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The sentences in the first dozens of chapters are repeated all the time. It looks very confusing. If you are impatient, you can't see the back at all. It makes you visually tired. I suggest the author optimize it a lot. I also personally feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings buried in the article. Many of them feel unclear. I hope the author will fill in the holes in the future. Secondly, some places are too simple and some are too cumbersome. But the creativity is still quite attractive. I hope the author can keep it up. Finally, I want to say that no one can write well right away. I hope the author's writing style will get better and better and bring us a more exciting experience. [Flowing Kiss] 5 stars for encouragement. I love you.

The twists and contradictions of the evil god are vividly displayed. For some reason, there is a hint of laughter in the numbness, and a touch of warmth in the daily trembling. In fact, when I saw the back, I really missed the limited edition Evil God in front.

The language of the whole text is fluent, the writing is relaxed and natural, and it can be regarded as a relatively successful work. Although the language in this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and true emotions, making it enjoyable to read. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very deep and thorough. The language of the full text is sonorous and powerful, and it makes people excited and excited when reading it. Hey hey [you taste it carefully]

It turns out there are multiple female protagonists? I didn't read the tag at first (⩌⤚⩌)

Can anyone explain to me the relationship between Cthulhu and Lin Luo? It's okay to spoil it in advance. I'm just out of curiosity. There are a lot of foreshadowings ahead, so I'm a little confused. What on earth is Cthulhu hiding? Does Cthulhu care about Lin Luo in particular? I don't understand. Please, please explain it to me! ! ! ! ! ! !

The front part may be a bit frustrating to watch, but overall it's still very good.

The author is a saint who thinks about students [crying][crying][crying] Updates 4 chapters every day. This is a model worker. And the plot looks very coherent, it's a five-star rating. I love you, model worker.

Endless torture

So far it's okay, I hope I don't go too far in the future

I just read another similar book and it made me sick. This one is also very beautiful. I give it a five-star rating and encourage you.

For 4 chapters a day, it must be praised with 5 stars.

It's very interesting to read. It's a bit long in the beginning, but as long as you have the patience to see the end, it's very interesting. Those who gave negative reviews probably haven't read more than 20 chapters.

Do you have many female protagonists? I really like Shuang Ling, so take it away [laughing evilly]

Interesting and novel stories

It's damnable