Transformers: Survival of the Defective Products

The teacher's writing is very good, and we finally have someone in the Transformers fan circle. [Crying] It's God's gift of food. [Crying] Who knows how much I like to accept the army, but it's painful to search all over the place and find nothing to eat. I just picked up Ling Zheng and read it again last year. I really like Xiaoya, she is smart, clever and kind. Moreover, President Wei during the Megatronus era was also very good, and I look forward to the time when their ideas will diverge in the later period. I feel that according to Xiaoya's character, there should be a lot of collisions with the later Wei Zong period, and Xiaoya should be more inclined to the concept of pillars. Come on, teacher, I will always follow you. Very beautiful, very beautiful [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I am a complete outsider. I was attracted by the introduction, but as soon as I read the main text, I became angry and forgetful. I didn't want to eat or sleep. I just wanted to read it here. Why is Xiaoya so cute! Just like this, I became a psychological committee member, enlightening this and that, especially the emotional line, which led to the best golden nanmu, especially the cognitive difference in the early stage, which is even better! Hehehehe, it is so delicious. I don't know what the world is when I eat it. On this basis, the growth line and logic line are also complete. Everyone's psychological state is described in detail, and you can better understand their changing emotions due to their own situation and the external situation. Five stars! ! ! ˚٩꒰ ⍢ ꒱۶⁼3

Delicious 😋 (chew chew chew vv and Xiaoya look so cute as a father and daughter, they have seriously replaced the monitor with a little genius phone watch/. Xiaohong has a strong sense of mentorship, which is reassuring (He I'll eat Sir Koya's cute things (chew Huh? ! Are both vv and Xiaoya cb cp delicious? ! 😋

Okay, I'll take the liberty to comment here. In view of some phenomena and questions, this will be used as another short introduction to add some content and precautions (I want to add an introduction, but I can't put it down...) First of all, please note: *Please do not mention any irrelevant content under the author's book, and do not recommend other people's works. This is not polite. *Any form of bullying, flattery, or discrediting Gougu himself or his works is prohibited. *AI is prohibited (please do not feed any content in the article, including text and pictures of chefs, to AI, and it is also forbidden to throw any pictures generated by AI into the comment area) *Ky, plagiarism, infringement and reprinting in any form are prohibited and will be prosecuted *Excessive jokes and inappropriate color words are prohibited The following is a supplement: *There is no cp in the main text of this article, but all! Absolutely strong woman, I will write the extras one by one. *Please read what the author says as much as possible, because there will be analysis, activities, reminders, interactions, etc. *Most of the parts that are temporarily unanswered or have suspense in the article are foreshadowing, and you still need to be patient and continue reading to answer them. *Everyone is welcome to play, but it depends on everyone to build a friendly and harmonious environment! -If there are any additions, they will be released in the form of a follow-up review. And this article is not an otome! The vector is an independent individual oc

I am completely outside the industry and have only watched the movie (.), But I have no problem watching it as a purely original work! The writing style and rhythm are very comfortable, and the protagonist is so cute that I rolled on the bed! Author, Goddess, Wife, Master, I will follow you! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is very good, the plot is very natural and interesting, and there is no OOC in Lao Wei. The daily life between the heroine and Lao Wei is very easy to fight. Mr. Wei's mouth seems to be brittle and poisonous. Mr. Wei, you are such a arrogant ghost [laughing] [laughing] I hope the teacher will not stop updating, I will always support the teacher [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [send heart] [send heart]

It feels so good, I feel so good watching it, and it can be watched by people outside the circle! I only know the names Megatron and Optimus Prime. There was no hindrance in watching it and it was very enjoyable. I really like the heroine character [shy] and there are no degrading words in the whole text, so you can eat it with confidence👍🏻

I've been following this for a long time to add a comment. The characters are well created, and there's no sense of inconsistency when the protagonist is involved. The emotions of each character are progressive and slow, and the descriptions of their respective thoughts are very lively. It's really emotional to watch the lead vector step by step from being picked up as a leaky fan to becoming the chief judge (sentimental. What impressed me deeply was that in a certain chapter, when the dialogue was ridiculing the vicious tongue, he said that he relied on this to maintain his professional charm. It suddenly became vivid prpr.... I keep thinking about it.

