The Savage Chief Tore Out His Heart for Me

Dear author, your writing style has a solid feeling like a cotton-padded jacket tucked into the waistband of trousers. It is very plain, but it gives people a very happy feeling. The relationship between the protagonists is like running water, slowly, but very comfortable. It gives me a sense of tolerance like the land, and the feelings are particularly simple (maybe because I have very little exposure to this type of writing), so give me a surprise and it will be finished tomorrow! If possible, add another 100 extra chapters! (Just kidding, the author is very important to his health, and this is the first time he has written such a long comment)

The writing style is good, and the style is quite delicate and real. It is not like some golden fingers or something. Everything created in this book is slowly explored. It will not bring a lot of changes to the primitive world from the beginning. It will change the lives of the people in the tribe step by step. The relationship will develop gradually and slowly. It will not fall in love right from the beginning, just like living an ordinary life. I recommend it to friends who have read too many fast-paced novels and want to read novels about slowly developing emotions. There are not so many vigorous and ups and downs, it is just a relaxing article.

The writing is beautiful and experiential, and the writing skills are very solid. When I read the description of the environment, the scenery emerges in front of my eyes, and there is a faint sense of happiness. The protagonist gives people a very reliable feeling.

I can't help it. He's so good-looking, so good-looking. I like Lie Ge who has a cold face and a warm heart. I also like Liege who would rather refuse to accept fate than admit defeat. Both of them are working hard to live and let the people around them live well. They are both great people.

It's too early to meet... If Qiu800,000 words met me, I would be happier. It's not easy to find a subject I like, but the description is too verbose~ It's okay at first. It will be very uncomfortable later... What you wrote is a novel, not a poem, not a composition. Not every sentence or action needs a metaphor. Or come up with a parallel sentence. Don't show off your literary talent, focus on content output. See for yourself if this is the case and go back and forth. [Holds face] I listened to Chapter 18 and it was so uncomfortable. And with all due respect... The protagonist's sense of deservingness is too low. To be honest, at first I thought it would be a story about exile from another world. Seriously. When normal people travel through time, it is a blessing for their tribe that I can join them. What is the totem? It is a remnant of feudalism. Why did I have such a strong sense of racial identity in the first place? I felt that without a totem, I was inferior to them. They can think so, and it's ridiculous for you to think so too.

I really like this kind of love that comes with practical actions instead of sweet words. It's really pure love. Because you are you, I treat you well. I hope the author will prosper! I like this kind of pure love!

The patriarch is cute and stupid with his mouth [snickering][snickering][smirking][smirking][smirking][smirking] He kissed me for three days and then said he would kiss me again 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 It's so sweet!!!!!

The writing is very good and the story is very touching. Every character in it is very real. The wizard elders, including the unnamed characters, are equal. Looking forward to the next plot.

With a plain feeling of warmth and a step-by-step process, Ning Ye was accepted by the tribe step by step. The Liege people were honest and did not talk much. They cared and loved Ning Ye with practical actions. He was stupid but soft-hearted. People could tell at a glance that he loved Ning Ye very much. I like this kind of stable happiness. I can't express it, anyway, I just like to watch 😳

I like this light writing style! Why is it not a kind of salvation? The world of Family 1 was originally gray, but when Family 0 came, it turned into color! It's really wonderful to write about two people falling in love in a plain and simple way...