It was only after Shen Lian was reborn that she discovered that she was ridiculously blind in her previous life - the sweet-looking man fell from the sky for her money; her best friend, who was as close as a sister, was the illegitimate daughter of her second uncle; and she had never even looked at Pei Linzhou, the sweetheart she had grown up with and always stood behind her, a few times. In this life, she will send her enemies in one by one. As for Pei Linzhou——
In the eyes of outsiders, he was a ruthless business emperor, but in front of her, he was like a puppy who was afraid of being abandoned. He wanted to hide his paranoia but couldn't. Shen Lian smiled: Why hide it? It's so cute.
Reader comments
It's incredible to see at the end of the book that the author feels that this is the product of failure. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I have read countless novels. Nowadays, there are very few novels that I can really finish, but your first novel made me finish it~
Don't deny yourself in a hurry, it's normal to get stuck when creating, let alone your first work! And based on reality, the male and female protagonists are both presidents of the company, and the female protagonist's company has internal problems. She has to go to work every day. Unless she is on vacation, her daily routine is to eat. After get off work and on weekends, she can spend some time together. This is in line with reality.
Small suggestion: I believe that the first work holds a lot of weight in your mind. If possible, improve the ending of the characters. It is best to host a wedding for the man and woman. Hahaha, that will be perfect.
There are thousands of people in the world, and it is impossible for everyone to like you, but there are always people who like your style. Don't be too harsh on yourself, you may be better than you think.
Everything is difficult at the beginning and difficult at every turn!
It's very beautiful [admiration]. In fact, the first novel is very good, don't underestimate yourself, and you also know the shortcomings of the plot in the novel. However, I think the process of getting along with the male and female protagonists is really well written, and many small details are very touching! Although the author said that he always writes about the male and female protagonists eating, it is true that it is plain and simple. I have been reading books since 1989. Nowadays, many novels have exaggerated plots. After being attracted by the plot for a short time, I will be so excited that it is difficult to read it anymore. On the contrary, this kind of Tamsui novel, no matter in terms of plot, language description or various details, is difficult for people to calm down and read carefully. Looking forward to the author's next work [Sending Hearts].
Teacher, this is not the product of failure, but the failure to arrive at the great arrival.
##No drama, no ups and downs, just eating and getting off work, but these daily routines are written particularly well. CEOs are human beings too, and they also have to eat and sleep. When two people are together, they just squeeze in time to meet and have a meal together. This kind of detail is more poignant than those exaggerated plots. The dialogue is clean and non-verbal, and the characters stand up, not by the plot, but by the energy revealed in the words and deeds. The author puts the life on paper intact.
Nowadays, the screen is full of ups and downs. It's really rare to see a novel that can make people calm down and watch two people have a good meal.
That is not the product of failure, but an everyday inscription.
##Winning is a win after writing a book. The first one is not meant to be perfect, but meant to be completed. Don't put too much faith in your own self-denial. The passages that readers find interesting are often the passages that you find unusable. Write more, remember more, and the next book will be better than this one.
Although the article is very short, the character settings are still very complete, and the story development is reasonable. It was originally just good-looking, but when I saw the last sentence, the author felt that this article was a product of failure, and I felt that the author has really high requirements for himself. It is much more touching than many people who are not allowed to leave negative reviews if they are not well written. 😭
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It's super nice and sweet, there are no misunderstandings or quarrels. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I love watching it!
The character structure and personality are very good, but the overall look is depressing. The male protagonist should be wild if he has the capital. The female protagonist's revenge still depends on the male protagonist. The female protagonist has not become that powerful.
The author gave this first article 5 stars as encouragement. Although it is a short story, it has both the beginning and the end of the plot. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too short. The male protagonist finally got to his cinnabar mole. Can't you let him flirt with it for a while? [Laughing]
[Five-Star Recommendation] Beautiful sisters, the writing is exquisite, and the plot advances quickly! The hero's restrained love is so cool! The heroine suddenly woke up and kicked the second male lead decisively! The male and female protagonists are running in both directions!
Is this the first book? The author's writing is so good. I stayed up late to read it [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
Read them all! ! Lian Lian and Pei Pei are both very good people. Their heartfelt love for each other makes them grow up together. The young couple is so sweet. I usually like to read sweet pet novels, and this novel is quite to my liking! Only when I saw the end did I realize that this is Dada's first work. It is very powerful, and many of the emotional descriptions in it are quite delicate. I hope Dada will continue to work hard! ! Come on! [Top post][grass has been planted][bird food masterpiece]
Very nice, not clunky
In fact, the capitalization is very good, but the ending is hasty.
It's pretty good, but the ending is not complete enough
The only drawback is that it is too short and the writing is quite delicate.
The writing style is very good and the writing is very gentle. The only flaw is that it is a bit short. Come on, come on [Love]
The details are OK, the content is compact, and it looks good.
In fact, the writing is quite good and the characters are clearly drawn. Come on💪
The character creation is very charming, the emotions are delicate, the plot is not cliche, and it is enjoyable to watch.
