Rebirth of the Server, the First Koi in the Delta

This is a random work by King Tang, please readers please lightly spray QAQ

It's a pretty good novel. The characters are well written, but the plot is a bit general (a bit cliche in human terms). I hope the author can be more innovative after reading my review. Thank you.

It's a novel about a delta rat type that I like very much. (That is, you can be a dick, you have good luck, touch things, and become a host. It's fun to watch. Don't engage in some stinky club or something that you can't understand. This kind of stuff in the future will basically be separated from the protagonist)

Good looking good looking Another: "Reminding Fu" I admire your splendor, and my heart beats with longing. I recall how amazing it was when I first read it, as if I was enjoying the spring breeze. The exquisiteness of the words is like the splendor of a brocade. Every time I unroll my scroll, I am meditating on it. I often waste my time eating and forget about it. He suddenly stopped writing and stopped working, which made everyone feel hesitant. I am tired of reading the old chapters, but I am eagerly looking forward to the new chapters. The day is late and difficult, the night is long but not yet young. Looking at the king's door, he hesitates, and he is anxious and hurts. You are so talented and virtuous, how can you allow your inspiration to be hidden? In the past, my writing seemed to be full of energy, so why am I so hesitant now? Don't be disturbed by worldly affairs and put aside trivial matters for a while. Quickly hold on and continue to work, soothing our hot intestines. I look forward to the new chapter coming out soon, just like the drought-stricken seedlings looking forward to the rain. If the beautiful chapter continues again, hit the knot and sing loudly. May you not hesitate again and show your talent to the fullest. I will look forward to it with eager anticipation, waiting for the masterpiece to come.

The content of the first part was pretty good, but after the addition of human-machine friends, the plot felt like it completely deviated from the theme and added a lot of extra plots. It should be the result of the author Kavin not knowing how to write and then finding another way. But I personally don't really like watching extra plot content, so I don't plan to watch it. (The dozen chapters in the latest update on 7.27 Are all) Although there is content about Princess Haverk in the introduction, I thought the proportion was not very large, but if this situation continues, it will develop into a proportion that I should not be able to accept.

It's very delicious😋, not too poisonous, it's just that I can update ten chapters a day [laughs]

The relaxed and casual writing is good and moderate. It has a feeling like a sweet dessert. It is like walking out of the artificial forest and into the savanna. Please continue to persevere. You can ask readers to rate it appropriately. If it is too relaxed, you will be immersed in it accidentally.

You can see that this book is also very beautiful Then just stop talking about mining out of nowhere, okay? It's very embarrassing to put it outside. . I heard that it's useless if the word count is not enough, so I just launched the Thunder Language System to do an activity to make up the word count, okay? This book is also invincible. You can see that this is the most interesting book for me. It is also a female protagonist. Is it a female colleague? Then there were negative reviews. I thought the author was a girl. So I went and applied for the author to fly to Thailand for mysterious surgery. Then celebrate the first time [laughing][laughing][laughing] Then the author, please do your best to update, yes Oh no, I didn't have enough words to make it into a long review. I'm also very sad, okay? Author, can you update a hundred pictures at a time and scare me?

I'm thinking about whether the identity of the protagonist's Delta could be the eldest lady of the Hafk Group, Said's angel investor, Gherroth's savior, Raven's childhood sweetheart, and Reis's White Moonlight [laughing]

I came in because I was bored, but I didn't expect it to be very good, and it is recognized by old bookworms (see my time)

A very good book, the characters are well described, the interaction with netizens is very interesting, the idea of describing the protagonist from the perspective of other anchors is very novel, the plot is very coherent, and it is very comfortable to read, ram👍 Here are suggestions or complaints: the main plot is not very clear, and it is not clear where the ending will develop (or I haven't read much yet)

It looks very comfortable. To be honest, when Friends of Man and Machine reached level 3, I already felt that it was going downhill, especially when it came to the doctor's easter egg mission. However, the author's handling made it not so difficult for me to accept. As long as the rhythm is controlled well, please give me a lot of encouragement.

