She Pretended to Be a Boy for Online Dating and Dumped Her, Only to Discover She Was a Yandere Senior

(First of all, the following content is only my personal opinion and does not contain any insulting views.) As a new author with little experience, this novel is very well written. The content is very compact and people can see the relatively strong emotions at a glance. However, the only drawback is that this book feels very stiff in some places. (I apologize to the author here. In the past, because the author often used the sentence structure of "not, but", because it was very similar to deepseek, I posted a comment saying that the author wrote it with AI without any evidence. After reading it later, I found that it was not the case.) In short, I didn't expect to finish it so quickly. The subject matter and content are very good. I am looking forward to the next work.

The plot is okay, the content is good, and the writing is okay. The writing is very detailed and real, and I really feel for it. Unlike some other yandere novels, I think this one is more realistic. It is good for the content to be a little repetitive, which enhances the feeling, but some places are not suitable for repetition. If there are too many places, it will look very dragging. Yes, but I really like this kind of real writing. Come on.

The writing is very good, qvq. I cried every time I read one, and this one is no exception. It's not very exciting, but the main character's amnesia made me cry. (What a pair of hard-luck mandarin ducks...) It's more daily life, there are not too many irrelevant characters, and the conflicts between the protagonists are well written. It feels like neither of them wants the other to feel uncomfortable and they understand each other. The protagonist's roommate is very benevolent and cares about the protagonist's physical and mental health but does not interfere with the protagonist. I hope we can see her again in the sequel. The inner thoughts of the two protagonists are written very realistically, and the repetitive content enhances the emotion (I personally like this writing method. The ending feels a little rushed? But overall it is very interesting.

The writing is okay, the plot is very compact, it can be seen that the author likes "Norwegian Wood" and it does have a flavor from there. Some details can be optimized. Give it a five-star support. Come on.

How can I put it... The rhythm is really tight and gives people an immersive feeling, but there are too many repetitions in some places and it is also a bit cumbersome. I hope it can be changed.

What the author writes is a bit true... My ex is also like Su Wan, who wants to know everything about me. She always looks up everything about me in places I don't know about, including my parents, high school, university, and classmates. It's normal in the plot of the novel, but as someone who has been there, I felt suffocated. I can also see that the relationship between the two is actually really "healthy". They can express their feelings, establish a comfort zone for both parties, and rely on each other... My ex and I are each other's first loves. The way we deal with love that is too young is just to accommodate each other, and we can't do it, so we are be. I hope Xiao Su Xiaolin has a good life TT

It's okay, author, please give it a try. Some of the plots are too repetitive, hehe. To be honest, I was dizzy while watching it. I thought I was back at the beginning again, hahaha. I am the kind of person who forgets the previous plots after seeing the end, and the author also made me remember it again hehe. But it doesn't matter. In fact, the plot is okay. There are just a few chapters with similar content and verbose dialogue. I hope the author can expand more new plots in the future. And to be honest, as an old man who has read so many yandere stories, this one is one of the most suffocating ones I have read. I even hope that the heroine will leave quickly, hahaha. In other stories, I just feel like closing the dark room as soon as possible. Only in this article, I think the yandere is a bit too scary, that is, he is not just imprisoned in the plot, it is the kind that slowly breaks down your physical and mental defenses bit by bit from the small details in daily life. I think this is the most terrifying. Therefore, it made me sad to watch it, but I also wanted to continue watching it. Damn it T^Tahhhhhhh

Not bad, not bad, but a bit repetitive. I hope the author will write better and better (◦˙▽˙◦)

It's pretty good, but the plot is a bit simple. It's just daily life. It's boring, but it's very real. Only in reality can there be such a yandere, and there's an invisible feeling of suffocation.

As a new writer, this book is very well written. There are no particularly gorgeous rhetorical techniques in the article, but it has a real feeling. It is completely different from other types of articles. You can appreciate it just by reading it. To be honest, some of the content in the article is very good. I feel that the memory recovery and other things later are written very naturally. It is better than other types of articles I have read. I still hope this book will become popular, and the author, please give it a try! Try to become a level 5 writer and write extra stories for us.