Cod's second creation fanfic, the main plot has been greatly changed -ing If you see the baby, you can watch the extra first
From a peaceful and stable homeland in the East, he fell into a war-torn world. He never wanted to be a greenhouse guest dependent on others. He was still facing the sun in the burning fire. We are comrades who share life and death, family members who rely on each other, and unspoken lovers. The sky is full of embers, and finally there is a glimmer of light. All the persistence and preference in this world have their way back.
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This is my first time to write a serious review (it's still a long review, but the 300-word credit card was lost because my phone was stuck [Petrochemical], and when I wrote it again, I found that the feeling I just felt suddenly disappeared qaq)
The teacher's writing style in this book is very delicate and the logic is very clear. In fact, I have never been exposed to COD before, and I have become a fan of this circle purely because I have read almost all the good articles (that I can accept) in the circles I read. The first one I read was another teacher's article, which was also reasonably written and well-written (and had delicious meat), and then I was deceived into this trap. I read some other books on Yang Persimmon one after another, but they didn't bother me very much. The yn in them was not me, but other female protagonists. The way I read it, their relationship with 141 was more deliberate (in comparison), and there was a feeling that being a man was more important than going home (bushi), which made me uncomfortable. It could even be said that the smell of industrial saccharin was too strong.
But the teacher's article is different. Although there is indeed an yn "upgrade" link in the early stage that is almost necessary for COD writing as the teacher said, it can only be regarded as the adaptation period for the new text. The teacher's writing becomes smoother and more delicate as time goes on. His writing style can be said to be inferior to most of the foreign books I have read. Especially the extras about a few soldiers. I am actually a person with a very low tear point and strong empathy (170 Lin Daiyu?). I often shed tears in my life, but in the past two years, I rarely shed tears while reading novels. I wanted to save up some time before reading it, but today I couldn't hold back and finished reading it in one sitting. I was deeply moved by the teacher's extra chapters. They were very delicate. Although I have never played COD, I think they should have such characters. It felt very relevant and made me cry. Wow, I watched it almost one o'clock in one breath, and then I forgot that I have to take a mock test tomorrow (the hardship of senior high school students). The teacher's writing is simply the best way to relieve the hard days. It's not that I want to read something sweet when I am tired from school, but I want to read something real.
Just do it, teacher, come on, the orb will still be very bright even if it is covered with dust, and it is not in the green jj. You are all generating electricity for love, so you don't need to care too much about the data. As long as the teacher writes happily.
(Oh my God, I wrote a lot of stuff on Jili Guala, so let's just read it. I feel that this sentimental essay is better than the essay I wrote for today's exam [laughing awkwardly])
The emotions are very delicate and gentle. This is the only book I have left a review for. It is not a common industrial saccharine or a bloody embarrassing plot. It is very daily and I like it. But why should I describe short and medium hair? I don't mean to say that the writing is bad, it just makes people feel a little away.
Very delicate writing style, the author writes very gently. YN in it has an independent growth trend line, and the shaping of other characters is also just right, without excessive language and description.
This is my first time to write a serious review (it's still a long review, but the 300-word credit card was lost because my phone was stuck [Petrochemical], and when I wrote it again, I found that the feeling I just felt suddenly disappeared qaq) The teacher's writing style in this book is very delicate and the logic is very clear. In fact, I have never been exposed to COD before, and I have become a fan of this circle purely because I have read almost all the good articles (that I can accept) in the circles I read. The first one I read was another teacher's article, which was also reasonably written and well-written (and had delicious meat), and then I was deceived into this trap. I read some other books on Yang Persimmon one after another, but they didn't bother me very much. The yn in them was not me, but other female protagonists. The way I read it, their relationship with 141 was more deliberate (in comparison), and there was a feeling that being a man was more important than going home (bushi), which made me uncomfortable. It could even be said that the smell of industrial saccharin was too strong. But the teacher's article is different. Although there is indeed an yn "upgrade" link in the early stage that is almost necessary for COD writing as the teacher said, it can only be regarded as the adaptation period for the new text. The teacher's writing becomes smoother and more delicate as time goes on. His writing style can be said to be inferior to most of the foreign books I have read. Especially the extras about a few soldiers. I am actually a person with a very low tear point and strong empathy (170 Lin Daiyu?). I often shed tears in my life, but in the past two years, I rarely shed tears while reading novels. I wanted to save up some time before reading it, but today I couldn't hold back and finished reading it in one sitting. I was deeply moved by the teacher's extra chapters. They were very delicate. Although I have never played COD, I think they should have such characters. It felt very relevant and made me cry. Wow, I watched it almost one o'clock in one breath, and then I forgot that I have to take a mock test tomorrow (the hardship of senior high school students). The teacher's writing is simply the best way to relieve the hard days. It's not that I want to read something sweet when I am tired from school, but I want to read something real. Just do it, teacher, come on, the orb will still be very bright even if it is covered with dust, and it is not in the green jj. You are all generating electricity for love, so you don't need to care too much about the data. As long as the teacher writes happily. (Oh my God, I wrote a lot of stuff on Jili Guala, so let's just read it. I feel that this sentimental essay is better than the essay I wrote for today's exam [laughing awkwardly])
The emotions are very delicate and gentle. This is the only book I have left a review for. It is not a common industrial saccharine or a bloody embarrassing plot. It is very daily and I like it. But why should I describe short and medium hair? I don't mean to say that the writing is bad, it just makes people feel a little away.
Very delicate writing style, the author writes very gently. YN in it has an independent growth trend line, and the shaping of other characters is also just right, without excessive language and description.