The Twelve God Realms: The supreme realm of the universe, consisting of the Jun Tian Realm, the Holy Tian Realm, the Haotian Realm, the Feng Tian Realm, the Sword God Realm, the Night Ghost Realm, the Demon God Realm, the Demon God Realm, the Water God Realm, the Dragon God Realm, the Poseidon God Realm, and the Haoran God Realm. There are thousands of races, and the gods are the most respected.
Lower Domain (Mortal Realm): A corner abandoned or forgotten by the Twelve Divine Realms, with thin spiritual energy. It is the place where sinners are exiled by the Divine Realms, and it is also the starting point for the protagonist's rebirth.
Reader comments
1. The narrative lacks a sense of substitution. It feels like a reincarnation flow or a deduction flow narrative. Everything is like a revolving door. It is written from the perspective of God or the perspective of future generations. It reads like reading a history book, but it is not as concise as those.
2. The plot is too boring and too abrupt. He joins the army for no reason, and then becomes the county magistrate for no reason. All of this is within the first five or six chapters. If you think about it, you will know what the lack of sense of substitution in the first point is like. The plot is like jumping through a wormhole. Now it is here, and now there, it is jumping forward quickly, and the direction of advancement is twists and turns. To be honest, it's better to use the most classic cliche plot, just copy it if you can't write it well, and just mess around.
The writing and setting of the plot are too much. It is not a traditional soul-traveling story about cultivating oneself to find heavenly materials and earthly treasures. This is more like the feeling of dynasty hegemony starting from generals. The first part is full of two ordinary empires in the lower world fighting to rob the city. It looks weird, and it should be a transition. Only 20 pictures later, I suddenly have a partner, who I suddenly met on the street.
You can come on, come on
It gives me a headache to see if the realm can be released.
1. The narrative lacks a sense of substitution. It feels like a reincarnation flow or a deduction flow narrative. Everything is like a revolving door. It is written from the perspective of God or the perspective of future generations. It reads like reading a history book, but it is not as concise as those. 2. The plot is too boring and too abrupt. He joins the army for no reason, and then becomes the county magistrate for no reason. All of this is within the first five or six chapters. If you think about it, you will know what the lack of sense of substitution in the first point is like. The plot is like jumping through a wormhole. Now it is here, and now there, it is jumping forward quickly, and the direction of advancement is twists and turns. To be honest, it's better to use the most classic cliche plot, just copy it if you can't write it well, and just mess around.
The writing and setting of the plot are too much. It is not a traditional soul-traveling story about cultivating oneself to find heavenly materials and earthly treasures. This is more like the feeling of dynasty hegemony starting from generals. The first part is full of two ordinary empires in the lower world fighting to rob the city. It looks weird, and it should be a transition. Only 20 pictures later, I suddenly have a partner, who I suddenly met on the street.
You can come on, come on
It gives me a headache to see if the realm can be released.