Did I Say Magic Should Enter Every Household, Nier Dulong?

Not bad, but the MC part is a bit lacking and should be more. And I'm a little worried about the protagonist's position. I can sit at a table alone, but at least I can't sit at the table with those aristocratic capitalists.

It feels good. After watching the beginning, MC is like a layer of skin. Changing anything else will not affect the content of the fantasy world. Moreover, the author likes to use "..." And "——" and uses them in all situations. When listening to a book, it greatly affects the fluency. "——" Will also combine two sentences to form a long and difficult sentence.

I thought it was an MC story at the beginning, but after reading more than half of it, I realized it was basically just a gimmick. The story is told well though. If you, the author, want to write MC articles, then the proportion of MC is obviously too small now. If you look at it from the perspective of a fantasy novel, it's pretty good.

It looks pretty good at the moment, but it's best to change the title of the book and label it MC, otherwise there will be too few people [face covering]

MC has no sense of presence. It mainly focuses on adventures in other worlds. I feel that it would be better to switch to Goldfinger. I am mainly attracted to MC but the main content is not MC. If you don't read mc content, it's okay

Don't say it, really don't say it. The writing is quite interesting. So awesome☝️🤓 There have been too many Akaishis recently, and it's rare to see a normal one.

It's interesting, especially since you won't bring conscious people into the empty island casually, you are very safety-conscious, 👍

I have read Chapter 40 so far, and I feel pretty good about it, but am I the first to comment...

The writing is quite good, but why haven't I updated it for more than 10 days? Is it because I stopped writing?

Yes, if you have more dwarf jokes, I will give you 8 stars as an author.