After Time Travel, I Took Myself as My Concubine

Five stars for the writing and story rhythm, as well as for the scolding the author may receive (. The writing is really good, and the author dares to write it. The male protagonist is not generally unlikable, but I hope the author sticks to his heart and writes it. This kind of character also has its own tension. The audience who can't stand it can just avoid it by themselves. It also made me mistakenly fall into the abuse. Although I hope the author can stick to his heart, he still hopes to treat our heroine better. She is really pitiful [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]

I hope the heroine can go home in the end and not fall into the clichés of ancient times. Sisters who haven't watched it yet, please quit now. The heroine is the standard heroine in a sadistic novel. She is starting to fall in love.

It's a very interesting novel, and the foreshadowing that should be buried in the front is buried. I look forward to the plot behind the little monk and Pei, and the emotional line between the general and the heroine is also very interesting. It is very interesting, and it is just one sentence: he intends, she avoids. Both the general and the heroine are highly intelligent people. The general is like a big bad wolf who moves forward step by step, restraining himself from sinking in his wakefulness. He thinks that the heroine is a cunning white rabbit who cannot escape from the web she weaves. But he does not know that the heroine is a modern person. Underneath her soft appearance, she is desperate. In the end, the heroine must have walked away~~

She is really super good-looking, tied. Xiao Xie is really very good. She understands Buddhism, is good at chess, is educated, and her beauty is the least worth mentioning. At the beginning, she was already prepared to become a concubine in order to survive, but the male protagonist picked on her for various subjective reasons. The female protagonist re-entered the male protagonist's sight through her own literary accomplishments, and she also made a decision not to become a concubine. Later, the male protagonist regretted it and asked the female protagonist to bear his child for him, which made me sad the most. What makes me angry is that the male protagonist thought she was a spy from Xiliang and asked her to kill someone. But without this plot, I believe the female protagonist would have fallen into the male protagonist's feelings at that time. The author's writing style is really good. Although this scene made me angry, I still watched it with gusto and looked forward to the subsequent plot. Come on [Love]

1-200 Looks good 230 is becoming more and more separated from the descriptions of the heroine in the previous chapters. Facing the male protagonist, the bottom line of IQ and dignity is lowered. Facing other people's "profitable" various online display talents and abilities Except for the male protagonist, everyone else is just a tool. It goes back to the trend of female protagonists in sadistic novels in the early 20th century.

Overall it's pretty good, but there are some parts where I don't quite understand what the heroine wants to do and what her purpose is.

It's very interesting to watch. The male and female protagonists are clearly portrayed. I hope the author will update it more. The supporting characters are also well told and have very distinct character traits. I think the little royal family is a bit cute, but it was actually a bit miserable under the oppression of the feudal era. The male protagonist's inner slander when facing Xiao Wang also makes him more vivid. He is not like an NPC male protagonist who is completely indifferent to all women except the female protagonist. On the contrary, the male protagonist has compromises and entanglements. Such emotions are not limited to the female protagonist. I would prefer such vivid characters.

It has an ancient flavor, and the writing is okay. This completely frivolous writing style magically has no logical problems, because there is no logic at all and it mainly moves people with emotion. Boredom can pass the time.

The story is very well written, but I read it as a horror novel. It is really not easy for the heroine. This is not a happy article. The heroine's experience would have been tortured to death or killed by others. I hope she can have a perfect ending and can leave ancient times and return to her family (although it seems that the author may not give this ending)

Not bad, the author's writing is good. The description of the pull between Xie Huiyin and Xue Yunzhu is very graphic [admiration]. The heroine also works very hard to survive. She is quite cute and has her own unique charm. Although he is always played by the male protagonist. [Facepalm] The interaction between the two of them is so funny every time, and I am so excited when I watch it... The portrayal of the two female supporting characters is also good, they are not annoying without brains and logic, and they are more in line with ancient society. At present, it seems that the love line should be a branch line, and the plot of the plot will be focused on later (only my personal opinion) Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the next plot [love] [blowing kiss]

The writing is indeed very good, and there are no sudden turns in the psychological dynamics, surpassing many low-intellectual novels. I hope the author will update it soon. I don't know if it will happen. To be honest, I really want to, but judging from their characters, I don't think I can fall in love with them. Unless something happens, like a giant clawed horse that destroys the world and destroys life and death?

Agreed, it looks good, but it's sad. The mistress, alas, was about to be tortured badly. She was much better than the real slave on the other side, but she was strangled and had a knife put on her neck several times, which was also very miserable. Who does the heroine marry in the end? Is the prince Hengqing? Only seen it once. Oh, what a sin

It's very interesting. The heroine is dressed in a strange ancient costume. Everything around her is as unreal as paper figures. She wants to come back. The only clue connecting the two worlds is the Huguo Temple, which only the royal family can enter. So she wants to survive and go home. She sells herself as a concubine and stays in Prince Wei's Mansion for two years. After getting her identity certificate, she is free. The heroine has a strong heart. This is a story with a big heroine, which may subvert the previous time-travel novels. There must be a strong male protagonist to protect her, so the rating is relatively low. But if you look closely, it's still very interesting. The author's writing style is very good, he has great ideas and has a strong core. I want to praise you more, but I don't have any ideas, hey

Now that I've seen it, I think it's pretty good, but I feel it's a bit unsatisfactory. I want to gain some weight before reading it again. The author's writing is good, and the characters are fleshed out. Every heroine with brains is oppressed by old ideas, which makes me feel distressed. Although the second heroine is a reborn girl, she doesn't seem to have more innate advantages 🧠 Or she doesn't have enough brains. Anyway, I am still looking forward to the following plot.

