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Not bad. There are just repetitive plots. I hope the author will comment on the next draft. . Also the camping plot is too little and too bland. At least fishing, digging for wild vegetables and so on. There is also a linkage with Qingyin. But we need to prioritize. Look at the title of your book. Look at the content again. Obviously the plot of Qingyin outweighs the camping.

Very good, just a little lighter😋

It's really good, the characters are vivid and not OC, and the protagonist doesn't have any poisonous points. The plot is also quite relaxed and daily. The beginning is also quite attractive, it's a really good book

When will we start camping for the second time🏕️