I Transmigrated to the Tang Dynasty, and the System Appeared in My Dreams from the Start
穿越大唐，开局系统托梦
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 329k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical High-Concept
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
153Chapters
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Reader comments 21
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After reading 40 chapters, major events such as the Xuanwu Gate were easily brushed off. I wrote almost ten chapters about running away from home after thinking about random things. The character of the protagonist is not likeable, he is submissive and has no achievements.
I saw Chapter 41. Well, the senses are not very good, but the subject matter, concept, and outline are all good. But the writing and plot are so poor, I just say whatever comes to mind. It's not true to say that he has lowered his intelligence. After all, he didn't rub your IQ on the ground. It's not right to say that he didn't lower his intelligence. After all, he is stupid. It should be said that everyone is stupid. The whole writing style feels like this. The author should not be able to control multi-person dialogue scenes, and can only control 1v1 dialogue. There is also a purpose. It feels like there is no reasonable goal or purpose. The general direction is there, but the small directions and goals, as well as the goals of this chapter and the goals of this volume, are all missing. Just write casually, but keep it in this general direction. The writing style is still not enough, and the plot concept is not good, but the innovative subject matter is good, and the angle is also good. The writing style is flawed, and the plot is also flawed. After all, the article is not a good article, and a good article must be brainless, but this is not it. After a comprehensive evaluation, the senses are not good. Not very recommended
Awesome, time travel doesn't change history, you just traveled through time 🙂
Stop looking, the left brain beats the right brain
It looked great, but the whole Yi Xiaochuan 2.0 Came out?? If there are restrictions on this and that, how can you travel through time? It cannot be changed. Also create a fate threshold
That's interesting, why hasn't anyone seen it?
Wanting to write about Bu Qing in the Tang Dynasty seems to be out of reach at present.
It doesn't look good, it's too boring, you can't change history, you can only follow the script, it's boring
Given so many restrictions, I don't want to read it.
It's a mess, it's all time travel and there are some rules and regulations. It's better to think about how to write the plot better. Waste energy on internal consumption.