At the Beginning, There Are Two Commanders, and the Marshal Uses Child Labor.
开局双令使，元帅用童工
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Gender Change (Male to Female). Show Off. Very Cool and Handsome. One Cannot Be Missing.
I want to see content similar to "Boys who dream of becoming magical girls will turn into witches". It needs to be changed directly from the first few chapters, and it needs to be 8.0 Or above.
Are There Any Books About Star Rail That Cannot Replace the Original Protagonist?
There Is a Shortage of Books, Please Give Me Books
Funny + single female protagonist + superpowers or systems, preferably if the male protagonist and female protagonist are childhood sweethearts, sweet. Please.
Want to Read a Really Interesting Book?
I want to watch content similar to "Beng Tie: Eating the Space Station in the First Three Minutes". You, come here, yes, it's you. Are you fed up with the same routines over and over again and want to find novels that are truly refreshing? Now that you have met it, take it and see it
I've Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, Do You Guys Have Any Recommendations?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Organization IX".
If There Is Any Broken Iron, Don't Hook the Stone!
I've Really Had Enough of Diaosi Acting, Let's Do Something Decent
The True Bengtie Fanfic Does Not Need to Regard Destiny as a Fantasy of Cultivating Immortals.
Want to watch something like "Beng Tie: What should I do if Ms. Black Tower looks at me like this?" Content.
Looking for a Book Where the Main Character of Beng Tie Is the Envoy of the Star God
There Are No Good Books Left in Bengtie
Are there any books by Ompharos?
Are There Any Bengtie Fanfics Where the Main Character Is Female (No Need to Change from Male to Female)
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Becoming a Star God".
Breaking Iron Watching Movies!
A book that introduces the ruthless people of the Bengtie faction to all worlds.
Bengtie, Ompharos, Good Book (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
I would like to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: The Inscription of Salvation Beginning with Omphalos".
Are There Any High-Quality Mi Family Fanfics?
I want to read a book similar to "Zero Zero: Rebirth of the Charming Rabbit". Pay attention to high quality
There Is No Magic Left in the Collapse of Iron. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue.
I want to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: Chapter 51 Spinning Elbow Attack Nanook". Get some Bengtie books
We Bengtie Are Also Lonely and Have No Good Articles at All＼(`δ')／
Beng Tiewen, the male protagonist does not want a harem! ! ! !
Is There a Female Protagonist Who Is a Bengtie Heroine? If She Doesn't Want to Be Transgender, Can She Be a Girl from the Beginning?
Are There Any Mihoyo Characters Participating in the National Games? (No Weird Talk About Rules)
The Dual Heroines of Genshin Impact/beng Tie May Have No Cp (Only the Heroine's)
I don't need anything else, ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧, ヾ(￣▽￣) Good people may live a safe life
It's pretty good to watch, the main plot is to go home, An Ge has memory problems [Thinking] Open the gold finger very much, don't worry about being bullied [Shy] An Ge has done a good job, he is still an underage child [Thinking] Disciple Jingliu, looking forward to the Luofu copy and the beginning of the plot [Learned]
The writing is very good, the sentences and words are not repeated, and it is clear and clear to read, without the disgusting feeling of repeating it. The structure of the story is also very large, with just a few chapters, especially the sentence "I want to see it, want to change something". I am looking forward to the direction of the story in the future, and I am also looking forward to what kind of slow and romantic story the author can rewrite this story into. And there are still two systems, the character popularity system. It seems that if I didn't do this in the early stage, it would be a cool article (I can do anything), and it shouldn't be like that peachy fairy lady who writes swords for the players throughout the process. I have said that I am looking forward to the story, and I want to know how the author of Faros will write it. Miss Corrosion next door already has a child with Miss Ellie. (Tsk tsk tsk, the daughter of the king of the virus world and the miracle girl - the memory master of Faros - Her Royal Highness Princess Ilysia, who hugs the big and small Xilian on both sides) It is a pity that the author does not describe this side very much, and now he has to write about the Holy Grail War
I'm looking forward to the plot of Cloud Five. I don't know how long it will be. I want to see [Send Heart]. The overall writing is good, but the description of (that's not... But a kind of... Look) can be appropriately reduced. From the first chapter to the end, the description of the character's eyes and emotions is a bit too much. Also, the paragraph about the appearance of the main character was a bit too much at the beginning, but the writing became much better when I wrote it later. I really like the interaction between the little pigeon and other characters. It's so cute and cute (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~ Come on, author, please update [shy]
Well, give yourself a five-star review. This book is sweet first and then cruel, with a mixture of sweet and sad, but it is not brainless. The author will try his best to ensure that the logic is correct. If there is anyone who really can't match Beng Tie, just treat it as a private one! Baby Ange is the most adorable in the world! Spoilers don't actually count as spoilers, after all the author has many ideas and only knows the plot a few hours before the reader. Everyone knows the protagonist, General Cangcheng and Master of Jingliu, the dual envoys of hunting and protection, the Summoner of Kings Canyon, and the [Tonghe] Star God Xipei. This is considered a cool article about female fans. Female fans don't love women, so why should I write about female fans? Isn't that right, my dears? Are you hiding your identity? Hehehe Well, the bearer of [miracles], the patron saint of the ancient country, and the dragon god. Title: Taichu Xuanyuan Qiming Suppresses Demons Anjiang Fuhai Great Emperor It always feels a little weird [thinking] The rough order is, from Cangcheng to Yunshangwuxiao (all members survived) - Collapse of Iron Pioneers perspective: Black Tower Space Station to the end of Pinoconi, Fairy Boat Starry Sky Martial Arts Ceremony - [Tonghe] and [Order] - player perspective, plus the special event [Remembering the Past] (Ange's), the Star Qiong is tentatively set at 300,000 (for our little pigeons) - Pioneer/player perspective: High Dimension + King's Continent + Ancient Country + How to become Xipei. This is what I have in mind for now, and may change when I write it down.
