Chuan Xuan: My Wife Is the Dragon Girl of the East China Sea

Why do I give myself a five-star rating? Because Wang Po sells melons and also sells and boasts about herself, even though I don't believe in the king. Why should I write a book review? Because Yang Persimmon said that if I publish a review of more than 100 words for my book, I will be given 551 tomato seeds. Besides, in this era where traffic is king, I also want to attract some attention. After all, the fragrance of wine is afraid of the deep alley. This book is still my favorite type. The previous history book was too painful to write and often stuck, but the general route of this book has already been formed in my mind. Furthermore, I also hope to pass on a message to some readers. If you like it, just read it. If you don't like it, there are so many good-looking books in Yang Persimmon. There is no need to be angry with the author. I can't make everyone like it. Has it reached 100 words? It should be almost done. Well, we are destined to meet each other. The mountains are high and the rivers are long. I wish you all happiness and peace in your journey of thousands of miles.

Oh, you have to win by quantity. 6 Updates a day. The novel world will definitely leave you a legend. So far, it seems that the single female protagonist, Dragon Knight, is not bad. The bad point is that Yue Yao watches the male protagonist urinate and Lei Jie is naked. You have to pay attention. The male and female protagonists are a bit bland. The female protagonist's personality is cold, but because the male protagonist calls her "Lady", it touches her heart. It is a bit fragmented and a bit industrial. There is a lack of process. It should be emphasized in the description. The two discussed how to hide themselves from the public eye, and finally decided on the identity of the wife's husband. The male protagonist called the heroine Niangzi in a slightly frivolous way, and the heroine called her husband in a shy, angry or other way. The feeling of the interaction between the two came up, right? There has to be a process, and you don't know how to write. Isn't it nice to write the emotions and reactions of Yue Yao when she sees the male protagonist carelessly peeing with a child? When it comes to the heroine, it doesn't work. The quality of the story with a single heroine all depends on the heroine. Don't be stingy with words. You have to greatly polish the characters of the two and their interaction. Come on, Lao Cai

The heroine needs to have an additional role, the hero's feelings for the heroine must be reflected, and the interaction must be sweet, otherwise it will be too weak, come on

The characters are rich and the plot is full of foreshadowing. The more you read, the more addictive it becomes. The story concept is novel, the rhythm is just right, the writing is very contagious, and the sense of substitution is strong. It is truly worthy of Amway!

Single heroine or multiple heroines?

It looks good [crying][crying][crying][crying], the feeling is coming

Looks good, come on, it's a high-quality product from Western Persimmon

It's very beautiful, please update more and don't stop [laughing]

It's a classic traditional fantasy, but in this era it's very good if it allows me to patiently watch it. I give it a thumbs up and hope it doesn't stop.

The plot is a classic fantasy that makes people watch it. There is nothing toxic for the time being. The single female protagonist is good and it is more in line with my taste. It would be better if it could be updated twice a day stably.

Nice! Worth recommending! ! !

Not bad, just slow

Single heroine or multiple heroines?

The quality is pretty good at the moment, it would be better if it could be updated twice.

It looks good, but one update per day is too few.

It looks good, at least it looks good to me.

Generally speaking, there are some classical fairy tales, but not much, and there is nothing attractive about them, but it is much better than starting with a super boss or a dark forest now.

It is a breath of fresh air in today's tomato industry literature. It has the feel of traditional fantasy in the past. The plot advances smoothly and the characters are well created.

It's pretty, but it's too short and unconventional.

It's beautiful, the concept and ideas are good, this is what we call a classic biographical novel

It's exciting, in the style of traditional fairy tales, without so much violence.

It's very beautifully written, I love reading it.

It's okay, you can see it, although there are few people.

Don't tell me that some of the plots in this novel are a bit cliche, but it's quite addictive. I have to give you five stars for this.

Be faster and more accurate, write according to your own ideas, and don't be affected by external influences.