Dragon Ball: Invincible Gohan, Choosing Legendary Super Saiyan from the Start

After reading it, I feel it's okay. Although it's a bit confusing, it depends on how the author improves it later, but it doesn't affect the food.

The overall plot is not like the original work, which is good; the logic is not problematic, and it can be regarded as a rare source of food 👍

It's okay. It's quite imaginative and worth a look.

It feels pretty good. It's a different Dragon Ball. It continues to innovate on the basis of the original. It has a different world view. I'm really looking forward to what kind of existence Salama will be in the future.

Very nice, but too wordy

Pretty good, satisfied

This book has good ideas

Nice writing in the fanfiction

Pretty good world view

Well written, can be rated well