Traveling through the world of cultivating immortals, Lu Chenzhou became a loser who was used as a furnace by the Hehuan Sect. His martial soul was broken and he suffered humiliation. The sect leader forcibly extracted the power of pure Yang and died on the spot!
In a desperate situation, the remnant soul of the ancient elixir awakens and helps him come back to life!
The spirit of martial arts is broken? Directly recast the ancient Yingying Divine Sword!
A waste of cultivation? Soared overnight and defeated the whole audience!
Those who bullied me and insulted me in the past will be repaid a hundredfold today!
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From a humble furnace to the co-master of immortals and gods, in this life, he will take charge of the world, sweep away the arrogant people, and aspire to be the world leader!
Reader comments
Overall, it's good. There's no stomachache plot, but it's quite routine. The emotional scenes need to be polished, and the details and rationality need to be improved. Obviously the world view is good, but I guess I couldn't continue writing it and ended with death. If you want to write about it, I think you can read it later, at least it's not toxic. And the harem has been opened [laughs]
Overall, it's good. There's no stomachache plot, but it's quite routine. The emotional scenes need to be polished, and the details and rationality need to be improved. Obviously the world view is good, but I guess I couldn't continue writing it and ended with death. If you want to write about it, I think you can read it later, at least it's not toxic. And the harem has been opened [laughs]
Not long-winded, straight to the point