OS: What is this? Take a bite (chew, chew, chew, chew) (*°ω°*)ﾉIt's ↘rice↗! Immortal product, delicious, delicious, delicious, delicious The teacher wrote it well, about the daily life between Lao V and Xiao Su. Lao V is also a tsundere, and he is not OOC. Every character is well created. Good machine and good teacher. You are shocked when you taste such a delicacy (there is such a delicious thing in the world). Happy, happy ꉂ(ˊᗜˋ*) I admire you for being able to enjoy such delicious food again in my lifetime. Long live the teacher, long live the teacher*^o^*

This is the first time I read a Transformers fanfic. The author really portrays Xiao Yin very well. She is a star that does not burn people but attracts those around her infinitely; a passionate, flesh-and-blood person (machine) who exudes unique personal charm and constantly strives for the goal. Such a protagonist is not only fascinated by the characters in the book, I believe that many friends who follow her will fall in love with her sincerely. Of course, the relationship between the characters in the book and Xiaoyin is also very delicious! After chasing it all in one go, I just felt like I was still unfinished. Ps: Author Gougu, please let me take a lick! It's very well written. Teacher, I will always follow this book you wrote! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Like it very much! Can't help but post 🍅's first rating + comment The author's writing power and the character arc of Vector Baby have been growing and changing, which is a good direction, and we can feel that this is just the beginning and there is a long follow-up waiting for us (hint, hint, the story wants to be long~), I am very much looking forward to the next story. All the characters (original and original) who have appeared so far have their own personalities, and the descriptions are not stereotyped. The interactions and dialogues between the characters are very natural, and it is very comfortable to watch. The plot is very smooth and fulfilling, the characters grow effectively and quickly, and the first battle highlight of Vector is super nice. Vv also has its own description of Sugan's battle. The cooperation between the characters has their own strengths and is very reasonable. There is no ineffective and procrastinating plot overall. It's great~ Hehe, it's time to get to the emotional line. After reading the introduction, I came here for the central emotion of Vector. It's delicious and I love eating Modo Modo. I can feel the emotional fluctuations of several guests towards Vector. They are all described directly and hidden in the subtle daily routines and conversations. This hazy feeling is so exciting (twisting), and looking at it, it seems that there is something like love at first sight, which is too touching (twisting violently)! Moreover, several guests are not the type to sit back and wait for death. They all have their own ways of taking the initiative to promote the relationship. Well done (seals applaud)! We look forward to more male and female guests joining in the future (Spread flowers~

It's really super pretty! The character descriptions are very detailed and not OOC at all. The growth line described by Dog Bone is what I have seen since I joined the game (although I have only been in the game for a few months). It really makes me understand what each character has to pay or gain in growing up. Whether it is daily life or in the game, Dog Bone describes it so that it feels like reality. And he's really hard-working O(∩_∩)O (Forgive me for my poor vocabulary, which can only support me to write so much π_π)

Spoiler avoidance! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Advantages: I have only read a little bit of the original work, but it really doesn't affect my reading. In fact, the previous writing is very good. The three golden chapters successfully introduce the setting and early main plot. The heroine's self-growth process is also very interesting. The power setting is completely divine and the [blowing kiss] interaction is also very sweet. It is completely five-star food level [Adoration] Disadvantages: I think the shortcomings were particularly obvious after the end of the arena plot. It is also the most vulnerable part of fan works (the author has to come up with a new plot by himself). One is that there is no complete plot of the original work to support the rhythm and it is difficult to grasp, and the butterfly effect of the protagonist is too big. I can clearly feel the author's inexperience here [rolls eyes] My personal opinion is that the author made a fatal mistake. She introduced too many characters while advancing the story, resulting in no space for description, the characters became stereotyped, and it was difficult to develop the follow-up. It seems that it suddenly broadens the heroine's network (in fact, their role in the existing story is really limited and can be completely replaced), but it increases the difficulty for the heroine to collide with them to create more possibilities. I think the core question for the author is the outline. For example, what is the next step after the heroine successfully masters some power (the main plot in the early stage)? Conflicts and lack of understanding (continue to level up and refine the mind, follow the power-refreshing flow)? Explore and solve puzzles (change maps and unlock new characters at the same time, follow the plot flow)? Wait... It feels like the rhythm is suddenly messed up compared to the previous article [crying] Originally I planned to only post good reviews, but I'm really worried [crying] The author is completely talented. These are just some of my humble opinions. I hope I can discuss them with everyone [crying] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] The author is very, very serious. I read it and it gets better and better. [Sending my heart] Five-star praise. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

