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Certainly! The meaning of liking is very broad. It can be called liking for friends, family or lovers. I like her in a friendly way. ∠(°ゝ°)Always salute! The content is reasonable and well-founded. As a fanfic of You Invasion, I am very happy that there is no content that is made up to suppress the genuine heroine. The character's personality is also relatively restored and does not collapse the character design. Come on, teacher! Yunyou is also a very cute and cute marshmallow [please update] Like +10046——IP . Lighthouse XX

It's really cute. It's also the first time I've seen a game invasion fanfic. The nightmare and the dream (reality) seem to be two timelines, and the experience is quite heartwarming. If it's a nightmare... Zaizai being tortured by Su, it's... Quite heartbreaking, although this is necessary growth...

The content is okay. Compared to other fics I've seen, the writing style is much better. I don't mean to offend anyone. Everyone has their own preferences. In addition, Xunge OOC warning It's a bit... Outrageous to let people who have only known her for a short time know about her talent for stealing gods. Tulan even knows a little about it. How could Xun Ge show all of her talent to others? Even if it is finished, the people in the original article only know that this is just a stealing type of skill, and no one really understands the whole story! If you can't stand this, you can just leave where you are. Of course, if the author is willing to modify it, he can change from directly showing the heroine the talent of stealing the god to telling the heroine the function of stealing the god (referring to only getting the talent value of others) to achieve a win-win situation. I feel like it will be compensated and everyone can accept it as much as possible. As for level ranking, the strength displayed in real battles is the most important! ! ! And it is actually useless at later levels, the numerical value is the important thing. For example: Xun Ge killed Mist Blade and others and merged them into Zhijiu. The level was lowered due to the world limit, but the value remained unchanged. There must be no change in strength! So I hope everyone won't be so entangled. Regarding the level rankings, the combat power shown is the most important thing, right? Yunyou is cute and the content has not been modified. The previous one is a little suggestion I have read so far, I hope the author can read it. There are not many fans of the game Invasion so far. I hope the teacher's writing will get better and better. I look forward to the follow-up towers and content that enters the game. ∠(°ゝ°)Always salute! ————Comes from an ordinary person named Zaijiu

Nice fanfic I feel like I've lost my temper (I can't stand being the second best)

You were too anxious to tie the protagonist and Yu Xunge together, and you didn't say it was wrong, because Yu Xunge was really only qualified to be by her side when he was weak, but he would never reveal his trump card, remember? Yu Xunge doesn't feel safe!

There are too few game invasion fanfics, SO must keep writing them.

I feel that Xun Ge is a bit too trusting, so I could add a contract that "both parties shall not betray each other", which is unlikely to be violated anyway (I might also kill Yun You when I kill Zhuri Tulan B80 tens of thousands of times in the mountains)

OK! Look, Rainbow Dash is cute. As a fanfic, there aren't any weird things that don't match the original settings. It's just that there are too few now, so it's hard to see.

Yes, it's the best one I've seen among the invasion fanfics! [Shy]

This is my first fanfic after reading Game Invasion. I hope the author will continue writing and don't stop updating, oh my god! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Very nice to look at. The post is based on the original work, because it is fan fiction, so it is normal to be a bit oo c

It's pretty cool, I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished

It's good to read, and I'm a bit old. Although I'm underage, I can't understand some of the words you say. I've read a few fanfics, but this one is the only one I've followed. Although it may have some shortcomings, it has few bugs. I've seen an S-level book with 7 skills before. No one can completely replicate a person's writing skills. I can restore it as much as possible. I love this book. I highly recommend it.

I've always been looking forward to Xunge's fanfics, please come on, author! ₍ᐢ⸝⸝› ̫‹⸝⸝ᐢ₎

Very good work. In fact, I think the author's writing style could be more coherent, and I don't mean to say anything bad about the author. There is currently no place that feels ooc, but it feels interesting. Come on, author! I will keep reading! [Shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

∠(°ゝ°)Always salute! The meaning of liking is very broad. It can be called liking for friends, family, or lovers. I like Shi Yuzai through friendship (=^▽^=) [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts] [Send Hearts]

Very good. After the game Invasion is over, I just use it to kill time. Overall, the character creation is okay. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

The invasion fanfic definitely deserves five stars.

The writing is very good, Xun Ge also has relatives (crying jpg)

Author, I actually don't have much influence on OOC. Mainly have a question to ask? 1. What do you plan to do with Yu Xunge's player relics? Following this template, I feel like I can't draw an echo of the Snow Country. Are you planning to give it another two names?

After reading it now, I feel that the writing is generally good. I hope the author can keep writing [shy]

It's okay, a very good article

666 After reading Sea Pearl for so long, I realized that I didn't give it a five-star review. I hope the author works hard for this to be a good Yandere Invasion fanfic.

It doesn't ruin the character, it feels good

A bit ooc, but this is good😊

It's basically not OOC. It would be even better if you can make it more than 10,000 per day

Why do comments need so many words?

Isn't this book going to raise some eyebrows? Stop it!

I've finished reading the updated version, and it feels pretty good, but it feels a bit confusing, but it's quite novel and interesting to divide Rainbow Dash's god-given talent into two lines: nightmares and sweet dreams.

It's okay, except that Xun Ge is a bit OOC, but it's all fan fiction, which is acceptable.