Great author, I hope you will create better works. This is also the first time that I have read this novel so seriously. Looking forward to your new works
Nice! ! ! ! ! Author, you are awesome! The first one is already well written! Looking forward to more works
Love short novels!
The author writes so well, the details are very accurate, and the emotions are very delicate.
I went, and I must give it a five-star rating. It's very beautiful. The author is also a fan [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
It's incredible to see at the end of the book that the author feels that this is the product of failure. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I have read countless novels. Nowadays, there are very few novels that I can really finish, but your first novel made me finish it~ Don't deny yourself in a hurry, it's normal to get stuck when creating, let alone your first work! And based on reality, the male and female protagonists are both presidents of the company, and the female protagonist's company has internal problems. She has to go to work every day. Unless she is on vacation, her daily routine is to eat. After get off work and on weekends, she can spend some time together. This is in line with reality. Small suggestion: I believe that the first work holds a lot of weight in your mind. If possible, improve the ending of the characters. It is best to host a wedding for the man and woman. Hahaha, that will be perfect. There are thousands of people in the world, and it is impossible for everyone to like you, but there are always people who like your style. Don't be too harsh on yourself, you may be better than you think. Everything is difficult at the beginning and difficult at every turn!
It's very beautiful [admiration]. In fact, the first novel is very good, don't underestimate yourself, and you also know the shortcomings of the plot in the novel. However, I think the process of getting along with the male and female protagonists is really well written, and many small details are very touching! Although the author said that he always writes about the male and female protagonists eating, it is true that it is plain and simple. I have been reading books since 1989. Nowadays, many novels have exaggerated plots. After being attracted by the plot for a short time, I will be so excited that it is difficult to read it anymore. On the contrary, this kind of Tamsui novel, no matter in terms of plot, language description or various details, is difficult for people to calm down and read carefully. Looking forward to the author's next work [Sending Hearts].
Teacher, this is not the product of failure, but the failure to arrive at the great arrival. ##No drama, no ups and downs, just eating and getting off work, but these daily routines are written particularly well. CEOs are human beings too, and they also have to eat and sleep. When two people are together, they just squeeze in time to meet and have a meal together. This kind of detail is more poignant than those exaggerated plots. The dialogue is clean and non-verbal, and the characters stand up, not by the plot, but by the energy revealed in the words and deeds. The author puts the life on paper intact. Nowadays, the screen is full of ups and downs. It's really rare to see a novel that can make people calm down and watch two people have a good meal. That is not the product of failure, but an everyday inscription. ##Winning is a win after writing a book. The first one is not meant to be perfect, but meant to be completed. Don't put too much faith in your own self-denial. The passages that readers find interesting are often the passages that you find unusable. Write more, remember more, and the next book will be better than this one.
Although the article is very short, the character settings are still very complete, and the story development is reasonable. It was originally just good-looking, but when I saw the last sentence, the author felt that this article was a product of failure, and I felt that the author has really high requirements for himself. It is much more touching than many people who are not allowed to leave negative reviews if they are not well written. 😭
，，，，，，，，🥰
It's super nice and sweet, there are no misunderstandings or quarrels. I really like the characters of the male and female protagonists. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. I love watching it!
The character structure and personality are very good, but the overall look is depressing. The male protagonist should be wild if he has the capital. The female protagonist's revenge still depends on the male protagonist. The female protagonist has not become that powerful.
The author gave this first article 5 stars as encouragement. Although it is a short story, it has both the beginning and the end of the plot. However, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is too short. The male protagonist finally got to his cinnabar mole. Can't you let him flirt with it for a while? [Laughing]
[Five-Star Recommendation] Beautiful sisters, the writing is exquisite, and the plot advances quickly! The hero's restrained love is so cool! The heroine suddenly woke up and kicked the second male lead decisively! The male and female protagonists are running in both directions!
Is this the first book? The author's writing is so good. I stayed up late to read it [I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]
Read them all! ! Lian Lian and Pei Pei are both very good people. Their heartfelt love for each other makes them grow up together. The young couple is so sweet. I usually like to read sweet pet novels, and this novel is quite to my liking! Only when I saw the end did I realize that this is Dada's first work. It is very powerful, and many of the emotional descriptions in it are quite delicate. I hope Dada will continue to work hard! ! Come on! [Top post][grass has been planted][bird food masterpiece]
Very nice, not clunky
In fact, the capitalization is very good, but the ending is hasty.
It's pretty good, but the ending is not complete enough
The only drawback is that it is too short and the writing is quite delicate.
The writing style is very good and the writing is very gentle. The only flaw is that it is a bit short. Come on, come on [Love]
The details are OK, the content is compact, and it looks good. In fact, the writing is quite good and the characters are clearly drawn. Come on💪
The character creation is very charming, the emotions are delicate, the plot is not cliche, and it is enjoyable to watch.
Great author, I hope you will create better works. This is also the first time that I have read this novel so seriously. Looking forward to your new works
Nice! ! ! ! ! Author, you are awesome! The first one is already well written! Looking forward to more works
Love short novels!
The author writes so well, the details are very accurate, and the emotions are very delicate.
I went, and I must give it a five-star rating. It's very beautiful. The author is also a fan [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]