This is the first time I've seen a Transformers fanfic. The author's writing is super good [crying] and the protagonist is very charming. I've only seen the movie. Can you update two hundred chapters a day🍿(ºº)🥺

This book is very delicious to me [admiration]. Xiao Wuya really has his own ideas and clear understanding. When he first came here, he did not rely entirely on the boss. Instead, he remembered everything before he had the ability and paid it off after he had the ability. He also rewarded those who helped him. He was not afraid when confronting the council. When the other party thought that he was a "defective product", he did not let it affect his judgment too much. Instead, he continued to fight back clearly. For me, let Zhuzhu brother return the favor. Being able to continue to understand that I am not only the leader "Optimus Prime" but also the archivist Orion is what I want to see the most. For me, I selfishly hope that Brother Zhuzhu can live a good life as Orion, rather than Optimus Prime who is about to be crushed to death by the word leader. All in all, this novel allows me to see a sober but warm Prime Vector and a group of machines with a good future. Thank you to the author for creating a fairy novel. I hope it can be seen by more people. The author has greatly increased his rating [Blow kiss]

The writing is good, and it is delicious in daily life. There is no OOC. It is delicious and beautiful. I am not good at writing. I can only say these few words. Teacher, keep writing. I will always follow the teacher's [love] [love] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Well, recommended, anyway, it kicked me into the TF pit, and it is in the serious supplementary program (TFP)... But! Focus on it! In this article, I saw a different Starscream. The arrogant, noble and proud Qingqiu City scientist is actually very different from the image in the certificate, and is more attractive 😌 Super fanatic seeker. Although I have known and watched Transformers-related works before (yes, specifically in real life), this is my true understanding of every person and every character. From not knowing anything when watching it to being moved in the plot, this emotional accumulation is extremely precious. Although it's off topic, I still highly recommend it.

Really excellent. We have watched Yinqiu step by step from the status of defective product to the current level of justice. It has been really hard along the way. Overall, the writing style is witty and humorous, especially the relationship between Megatron and Vector during their time in Caron, which feels very natural and really looks like a couple. (There is no cp in the whole text, this is just my point) In addition, I also like the plot of AZ (Thousand Faces Guest). I liked Qian Mian very much when I read "Legacy of the Leader". In other books, this character is often mentioned briefly, or written as one of the smart points of the protagonist. It is quite normal, but I have some regrets, so I am really touched that he can have a good ending in this book. Yin Vector is really excellent, and has done things that most people can't do. Thank you, Yin Vector, for letting me see a better Cybertron, a Cybertron that is not perfect but has vitality in my ideal. I'm really looking forward to the plot on Earth next, come on, ma'am!

Very cute. There are currently no problems with the writing, plot, or characters. The writing is smooth and conveys the message effectively. (In particular, I personally appreciate the author's careful consideration of the meaning of words, which is indeed rare nowadays.) The plot arrangement is also very reasonable, both sparse and dense, and each paragraph has a memory point. The transition and portrayal of the characters' emotions are also very natural. (I don't know much about Transformers, but based on the unanimous praise in the comment section, I guess there is no OOC.) I forgot to mention that the professional descriptions of humans and machines also look very sophisticated, which is also very enjoyable to watch.

