Before she was reborn, Su Wanqing hated her senior sister, Shen Yao. Shen Yao targeted her at every turn and hunted her and her lover down. Later, Su Wanqing discovered she had been deceived, and everything ended with the sect destroyed and her senior sister fleeing in defeat. At the execution ground, the dying Shen Yao passed on all her cultivation to Su Wanqing and smiled. “Don’t be so foolish in your next life.”
When Su Wanqing returned to life, she found a small bell on her wrist, hiding the secret her senior sister had never spoken aloud. She vowed to make up for what she owed her, never realizing that her heart had already begun to stir as they drew closer.
A very good article, the daily life of flowing water and smoke, and the main line is clear and neat without any delay. I personally feel that the acceptance and transformation of the senior sister in the early stage was a bit too fast. It might have been better if there were a few more chapters to pave the way for the transition, but there are no flaws. The writing style is definitely the best in Tomato. I feel that the setting is closer to martial arts than fairy tales. When writing sword training, it can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into it.
It's quite good-looking, but it didn't look very good when I read it earlier. The writing method of "not but" and some places were repeated a lot. I hope the author can improve it a lot. At present, the story seems to be very novel and very good-looking ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
In the last life, junior sister had a lover, how far has it developed, are we both clean??? The plot is pretty good
This book has always been about the main plot and not other insignificant things. The plot is light and very comfortable Is this a gourmet novel 🧐
Well, the writing style is very good and the writing is very good. But it's a bit too serious and not lively enough, resulting in few people watching and commenting on it, so just keep it for now.
Good luck, good luck, the writing is super delicate, and the emotions flow smoothly. I write it at this pace. You don't have to rush it. The only drawback is that it's too slow 🤦 🤦
Good looking, I like the rebirth article