I'm reading... Well, the descriptions are beautiful, but I always feel like I'm reading prose. I didn't pay attention. I found that I couldn't finish this chapter. The description of appearance takes up a lot of chapters. But when I looked at the table of contents, I was shocked. There were so many words and I forgave them instantly. The story is worth looking forward to!
Super, super, super pretty! The author may be writing a book for the first time so he has no experience. The first few chapters are about 10,000 words. The content is also super cool! Tongxue Orthodoxy is in Xianzhou [laughing] [blowing kiss]
The writing is okay, but doesn't Saving Cangcheng have an experience card for Nuwa? Could it be that Nuwa still can't save Cangcheng? Do you want to use dangerous methods? Then I can become an envoy
It's good to watch. I'm looking forward to entering the main story. When will the protagonist take Cangcheng to the real expedition? I want to see the protagonist kill everyone.
It's very beautiful and very delicate. The main text must be free of any censorship! By the way, I'd like to ask someone who gets on the train to be a star! It still feels good so far, and the feeling of anticlimax that usually appears in Star Iron fanfics is also very weak. The immature feeling of writing in the novel at the beginning is gradually disappearing. Now it has reached the plot of Cloud Five. I may feel relieved to see that everyone survives (?) But in fact, I still want a knife in my heart, haha. Ha, I felt a strange sense of satisfaction when I saw what the author said in other book reviews that this article is both sweet and sad (?). I can feel that the article has an outline, and there is no feeling of hammering here and there. Let me say it weakly, I feel that the article is a bit long. I have just reached the beginning of cloud five after four or five million. Of course, if you want to write a long novel, please ignore this sentence! I don't feel that the text is lengthy, just a little question (˙-˙) Another little suggestion, could you please explain some of the plots in King of Kings properly (actually, I don't play King of Kings at all, so I don't understand some parts) Then again, the one who gets on the train is our Xingbao⸝⸝ ᷇࿀ ᷆⸝⸝ The article is great and the author is great. It seems like there is only one chapter but it is actually a big chapter. The language is clear and the wording is not monotonous. I look forward to the plot in the future! Let the knife come more violently!
A novel that can be read
It looks good. I suggest you buy more.
Good, good, very good. Chapter 91, that knife, can't we be more normal? You can tell me whether it's due to a lack of emotion or an inability to express it. You can also tell me that the heart is gone. It's a little knife.
Not bad, at least for me it would be great if it can be read smoothly. Come on, author.
It's good-looking and interesting, but it's just a bit lacking. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's beautiful and of high quality, and the author's writing is very good.
Love it! ! The rating for such a good article is too low! I'm starting to look forward to An Ge's identity being exposed later! Please teacher, please update more! !
Is there CP? Is CP a diamond?
It would be great if the author could send some pictures to the book. That long description makes people want pictures [like]
Beautiful, so beautiful
Feel good about yourself
A very good book
Looks good, I like Ange very much
Looking for a extra CP diamond (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)
Pretty good fanfic
I haven't seen such a normal book in a long time.
It looks pretty good so far, but I hope Yunwu will do well in the future [cry][cry][cry]
Okay, okay, grab the author and refine it, update quickly =ᗜωᗜ=
It's okay, just a little bit toxic in some places, it's pretty good-looking
It looks good and the writing is very comfortable. I look forward to the follow-up.
Very beautiful, I really want to keep it! But what if I'm afraid of death?