You Want Me, a Truth-Minded Young Man, to Be a Magical Girl?

This book is okay, and some settings are actually interesting, but the author did not write about this aspect, such as why these aliens stipulate that they only give power to girls before the age of 16. Thinking about this aspect, the protagonist will not be so confused when he sees that his sister is going to sign up.

The author is Hakimi who only knows how to meow. He is limited to updating one chapter of 4,000 words per day. Sometimes he will postpone the update because he has something to do (including but not limited to: sleeping to death, running out of time to do homework, playing games and forgetting to update, and traveling through time). I have never written a magical novel for girls, so some settings can only be gradually improved or revealed at the end. We are also happy to reply to readers' comments (there is no cat who doesn't like to chat). But Hajixing is not a cat girl, Maomao is just a cat, or a second personality. This novel is generally good in terms of plot alone, but there are some places where it doesn't grasp the rhythm well and doesn't pay attention to details. There is no way, the author is not very good at writing long novels, and he is not as powerful as most of his predecessors, so he is not very good at controlling the overall situation. If you can, please leave a comment! Cats will try to change themselves!

The author's writing is good, and the characters' actions, language, and psychology are well handled. In this regard, it can be said that it surpasses quite a few novels in this software. However, there are a few issues that I feel are lacking. First, the problem of perspective arrangement. This is an online text software. If readers want to read a novel, they must roughly judge the type of article by the title and introduction to decide whether they want to read it or not. This novel will undoubtedly retain readers who want to read about the "sexually transformed magical girl" (protagonist). It is a good plot arrangement to directly transform the protagonist at the beginning, but then the story turns to focus on describing the protagonist's sister, and the protagonist disappears from the plot and occasionally bubbles up until about 15 chapters later. I understand that this may be the author's intention to improve the protagonist's motivation, but it is a bit too much to not even see the protagonist for more than ten chapters. This will undoubtedly disappoint those readers who are retained by the "sexually transformed magical girl". Second, there is the issue of rhythm. There are too many daily plots. As a "magical girl" novel, the main point of the novel is that the main character has fun fighting. Daily life can be used as an intermediary between several fun points. However, there are no high-intensity fighting points in several consecutive chapters, and there are no more intense character conflicts in daily life. A long section of content is just a calm and pure daily life. You must know that this is an online novel software. People click on this software to find emotional value. Even daily articles have many contradictions and interesting points. It is too bland and difficult for people to read, especially when the article does not have many jokes. Third, let's look at some issues. The core points of "Gender Transformation Magical Girl" are "the protagonist's gradual acceptance of the gender transition" and "the embarrassment of being discovered by an acquaintance." The former is the tone that affects the contradictions in the early plot, and the latter is a very important breaking point. However, the treatment of these two parts in this article is a bit too gentle. The protagonist accepts the gender transition too blandly, and the exposure time is too early, causing readers to let go before their expectations are raised. Obviously the overall writing style is on the slow side, but the processing here is on the urgent side, which aggravates the previous problem. To sum up, the author is still immature in plot arrangement, and I regretted quitting the book at Chapter 36. The character description is very good, but the description alone is not good enough. I give it 4 stars and hope it can be improved. If the author opens a new book or this book gets a rating of 8.2, Please give me a kick.

The writing is okay. Generally speaking, the background actually refers to many aspects of Arknights and The End. The overall plot flow is actually more in line with the small plots I hope (🤓The magical girl who hides her identity is actually a boy). However, some small details and logic are still a bit problematic if you think about it carefully. Some parts of the small plots, such as the protagonist and his sister at the beginning. In terms of thinking and communication between sisters (not like high school students, but like junior high school students), and the country's views on magical girls (raising sheep?), At first glance, readers may feel that it is a bit strange and unnatural, but if you think about it carefully, it does make sense. The protagonist has experienced the death of his parents, leaving only his younger sister, so he is more stubborn and overly concerned, and is more paranoid in some aspects. After reading the first dozen or so pictures, I don't have any big problems. The plot and writing are actually quite good, but some aspects are a little unnatural, and some characters are stiff at certain times. I still like it.

It feels pretty good, I like it

Ah, Magical Girl plus Arknights is right

Generally speaking, it is good, but it is recommended that the author use less related words. Some related words are too many and the impression is not very good. For example, "that is" is not... Is "" and so on. Other aspects are okay, and then [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates]

It looks good, I hope everyone can support the author~ [full]

Good-looking, good-looking, not bad

It's good to read, but the content is too complicated and boring to read.

Laughing, The End 1.4 Plot confirms that the angels are an army created by Cornerstone.

Excellent tactical description

No problem so far

There's nothing poisonous about it, it's pretty good

I think the food is okay, the setting of magical girls, plus the angel of the end [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Loyal players of Eagle Point [cover face][cover face][cover face]

The background of the story and the description of the characters are good. There are some issues with the immature details, but overall it's okay.

Come on, this book is very interesting, I like it😋👍

Overall, it was a wonderful read

Looks good, the description is very clear

@ I gave it a five-star review, can you give me a few more chapters?