Another novel that equals another one. I don't read much ancient Chinese novels now. This one is really good. The plot is very compact and it feels more partial. It's rare that the later stages are better than the early ones. Many of them are good at the beginning but start to get messed up later [Thinking][Thinking]

The characters of each character are well written, and the plot is very compact and no nonsense. The only flaw is that sometimes the connection is not very good. I am a native dog and I like to read this kind of classic sadistic novels. Although the routine is very cliché, I secretly hope that the ending will be different from the classic sadistic novels. There will be no reunion and no other choice of destination, so that the heroine can come and go clean again.

The writing is very good and can make people calm down and read it. There is something particularly touching about the woman. She is not compromised by money. Although there are some parts in the middle that look vague, the flaws are not hidden and the overall quality is very good.

Xue will not be the male protagonist... I feel that this character design was OK 10 years ago, but it is not suitable now. Until now, he has never respected the heroine who only cares about his own thoughts. His self-righteous affection is a bit too much.

When I see it now, I feel like the author has been reading the book for many years. But I am considered a novice when writing by myself The writing is OK, but the male protagonist's activities are made too clear. Each plot is relatively conventional. But I feel like I can find my own path by writing a few more books. The future is promising ok the author is back I'm more interested than when I first started

The writing is very good, but the transitions often don't connect with the previous ones. I feel a little confused while listening to the book. I have to take it out and read it from time to time to see if I missed anything [face covering]. I have to watch and read at the same time. It's not friendly to those who listen to the book. Overall, it's very good. I recommend it.

Look, look, look, I won't say a word, I'm a bitch and I have to click in [laughs]

The writing is very good, not mindless, it is very beautiful and deserves high marks. Both virgins, the girl has a pure heart, and the male protagonist has Bai Yueguang and a different wife. I never read White Moonlight, so I flipped through a few chapters and skipped to the end. It was so good that I couldn't bear to not read it. It was a rare occasion when I read the end of the movie and watched it from beginning to end without missing a word. I felt that it would be great to watch on TV. The male protagonist Xue Yunzhu has a childhood sweetheart, Green Tea Bai Yueguang, who is emotionally unstable and a bit cold and violent. He is a career-oriented male protagonist who is capable of speaking and doing things. The female protagonist can better help his career development. The male protagonist is a bit of a scumbag emotionally, but I understand it, and I actually quite like this male protagonist. . Watching him, it was natural for him to fall in love with Bai Yueguang and then fall in love with the heroine. After the heroine became pregnant, she still had sense and no desire to fall in love and wanted to stay as a concubine. Green Tea and White Moonlight act like monsters in various ways, and their affection for the male protagonist is not nourished but only consumed. However, the male protagonist is gradually attracted to the excellent female protagonist and falls in love with her unconsciously. The process is in line with human nature and cured my mental mysophobia of "retrospective jealousy". The female protagonist stands side by side with the male protagonist based on her ability, looking forward to the cremation of the wife after the concubine period is over. Don't break it, don't end it, bless you🙏

The heroine has a difficult start. There is an old lady who is eyeing her and telling her to get out before she has a baby. There is a jealous first wife who screams and kills her. Outside, there is Bai Yueguang who occupies the heart of the male protagonist. The female protagonist just wants to survive, but the male protagonist will kill her if she gets angry. What to do, if you feel unjust, fight. Imitate Bai Yueguang to complete the task of giving birth to a baby first, but after imitating, the male protagonist becomes unhappy? ! The dog is about to slap itself in the face. The male protagonist's heartbeat process is quite interesting, I look forward to the follow-up!

2 This is a rare and good article, the characters are lovable but not overwhelming, the plot is novel and not clichéd, and the emotional line is gradual. I sincerely recommend everyone to read it! The more you read, the more interesting it becomes, and it's worth revisiting again and again.

Saw the latest. Maybe I'm not suitable for reading this kind of article. In ancient times, women were abused first and then men. You can probably guess what happens next.

It's okay. It's written in great detail so far that the male protagonist's heart changes from Bai Yueguang to the female protagonist. It feels a bit like a rival drama, but this kind of script about a male superiority should have a status (status) game in the end. The author's skills are good.

I have just read a few chapters, and the inner analysis of the characters described is very good. An open-minded woman with deep connotation, some great wisdom and small thoughts, and a big ice cube that is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, but moisturizes everything and merges with the heart of the male protagonist little by little! There's no escape!

This is one of the few novels that I am willing to equal. The pull between the male and female protagonists is very attractive, and the characters of each character are also very vivid and brilliant. Moreover, the female protagonist is unique among all the online soul-transporting rebirths in this setting. How to conceal her identity in another world and how to survive in troubled times makes me unable to rest in peace every day, and she constantly makes calculations just to survive.

This is my first review, the author writes really well! The heroine is smart and dried. I love her.

I like it very much, well written. The rating is too low. . 9·5 Points or above