[Group portrait/Daily life/Growth of younger generations]
[Original plot/second creation fan/group portrait perspective, non-camera protagonist]
A foreign soul appeared in Rukongai. Like all the wandering souls in Rukongai, he has no memory, but he was born with terrifying spiritual pressure. He seemed to hide many secrets, but never told him.
Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni, the strongest man who brought him back to Seireitei, taught him the techniques of controlling spiritual pressure.
Jiro Chojiro, the most trusted person of Yamamoto Genryusai Shigekuni, was ordered to teach him how to kill the White Ghost.
Sword Demon Yachiryu, I don't know why he taught him sword skills
The first team leads the Death Squadron. Is his determination to join the team consistent with his true intentions?
After that battle, the captain position became vacant. As the second-generation captain, and as the millennium captain, how will he face Bengyu?
Reader comments
I've read nine chapters and it's perfect. The pacing, characters and characteristics are all great. It's refreshing and easy to read. It's very good. If it doesn't work later, I'll change the rating.
Liberation language is embarrassing for picking your toes, and there are also many bad words used. Words like interesting and interesting give people a childish feeling as soon as they appear. If you want to create a cold and powerful character, it is better to look at how the older generation portrayed Yang Jian. It is even better to learn from the poetic description of the bartender in the original work. You have to use the vocabulary of the domineering male protagonist in the sewer. It is really too childish.
There are very few articles about the first-generation captains, and there is no accurate time record. This is a big challenge, and I hope I can persevere.
Okay, the writing is a bit light, maybe because the story hasn't been laid out yet, but you can look forward to it.
I think it's pretty good, I hope the protagonist has more strengthening scenes.
Yes, I like the protagonist's character very much
It seems like I should pay more attention to the male protagonist (TT)
A rare good book among Bleach fans! Why is the protagonist's Zanpakutō Red Higanbana's ability so similar to Ichigo's new swastika ability in Fushin Tan?
Very well written, very nice [like]
Good looking. Love to watch. Update soon.
It's well written, the plot is reasonable, and the pace is normal.
So far, very good. Worth updating
It's good to watch, and the plot I've seen so far is also reasonable.
This is the best Bleach fanfic I have ever seen. Keep up the good work, author teacher.
Is it through the hands of Aizen and the spring water of Ukitake?
It feels like reading the original work, and it's cool to see that the author doesn't intend to beautify Aizen👍
I can't say it's not good-looking, but your author is not meticulous enough, and there are too many mistakes in the plot. You must know that Japan was still in the Heian Period when the protagonist became active!
I've read nine chapters and it's perfect. The pacing, characters and characteristics are all great. It's refreshing and easy to read. It's very good. If it doesn't work later, I'll change the rating. Liberation language is embarrassing for picking your toes, and there are also many bad words used. Words like interesting and interesting give people a childish feeling as soon as they appear. If you want to create a cold and powerful character, it is better to look at how the older generation portrayed Yang Jian. It is even better to learn from the poetic description of the bartender in the original work. You have to use the vocabulary of the domineering male protagonist in the sewer. It is really too childish.
There are very few articles about the first-generation captains, and there is no accurate time record. This is a big challenge, and I hope I can persevere.
Okay, the writing is a bit light, maybe because the story hasn't been laid out yet, but you can look forward to it.
I think it's pretty good, I hope the protagonist has more strengthening scenes.
Yes, I like the protagonist's character very much
It seems like I should pay more attention to the male protagonist (TT)
A rare good book among Bleach fans! Why is the protagonist's Zanpakutō Red Higanbana's ability so similar to Ichigo's new swastika ability in Fushin Tan?
Very well written, very nice [like]
Good looking. Love to watch. Update soon.
It's well written, the plot is reasonable, and the pace is normal.
So far, very good. Worth updating
It's good to watch, and the plot I've seen so far is also reasonable.
This is the best Bleach fanfic I have ever seen. Keep up the good work, author teacher.
Is it through the hands of Aizen and the spring water of Ukitake?
It feels like reading the original work, and it's cool to see that the author doesn't intend to beautify Aizen👍 I can't say it's not good-looking, but your author is not meticulous enough, and there are too many mistakes in the plot. You must know that Japan was still in the Heian Period when the protagonist became active!