You can completely believe in Gougu's writing style. The language description is just right. While ensuring the plot is excellent, the description is also super good. There are also top chefs cooking super delicious meals. This opportunity is not to be missed, and it will never come back. The Transformers article that will surely impress you is here!

I have read Chapter 175 so far, and I feel that this book still requires a certain understanding of Transformers. I clicked in to read it because I was curious. Many characters later appeared that I didn't understand and suddenly appeared. I didn't even know who they were [face covering]. But the author was very considerate. After the chapter that changed the plot because of the heroine, he told the official what the original plot was like, which was well received. The writing is very good, the plot advancement is reasonable, the heroine is very attractive and feels like the anchor of the main character, and the war volume is brilliantly written.

To be honest, when I first read it, I felt a little uncomfortable. Maybe it was due to the writing style. I always felt that the way everyone in the article spoke did not match the image in my memory (except Shuangbo), but the plot was really interesting. I just started reading it because the plot was really well written, but there was always something inconsistent. It didn't feel like a normal communication, but when I saw Xiaoya wake up and take off directly, the sense of dissonance began to disappear. Later, I saw the author's various comments on perfecting the plot, the setting, etc. I was very emotional. I highly recommend it. It's very interesting. Everyone, read it. You don't need to store your brain. It's an excellent book by an excellent author. (By the way, Lianyu Starscream gives me a pretty good feeling in both the game and the anime. I really can't tell that the tsundere next to Xiaoya wants to usurp the throne. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha)

It's good-looking. It's good-looking no matter what. It's very logical. It's not the kind of heroine who just writes books when she has nothing to do. She has a good growth path. She's really smart and has a strong desire to survive. I like it very much!

It's so pretty! ! ! ! 😘 ᕙ( •̀ ᗜ •́ )ᕗ I really like it~~🥰 Wow wow wow! Big kiss😘~~ (⸝⸝⸝>`ˊ<⸝⸝⸝) I really like the character Dada, and I also like Dada! ! 😘 ꒰˶>ᗜ<˶꒱ And the teachers who draw pictures! ! ! ! They're all so awesome~Ooooooooooooooooooo! ! I like them all so much૮ ៸៸៸º ᗜ º៸៸៸ ა Hehehe~~ Dear sir and teachers, please marry me~~ (Just kidding hehehe😜) Smirking.

Very interesting Transformers article! Fragrant rice! The heroine is smart and witty! Great power! The combat effectiveness is also steadily increasing! He is the chief judge that everyone loves! There are no female lyrics, everyone is a robot [I understand] Some sweet plots interspersed are also very interesting, and there is still no cp at the moment

The teacher wrote well! ! TF B Circle is really starving to death. I didn't expect to be able to eat such high-quality food [crying] [crying] It's just that after watching it, I can't find a replacement meal. It makes me scratch my head and scratch my liver. The unified thought after seeing such a masterpiece is whether I can delete my memory and watch it again (

I'm going, I'm going, it's so hot! The pace of the story is very steady! All I can say about the interactive plot is that there is no obligation to flatten the corners of the mouth! All! ! ! Say it quickly! There is no clear cp to keep the wood like this! The single arrow makes me knock it on my own! ! Being stuck in such an intense plot, I couldn't help but think that there should be hundreds of chapters waiting for me to appear quickly, running around like crazy #@! ! Scream

So pretty! The details are really perfect. I've only read the first few chapters, but the interaction between the protagonist and Megatron's little creature is really cute and adorable. I highly recommend it to my family. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's worth reading, and it has the potential to score 9 points or above, but this score depends on whether the system gives it. At least in my opinion, the character creation and protagonist creation of this novel and the plot arrangement are worthy of 9 points or above. I hope the author will work hard!

It's beautiful. I really like the author's creation of characters, they are very vivid and flesh-and-blood. The plot is also logical, the timeline is forward, and it doesn't completely follow the original. The combat part is also relatively fluent and smooth, I really like to lead the vector... Yeah, and everything, it's very good [get it]