Only after Shen Lian is reborn does she realize just how badly she was fooled in her past life. The man who seemed like a warm-hearted dream come true was after her money. Her best friend, as close as a sister, was her second uncle’s illegitimate daughter. And Pei Linzhou, her childhood friend who had grown up beside her and always stood behind her, was someone she’d barely ever looked at properly. This time, she’ll send her enemies away one by one. As for Pei Linzhou…
In everyone else’s eyes, he is a ruthless business tycoon. In front of her, though, he’s like a puppy afraid of being abandoned, trying to hide his possessiveness but failing miserably. Shen Lian smiles. “Why hide it? It’s kind of adorable.”
It's incredible to see at the end of the book that the author feels that this is the product of failure. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I have read countless novels. Nowadays, there are very few novels that I can really finish, but your first novel made me finish it~
Don't deny yourself in a hurry, it's normal to get stuck when creating, let alone your first work! And based on reality, the male and female protagonists are both presidents of the company, and the female protagonist's company has internal problems. She has to go to work every day. Unless she is on vacation, her daily routine is to eat. After get off work and on weekends, she can spend some time together. This is in line with reality.
Small suggestion: I believe that the first work holds a lot of weight in your mind. If possible, improve the ending of the characters. It is best to host a wedding for the man and woman. Hahaha, that will be perfect.
There are thousands of people in the world, and it is impossible for everyone to like you, but there are always people who like your style. Don't be too harsh on yourself, you may be better than you think.
Everything is difficult at the beginning and difficult at every turn!
It's very beautiful [admiration]. In fact, the first novel is very good, don't underestimate yourself, and you also know the shortcomings of the plot in the novel. However, I think the process of getting along with the male and female protagonists is really well written, and many small details are very touching! Although the author said that he always writes about the male and female protagonists eating, it is true that it is plain and simple. I have been reading books since 1989. Nowadays, many novels have exaggerated plots. After being attracted by the plot for a short time, I will be so excited that it is difficult to read it anymore. On the contrary, this kind of Tamsui novel, no matter in terms of plot, language description or various details, is difficult for people to calm down and read carefully. Looking forward to the author's next work [Sending Hearts].
Teacher, this is not the product of failure, but the failure to arrive at the great arrival.
##No drama, no ups and downs, just eating and getting off work, but these daily routines are written particularly well. CEOs are human beings too, and they also have to eat and sleep. When two people are together, they just squeeze in time to meet and have a meal together. This kind of detail is more poignant than those exaggerated plots. The dialogue is clean and non-verbal, and the characters stand up, not by the plot, but by the energy revealed in the words and deeds. The author puts the life on paper intact.
Nowadays, the screen is full of ups and downs. It's really rare to see a novel that can make people calm down and watch two people have a good meal.
That is not the product of failure, but an everyday inscription.
##Winning is a win after writing a book. The first one is not meant to be perfect, but meant to be completed. Don't put too much faith in your own self-denial. The passages that readers find interesting are often the passages that you find unusable. Write more, remember more, and the next book will be better than this one.
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Although the article is very short, the character settings are still very complete, and the story development is reasonable. It was originally just good-looking, but when I saw the last sentence, the author felt that this article was a product of failure, and I felt that the author has really high requirements for himself. It is much more touching than many people who are not allowed to leave negative reviews if they are not well written. 😭
The character structure and personality are very good, but the overall look is depressing. The male protagonist should be wild if he has the capital. The female protagonist's revenge still depends on the male protagonist. The female protagonist has not become that powerful.
The author gave this first article 5 stars as encouragement. Although it is a short story, it has both the beginning and the end of the plot. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too short. The male protagonist finally got to his cinnabar mole. Can't you let him flirt with it for a while? [Laughing]
It's super nice and sweet, there are no misunderstandings or quarrels. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I love watching it!
[Five-Star Recommendation] Beautiful sisters, the writing is exquisite, and the plot advances quickly! The hero's restrained love is so cool! The heroine suddenly woke up and kicked the second male lead decisively! The male and female protagonists are running in both directions!
Is this the first book? The author's writing is so good. I stayed up late to read it [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
It's incredible to see at the end of the book that the author feels that this is the product of failure. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I have read countless novels. Nowadays, there are very few novels that I can really finish, but your first novel made me finish it~ Don't deny yourself in a hurry, it's normal to get stuck when creating, let alone your first work! And based on reality, the male and female protagonists are both presidents of the company, and the female protagonist's company has internal problems. She has to go to work every day. Unless she is on vacation, her daily routine is to eat. After get off work and on weekends, she can spend some time together. This is in line with reality. Small suggestion: I believe that the first work holds a lot of weight in your mind. If possible, improve the ending of the characters. It is best to host a wedding for the man and woman. Hahaha, that will be perfect. There are thousands of people in the world, and it is impossible for everyone to like you, but there are always people who like your style. Don't be too harsh on yourself, you may be better than you think. Everything is difficult at the beginning and difficult at every turn!
It's very beautiful [admiration]. In fact, the first novel is very good, don't underestimate yourself, and you also know the shortcomings of the plot in the novel. However, I think the process of getting along with the male and female protagonists is really well written, and many small details are very touching! Although the author said that he always writes about the male and female protagonists eating, it is true that it is plain and simple. I have been reading books since 1989. Nowadays, many novels have exaggerated plots. After being attracted by the plot for a short time, I will be so excited that it is difficult to read it anymore. On the contrary, this kind of Tamsui novel, no matter in terms of plot, language description or various details, is difficult for people to calm down and read carefully. Looking forward to the author's next work [Sending Hearts].
Teacher, this is not the product of failure, but the failure to arrive at the great arrival. ##No drama, no ups and downs, just eating and getting off work, but these daily routines are written particularly well. CEOs are human beings too, and they also have to eat and sleep. When two people are together, they just squeeze in time to meet and have a meal together. This kind of detail is more poignant than those exaggerated plots. The dialogue is clean and non-verbal, and the characters stand up, not by the plot, but by the energy revealed in the words and deeds. The author puts the life on paper intact. Nowadays, the screen is full of ups and downs. It's really rare to see a novel that can make people calm down and watch two people have a good meal. That is not the product of failure, but an everyday inscription. ##Winning is a win after writing a book. The first one is not meant to be perfect, but meant to be completed. Don't put too much faith in your own self-denial. The passages that readers find interesting are often the passages that you find unusable. Write more, remember more, and the next book will be better than this one.
,,,,,,,,🥰
Although the article is very short, the character settings are still very complete, and the story development is reasonable. It was originally just good-looking, but when I saw the last sentence, the author felt that this article was a product of failure, and I felt that the author has really high requirements for himself. It is much more touching than many people who are not allowed to leave negative reviews if they are not well written. 😭
The character structure and personality are very good, but the overall look is depressing. The male protagonist should be wild if he has the capital. The female protagonist's revenge still depends on the male protagonist. The female protagonist has not become that powerful.
The author gave this first article 5 stars as encouragement. Although it is a short story, it has both the beginning and the end of the plot. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too short. The male protagonist finally got to his cinnabar mole. Can't you let him flirt with it for a while? [Laughing]
It's super nice and sweet, there are no misunderstandings or quarrels. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I love watching it!
[Five-Star Recommendation] Beautiful sisters, the writing is exquisite, and the plot advances quickly! The hero's restrained love is so cool! The heroine suddenly woke up and kicked the second male lead decisively! The male and female protagonists are running in both directions!
Is this the first book? The author's writing is so good. I stayed up late to read it [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]