Transformed into an Elf, Almost Got Killed at the Beginning

The plot is very attractive to me and the author's writing is also good. I hope there is no male protagonist. The real Adjani is dead, and her love with Lien has stopped. I don't know what the author's final ending will be. After all, the protagonist is a modern girl who wears clothes. I hope he can go home in the end. If it is not a man who wears a girl, the plot of Adjani itself is quite good. After reading it, I felt more and more that the content was strange and uncomfortable. Is the author really a girl? Moreover, it was strange for a man to wear a woman at the beginning, and later he developed feelings for Lance... I can only comment on it, this is also my own opinion.

It can be regarded as a good marriage change novel. The overall transformation process of the heroine is so natural that it seems to have a sense of déjà vu in a female romance novel. The overall worldview setting is relatively simple, and there are not so many fancy settings, resulting in a plot that is not that interesting. However, the advantage is that most of the plot still focuses on the pull between the male and female protagonists, and the writing is relatively delicate. The follow-up suggestions can actually make the heroine stronger in terms of growth, not only in terms of mentality (from the current plot, the heroine often takes it for granted), but also in the previous setting, the heroine has sensitive senses, is proficient in herbal knowledge, and has good archery skills. Otherwise, the sense of déjà vu in "Honey Wife Literature" will be too heavy.

I like this work of the author very much, so I will give it five stars. As for those who deliberately give one star low scores, I am also very angry. I have been chasing it for three days in a row, most of the time every day. I really like it and hope the author will continue to work hard. Although the plot is a bit confusing to me, it is still within the acceptable range. At least it seems that there is no particularly big regret or anything that can kill me. The author must work hard!

The writing is pretty good, I just like the storyline of the second male lead that I don't know about, so please log off now. Invincible. From the moment I went to collect the ransom, I started crawling on the ground in a poisonous manner, just like the dog on the roadside. When I saw a piece of history, I ran over to enjoy it. The result was chocolate 🤮 It's not like this kind of thing is sweet. I still have dozens of chapters saved, I will open them when I feel like my life is satisfactory.

Yes, yes, yes, there are few books on Tomato that focus on psychological description. Although the template is old-fashioned, the male and female protagonists have distinct characters, and the female protagonist also has changes in her heart. There is something new among the old, stable and innovative, and a rare source of free food. The introduction makes people think that it is written by a novice, which can easily lead to lightning protection and support.

It's really beautiful, but the updated content is still too depressing, but the sense of immersion is very strong. If I were the heroine, I would kill myself on the spot. I look forward to the future development🤓

The book is 13 years old. Overall, this book has flaws. Some details and plots are a bit immature, but overall, it's still good! If it were placed on a book of the same type on Tomato, it would basically be a flash sale. First, the author should have his own observations and thoughts on many details in life, which can be found in the book. Second, the author's writing style is short and concise, which is very suitable for online reading. I want friends who understand it to know what I am talking about. Third, the author still has a certain degree of literary literacy in some text contents, and there is room for improvement, but if you look at Tomato's genre, it should be said that it is relatively good. To sum up, I hope the author can continue his efforts, conceive more interesting plots, grasp the overall rhythm, and finish this book with peace of mind. It will definitely have a place in the tomato genre. Come on! (Purely beat by hand)

Yeah, yeah, there are few books on Tomato that focus on psychological description, although the template is old-fashioned. However, the male and female protagonists have distinct characters, and the female protagonist also has changes in her heart. There is something new, it is stable and innovative, and it is a rare source of free food, which is the introduction. If people think it is written by a novice, it will easily lead to lightning protection and support one hand.

Almost four stars, I gave it five because the writing is normal among canned tomato novels, but the plot feels a little on the boring side. It's not sweet enough, and it's not bitter enough, so it's moderate. Update it quickly, my dear, update it soon (I feel like I can buy some if I have good results)

This is what I want to see😭😭The psychological struggle and transformation, the comparison with the previous life. Also, where there are details that need to be written, write them in detail [Adoration] [Adoration] I feel like I have met my destiny.

Enjoyable slave opening😋delicious

The writing is quite good, describing fear and the like, and the description is quite good. The emotional development is relatively slow, but it is a bit heavy-handed. Different people have different opinions. Some people like to read it, and some people don't like to read it. This is not a good review. When reading this book, I suggest that everyone should not bring real-life moral standards into it.

I read it in one sitting in the middle of the night and it was very interesting. It is a rare article that describes psychological activities in a delicate and vivid way. It also involves marriage change and forced love. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is sour and sweet. The female protagonist's complaints and emotional changes are also well written. It is a bit sadistic in the early stage but very cute in the later stage. You must have it.

This book puts aside some very detailed aspects, but the plot is quite interesting. Toxic brothers in the back [vomit] It's not just the book that has a problem

Although the heroine is a bit silly at times, overall it is pretty good in a marriage-changing novel. Don't give the author a low score. To be honest, I thought the score was deliberately controlled. I would give this book an 8.7 To 9.1. Objectively speaking, it is a book that I can read.

It's very interesting, I support it with five stars. It's the first time I read this type of novel. I just hope that Lien and the elf named Ai will be fine. I really saw that they are not good, and I can't stand it [crying] [crying]

The content is very good and interesting. I hope the author will keep updating it.

The writing style is considered to be better. If you like to change the price, you can give it a try, but it is a bit slow to warm up. I don't care about the rest. The look and feel is very good. At least it looks comfortable to me [laughs]

This kind of subject matter is quite new to me. I have read more than 200 chapters without realizing it. The author is quick to update [laughter] I feel that the plot after getting the ransom and returning to Black Rock Castle is a bit fragmented, and it looks a bit awkward [eating melon]

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It's very interesting to watch, and the interaction between the protagonists is also very interesting. I like the slave elf in the beginning [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

Still enchanted golden apples, high quality and fire resistant, keep going

Although it is not an undisputed good book, it definitely shouldn't be rated this way. It's emotionally delicate, that is, it's a bit more engaging, so no matter what, it's a 7. If you don't like it, don't read it. What's wrong with negative reviews?

Yes, it would be nice if the heroine could understand Lance better. Giving him love is not just a given. Care and pleasing are not the same concept. Suffering masters Reen and Erdan~, it's a sad story that you goddesses can't help themselves.

A very delicious book written😋[laughs]

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, it's a book specially written for m.

All the descriptions are quite good, especially the one about the legality of slavery, which is quite infuriating. What's also a bit strange is that the protagonist is the eldest lady of a certain elf family, but there is no one from the elf side to look for. I don't know if I missed it or if it came later (the part about the two male elves was skipped directly)

Hmm... I think it has to do with everyone's different state of mind. I was a little bit rushing to read it at first, but I didn't expect that I had begun to be really attracted by this book. I no longer wanted to read that kind of episode, but started to look forward to the follow-up. At present, this book is still very good for this kind of subject matter, and the psychological description is very rich, but too few people have read it. I don't want this book to be discontinued because it is not popular enough. I hope the author can continue to work hard

The subject matter is very novel. Come on, author.

I hope that book friends who have read this book will give the author a review if they think it is good. It is definitely not a moral kidnapping. I just feel that the author writes so well and the rating is so low. It is very hard! ! !