No Job: Luo Qixi and Alice's Succubus Master

At the moment, it seems highly recommended. As long as you don't follow the previous example of raising the male protagonist as a father, it will be fine. Why are you providing for someone who may poach you [laughs] I don't even want to say that I have no intention of reading any more of this recent update [Start]

There are so many jobless fanfics on Tomato, so I have read them all. This book is enough to be ranked in the top three, and it can be compared with the two most popular jobless fanfics on Tomato now, one about Rudy's brother, and one about Rudy's sister. Those who like Luo Qixi will probably like this book by the author, but the author's introduction is not very good. I personally like it very much, it feels like a nurturing series, and there are many chapters in the whole book of Luo Qixi. I am very satisfied with it. Most of the timeline of Tomato starts with the birth of Rudy, and this book was written from when Luo Qixi was a child and a teenager. It not only writes about the team in the original Luo Qixi, but also writes about the story of Paul and Senis. It is a very novel track, and it also relieves some of the regrets of the original, such as the original As the captain of Luo Qixi's team, the original Luo Qixi and his team believed that the captain could become a hero and had certain strength at a young age. Moreover, Luo Qixi first met them because Luo Qixi was in danger. The captain took the initiative to help and later they took Luo Qixi on adventures. His character was not bad, but it was a pity that during one of their missions, the captain was stoned to death, which made the pigs and horses in the team lose their fighting spirit. , And then Luo Qixi continued to wander alone, which was a pity. Here, the captain was allowed to practice swordsmanship with the Northern God III, and it was written that the captain became a sword master. Although the author had written before that the captain's talent was not good enough and had the potential of a superior swordsman, but I remember that the original work said that his talent was okay. Now the author has written that he became a sword master. I don't know if he can become a sword master in the future. After all, I feel that this character is still very pure and hard-working.

It's not bad, but is the male protagonist's character too gentle? Seeing that no matter how bad things happen, he is only superficially angry at most, which gives me such a feeling. As for the knight in Milis, I think the male protagonist should be killed. It doesn't matter if he is killed alone, or it can serve as a warning to Luo Qixi. I have not read the exclusive chapter of Luo Qixi in the original novel, and I have only read the main plot of the original novel. I don't know what Luo Qixi's original experience is in the current timeline, but I still feel that I should kill the knight if he is so offended, even if the other party wants to kill me. Okay, after reading chapters 47 and 48, I understand why I didn't kill the knight earlier. The protagonist just doesn't want to get involved in the trouble between pro-demons and anti-demons. It seems that I think less, maybe because I read too many cool articles recently.

I have also read hundreds of comic book novels, and this is the second best novel I have ever read. The character and behavior descriptions in the novel are comparable to the original work, just like a new plot in the original work. The author has also mentioned many times that he has not thought about how to write, and does not follow the plot without writing an outline. The characterization of the characters is very restored. , The plot is novel and not boring. The most important thing is that many of the protagonist's words are not understood by others, which makes me feel that the characters are very independent. Many other people have written dialogues and foreshadowing. The characters in it can be understood at a glance, but he understands me even if I don't understand. It is very dramatic.

It feels pretty good, as long as it's not a nanny story about the protagonist [Thinking]

The flaws are not concealed. Although it was modified with AI in the early and middle stages, I can clearly see some outlines and my own ideas. At the beginning, I noticed that the AI ​​elements wanted to be crossed out, but I was attracted to it later. Maybe it's because I've been watching it a lot recently, but I think it's okay for Tomato. I don't understand why so few people are watching it. It can be considered as written in this IP.

Absolutely, the invincible magician has no B-level at all.

I would like to support the author. It seems that the author is writing a book for the first time and his writing style may be a bit green. The writing is not very rigorous in some places, and there are also language problems in other places, but since this is the first book the author wrote out of hobby, it can be understood. The background design of the novel is okay, you can take a look, but I am also a newbie. All the above are my personal feelings for reference only [Sending my heart] Finally, I hope the author will work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง[laugh]

It's a good book. The author writes it well and very carefully, but there are some things that are heartbreaking. Because not many people have read it and the ratings have just come out, the low score is a bit abstract [face covering] [face covering]. It's actually very good.

It took me so long to write it, but it was finally pushed to me in the Twitter feed. Fortunately, I had been searching for novels for a long time. It's rare to come across such a good job-free novel. I still want this novel to have a good ending. Although I understand that the author is anxious to finish because of the lack of people, it would be a pity for such a good novel to have such a sloppy ending.

It feels pretty good. Let's give it a five-star rating first. The front part is pretty good, but the back part is very average. It can be said that it is even more average than average. That is, the protagonist leaves Luo Qixi after that night. The explanation at the end is a bit unacceptable. It is just that the explanation is a bit too far-fetched and the logic does not flow.

The writing is still good, but I feel like the plot of Luo Qixi is a bit out of place (maybe I haven't watched it for a long time), and it's hard to watch. Come on,

Overall, it's okay, but I feel like I ate a little too early. I've finished more than fifty chapters, although I haven't finished it completely.

The writing is very good, but sometimes I feel very angry. Why does the male protagonist always believe in fate? He says that he dare not find a female protagonist because of his longevity theory. It has reached this point. Wouldn't it be more hurtful to give up? But it's really interesting to write

In line with expectations, the pace is not laggy

It's okay, I thought you were just playing a nurturing game, not a single female protagonist. There are multiple female protagonists, please fix these titles next time.

The writing is normal, the logic is normal, and the emotional expression is good. You can take a look.

The current impression is that it is one of the few high-quality jobless fanfics on Tomato. I hope the author can continue to persevere.

Already very good

Knife makes it sweet. Knife makes it sweet.

Very good, pretty good among fans

Good-looking, awesome, show them all to me

Not enough at all

All I can say is that I ate this book like melon seeds.

For me who haven't read the original work, it's pretty good, except that it needs to be raised

It's well written, but updates are a bit slow.

In order to read this book, I finished reading Jobless. Let me give it five stars to stabilize my expectations.

It seems okay so far, please keep up the good work, author (there are too few unemployed fans [crying])

Please don't stop updating, I will do anything 😭

It's pretty good. Tomato's jobless reincarnations are still rare.