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Contains spoilers, read with caution In the first few chapters, Moi was like an empty shell without a soul, but he got better in the later chapters. There are not many plot adaptations, which are reasonable. Moe gave Draco total preference and I loved this bite. The overall pacing is slow, with the real first kiss not happening until chapter 30, and then there are more kisses. It smells so good every time, and I want to see more. The careers of the two people in the ending are also very unexpected, breaking out of the conventional fan routines. Regarding the two-way redemption, my understanding is that Moi redeemed Draco's body, and Draco redeemed Moi's soul, dragging her soul back from those three lives. In addition, I want to kowtow to all Mo (can this be said...) These extras are so delicious, I look forward to more extras😍😍

The whole story doesn't feel very OOC, the logic of all aspects of the plot is very strict, the characters are also great, and the long-lasting love is super delicious! The writing style is also very good, especially when writing letters in the early stages, which makes you laugh every time you read it. Before I saw the war, I read in the comment section that Lao Funa would be an undercover agent in the later stage. At that time, I was still wondering if it would be the same plot again. But when I saw it later, I found that it was not at all. It was very wise. I read this book in one go. Anyway, I give it a super high rating. I don't understand why the popularity is so low [Love] [Love]

The author writes it well, the story is very interesting, and the fateful bond between the heroine and Draco is particularly touching. Breaking out of the conventional fan routines, the idea is novel and very innovative. The scenes in the article, such as battles and confrontations, and life and death, have a strong sense of atmosphere. The fighting and conflict scenes are very exciting, and the plot is full of twists and turns. The character portrayal fits the original character and shows growth and changes, and the emotional portrayal of two-way redemption is delicate and full. A long-time fan of HP, the story is both emotional and innovative, and the plot is full of tension. It's well worth reading!

At the beginning, I felt that the heroine Moira was slightly dead. Maybe it was because the harder she tried in the first two times, the more sad she became. She failed to save the person she wanted to save, and her obsession was very deep. Several times when Draco and I had different opinions about the threesome, we thought they would quarrel, but in the end they didn't, neither pampering nor discouraging, and they just pulled him away every time. The ambiguous interaction between the two people was a good quality, and they later supported each other in front of Voldemort. Owl Diary is super cute, but unfortunately there are relatively few of them. Overall it's relatively bland, with a touch of sadness in the early stages. The extra chapter "Another Possibility" is not so much about BE as it is about hate literature [laughing] And in the last extra chapter, are the two little girls going to be abducted by Potter? Then Draco is a bit miserable hahaha, at least bring him back [Thinking]

Ram! I'm not joking. I think the writing is really good. In fact, I think it's understandable that the story is short because she has come back for the third time. There are some plot points that should be discarded. I just don't know where this child came from. I hope the author can write it more clearly [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It is highly consistent with the original work and incorporates a self-created plot. It reads very harmoniously, and the pace of development is neither urgent nor slow. The characters of Slytherin all have the arrogance of a pure-blood family, but they are not offensive. I think it is very elegant anyway. The heroine's character is also very loving and quiet.

It's so damn good-looking. The only thing is that the heroine cannot save Fred Albus Severus Cedric. This is the only point, but the explanation is acceptable to me and the plot is really, really great

It's well written, but the score is too low. Maybe the author has too many words per chapter and too few chapters, so it took so long to finish the book before giving out the score. It's a great book, and the author's cooking is super fragrant, and the extras are even more enjoyable.

Compared with other fanfics, this book is very detailed in terms of details and is not OOC at all. It also has many descriptions of the details of life in Hogwarts. It is also very warm and heart-warming. I felt soft when I read it. This book is really different. I just read a little bit and praised it. It is really healing. I can't do it anymore...

Very nice! The emotions are expressed naturally. The heroine's time travel cannot change the plot and cannot save the dead. This setting is quite good. The ending is not too idealistic and is very realistic. Whether in the extras or in the main text, family affairs are particularly heartwarming, and the beauty of human kindness is vividly displayed. Moira and Draco have such pure love. They redeem each other and work together to reach the end. They only got together in the sixth grade. They really like the long flow of love! The heroine was particularly emotional when she was working as an undercover agent for Voldemort. The plot developed quickly but the emotions described were very delicate. The story developed very naturally and did not make people feel that it was running out of plot. All in all, this book is highly recommended. I was just about to say that I also wanted to read the story of the new generation, when I clicked on the homepage and found that it was being updated.

Cp Draco he, the heroine has the memories of her previous two lives, and has been trying to save everyone, but force majeure factors have caused her to fail many times. In the first two lives, Draco and the heroine did not have sex. The story begins with the heroine becoming the daughter of Regulus in her third life. This time Draco noticed the heroine from the beginning, and the two of them finally... I won't spoil what happens next. But this article is not a clear article. Come and read it.

Already finished reading! ! The dynamic and tug-of-war between Draco and Moira was so sweet! It's worth reading twice, and the plot is quite smooth, but there is one thing that I think is not well written: I feel that the heroine's feelings for members of the Black family are a bit abrupt. I don't know why the feelings suddenly became so deep. Although the episode about Sirius's death is very sweet, I can't understand why the heroine blames Draco for his uncle's death. After all, the previous article has always said that the heroine is saving everyone, but the heroine is not very sad when some people die. It seems, but the heroine was very sad when Sirius died. Of course, it may be because Sirius was one of the very few people who was saved by the heroine. The heroine cherished him so much that she hated Draco. However, it felt strange that this feeling was not written out. In addition, the question of why the heroine could only save some people was not clearly explained. The first part of the whole story is not as good as the later part. It has a slightly anecdotal feel. It feels like everyone is a bland character. In the middle and later stages, there are emotional conflicts after Moira rises. It is very enjoyable to read hahaha. Of course, the food cooked by the author is still very, very delicious! I like! I hope my opinions can help the author. If there are any mistakes, please criticize~

It's been a long time since I've seen such hearty HP. It's so well written. It doesn't have OOC but it gives them a different life. It's so good to watch it in one sitting [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The first HP novel I read, it's not too good. It's my first HP novel. It's so good. I really like the heroine. Regulus is really hard for me to forgive. It gave him a good ending. I'm so happy. This is my first time to review, because this one is really good. After reading it, I felt very picky. I couldn't read the second HP book. There are too few of the same type. I really like this one.

It exploded! ! ! There are not many changes to the original work, there is a cycle of cause and effect, the pace is neither fast nor slow, some details can be shown, the characters are better constructed, and it is not a long novel that makes people tired.

There is a feeling of flowing water

This is the best cook in our village! ! ! ! ! !

It's so beautiful that it brings tears to my eyes😭It really restores Draco and everyone in HP in my heart

Very good-looking. The first unique female protagonist baby I have seen so far becomes an undercover Death Eater. This impressed me deeply. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

It's beautiful. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Very very very beautiful! ! ! !

The author is great, are you a god?

Very interesting, two-way redemption.

Beautiful, I like it very much

The young master is still so arrogant

So beautiful, so delicious ^o^

The young couple is so sweet

Beautiful, shocking and delicious

Very good, tastes good

Haha, it fits the character very well