Legends of the Immortals: My Wife Is the Dragon Maiden of the East Sea

Why do I give myself a five-star rating? Because Wang Po sells melons and also sells and boasts about herself, even though I don't believe in the king. Why should I write a book review? Because Yang Persimmon said that if I publish a review of more than 100 words for my book, I will be given 551 tomato seeds. Besides, in this era where traffic is king, I also want to attract some attention. After all, the fragrance of wine is afraid of the deep alley. This book is still my favorite type. The previous history book was too painful to write and often stuck, but the general route of this book has already been formed in my mind. Furthermore, I also hope to pass on a message to some readers. If you like it, just read it. If you don't like it, there are so many good-looking books in Yang Persimmon. There is no need to be angry with the author. I can't make everyone like it. Has it reached 100 words? It should be almost done. Well, we are destined to meet each other. The mountains are high and the rivers are long. I wish you all happiness and peace in your journey of thousands of miles.

Oh, you have to win by quantity. 6 Updates a day. The novel world will definitely leave you a legend. So far, it seems that the single female protagonist, Dragon Knight, is not bad. The bad point is that Yue Yao watches the male protagonist urinate and Lei Jie is naked. You have to pay attention. The male and female protagonists are a bit bland. The female protagonist's personality is cold, but because the male protagonist calls her "Lady", it touches her heart. It is a bit fragmented and a bit industrial. There is a lack of process. It should be emphasized in the description. The two discussed how to hide themselves from the public eye, and finally decided on the identity of the wife's husband. The male protagonist called the heroine Niangzi in a slightly frivolous way, and the heroine called her husband in a shy, angry or other way. The feeling of the interaction between the two came up, right? There has to be a process, and you don't know how to write. Isn't it nice to write the emotions and reactions of Yue Yao when she sees the male protagonist carelessly peeing with a child? When it comes to the heroine, it doesn't work. The quality of the story with a single heroine all depends on the heroine. Don't be stingy with words. You have to greatly polish the characters of the two and their interaction. Come on, Lao Cai

The heroine needs to have an additional role, the hero's feelings for the heroine must be reflected, and the interaction must be sweet, otherwise it will be too weak, come on

The characters are rich and the plot is full of foreshadowing. The more you read, the more addictive it becomes. The story concept is novel, the rhythm is just right, the writing is very contagious, and the sense of substitution is strong. It is truly worthy of Amway!

Single heroine or multiple heroines?

It looks good 😢😢😢😢, the feeling is coming

It's very beautiful, please update more and don't stop 🤭

Looks good, come on, it's a high-quality product from Western Persimmon

The plot is a classic fantasy that makes people watch it. There is nothing toxic for the time being. The single female protagonist is good and it is more in line with my taste. It would be better if it could be updated twice a day stably.

It's a classic traditional fantasy, but in this era it's very good if it allows me to patiently watch it. I give it a thumbs up and hope it doesn't stop.