go to the front lines? It's all gone in one shot, it feels like I'm forcibly giving the scene➕forcibly sensationalizing