The content of this book is very delicious, and the plot is also very good. It is completely worthy of the word "Koi". There are a few small mistakes at the beginning, but they do not affect the reading at all. Zhou Zhou's character design is very good.

[Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] So, for the sake of the five stars I gave you, can the author update 4 times a day (Super Small Voice: Actually, 4 updates are not enough...)

The book is very beautiful and rich in content, but I have a question: why does such a beautiful book come with such a thunderous cover?

It's quite good. I haven't read anything about Zhou before. This book seems good to me. The plot is well written, as are the characters. Overall, it's a good read. Come on, author*^o^*

I quite like it, but this friend-machine thing is too cool. If the human-machine doesn't fight you, it will make way for you. How can no one suspect cheating? Miss Hafk looks a bit uncomfortable. ╰_╯The human-machine cleans up on its own, so why are the player protagonists fighting? (￣.￣)

Wo Ri made me discover the treasure. I was originally frustrated because I had finished a Delta book that I had read earlier, but now it has given me a big boost! You must stick to it! Also, I don't know if Delta will come later, because Friends of Man and Machine 3 gave me this feeling, but it doesn't matter if it happens or not, because I believe in the author! It's really beautiful!

It's really good. Make it faster. There's no need to write the time too slowly and live a new gameplay every day. You can use similar abbreviations for the live content in the middle to jump in time, otherwise it will be difficult to push the timeline [grievance]

In Delta, everything is so-so, and it's all the same old routines. Although it's not very new, I just love watching it. After there is no problem, there is a big tree for shade, and the live broadcast of the guild is funny and daily, and the back is more casual, which is not bad, and it also has a bit of peer support, such as the daily national science and technology map, transformation potions, which are not available here, and it is comfortable to listen to.

It's quite interesting to watch. Although I don't know who those big anchors are, I've only played Delta for a few days and I finished reading it before I knew it. The author should update it soon, otherwise I will have to kill this book.

It looks good. It's quite pleasant to take a look after the dam was elbowed. I hope there will be no cp, regardless of gender [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The content of the novel is okay. There is a lot of interaction between the author and the readers. Basically, he will listen to the readers' opinions and occasionally let the readers make guest appearances. Although there will be some minor mistakes in writing, they will be corrected in time when they are discovered. The subject matter of the novel is okay and the plot content has a lot of room for growth. I hope the author can write more in the future. Hurry up and update it, it's not enough at all

The protagonist is cute, there is no silly pretentious plot, and there are very few disgusting barrage descriptions. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, making it suitable for casual viewing.

Yes, the content is quite good, but the anchor's writing is too soft, like Bai Ze Xiaoxiao, giving people a soft feeling. The settings are good, with some AI flavor, but I can tell that I wrote it, and it should have been polished with AI (pure speculation). I don't recommend it to friends who like Onslaught. Some settings are not rigorous, but overall it is good. I hope the author will work hard and update [laughing]

The description is very good. Anyway, it is very fascinating to read.

Uh-huh, I feel so bad if I don't watch it for a day. The author's soul is back. The author's soul is back. Please update as soon as possible. ／￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣ | ＼ ￣￣∨￣￣￣￣￣￣ ∧＿∧ (∀) (つつヾ (＿_)＿)

It's a nice casual article, but the rhythm is a bit poor. It seems that some of the heroine's life has been inserted, but there is a connection. What's more, it lacks the description of the heroine and others when she became famous at the beginning. It is all mentioned in one stroke later. The conversation between the anchors is also a bit more than describing the protagonist. I would like to give you some suggestions ~ [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

This book is still very good to read, but the third update is a bit too short.

It's good to watch and I enjoyed watching it, but the barrage suggestions made me a little uncomfortable. But I can still give it 9.5 Points. The number of words is still very small at the moment. I have to keep it up.