The Spell Returns to the War and Wants a Male Lead, Not a Female Lead! !
The spell returns to the battle, as long as the male protagonist and the female protagonist retreat! ! Whether it's two male protagonists or no CP, get them all! !
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One particularly good thing about One Piece is that the core of the protagonist group is super stable. They will not easily question themselves, will not regret the path they choose, and will not interfere too much with the path chosen by others. I feel like Zoro doesn't have many OOC points, I quite like it.
I originally planned to give it four stars, but I really ran out of books to read. I would like to encourage the author. My only fault with this book is that Zoro and Shir don't look like parents. Their personalities are a bit OOC, but I think it's very warm to treat family members like this. It's a bit OOC but I think it's okay. When I think of the green algae head and Xiao Hui's sea urchin head, I want to laugh.
There are still many audiences who enjoy fighting. Tomato readers like to give it a straight shot. A golden finger at the beginning and the protagonist can kill from beginning to end. This kind of movie usually revolves around the protagonist or the character does not have its own growth and just follows the protagonist. Sometimes it feels like you are watching a one-man show. This article by the author is the most detailed description of Sauron's time travel that I have seen so far. That's why I like it. I probably clicked on it from Chapter 100. I thought this book was almost finished. Most of the other articles talked about how they met and got along in the early stage, and then got into the plot. I always felt that there was a little lack of foreshadowing in the middle. I didn't expect that this article was written from when Sauron was a child, and a lot of words were spent describing the love between Shier and Qianai as well as their love for Sauron. I think these are quite important. After all, even if they are related by blood, there is no guarantee that some parents will love their children. Under the foreshadowing of these emotions, after Shi'er left, Zoro's reason for dragging him back made me feel both shocked and reasonable. (I originally thought that the author would let Shir follow the original line, and then 5t5 would adopt Zoro, Megumi and Tsumiki.) After I met 5t5 and joined the high school, I thought the plot would start to fast-paced. After a transition of one or two chapters, the astral slurry incident and Jie's encounter with Nanako Mimiko would take place. But the author chose to take the long road and wrote some interesting daily life in a high school - teacher Shi'er and his unlucky student, a six-year-old child and a high school student fighting each other. It feels like Zoro has really traveled through time to live in this world, rather than coming to break through a barrier. Other characters also have their own thinking and growth. I just don't know how the author arranged the subsequent plot, and now Su Nuo's finger has appeared. At that time, should I skip a few years and go directly to Hui to attend a high school or what to say, I look forward to the author's next story. (I hope there will be major changes in the future. The original 5t5 is really unlucky. Hui's character was also shattered into pieces, but the uncle is still quite handsome as a villain) I didn't want to write a review at first, but I was inspired by what the author said. Sometimes this kind of relaxed and leisurely style may not be popular, but it can warm your heart. I hope I can witness the scenery of your trip.
I just finished it in one go. Personally, I don't think there is any OOC, and the characters' emotions are very delicately written. In short, it doesn't seem to have any bad points. But will you consider writing about watching movies later? I really look forward to everyone in the High School watching Zoro's glorious deeds. It's very fun to think about that scene [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
First review: Very nice Currently we see Zoro recovering there Summary: Although a few sentences may seem a bit strange, he is indeed a rare protagonist who "doesn't know the main plot, has no system, and is Shir's child" (Zoro was reincarnated in the timeline after the finale of One Piece). The family ties of Shir's family, Zoro's words and deeds, and the bond with his companion (One Piece) are also very well written. It is a rare good work by a cursed fan in Tomato. (●^O^●)
Nice! It makes me want to join One Piece, hahaha! ! (Serious into the pit. Jpg)
It's very interesting. The author's writing is very good. I hope it's finished. I'll keep updating because it's really interesting. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง The interaction between Shi'er and Zoro is very heartwarming. Although Shi'er is ooc, I think this adaptation will be better. The author perfected Shi'er's ideas and described his struggle when he changed. To be honest, with Shi'er's change, Megumi has become happier (jjxx4️⃣). All in all, I think the change is very good. It adds a bit of positive energy to Shi'er without causing drama. Although it is difficult to reconcile the reincarnation of Zoro, it can also be understood this way: Shi'er sees that Zoro does not want to talk about it. So respect his choice and privacy. And I think the following plot will solve this topic. All in all, this book is still very good to read. Although it has shortcomings, the characters are well portrayed. OOC is not very serious. I recommend it.
It's super beautiful, the kind that I'm waiting for updates every day [love] [love] The OOC of the characters is not obvious, and there are a few weird points, but I think this is normal, and it does not affect my perception. The emotional expression is super delicate, and I am very much looking forward to the follow-up. Waiting for cinema
I like it very much. This time, Megumi will not just open up Moxura. I am looking forward to whether it will be in the inter-school battle. I said: Don't get hurt, otherwise you may be killed or hacked to death [laughs]
What a novel development, very beautiful! I'm looking forward to Suo Hehui growing up, and I'm also looking forward to the astral body plot🥰🥰
It's really sweet. Having feelings and passion is not just a matter of cursing the whole life, but has its own understanding. I also have a unique interpretation of Shi'er, although it may be different from my understanding. Sauron's character has emotions and meanings. Moreover, the beginning of the story about Shen'er's family is really touching. In just a few chapters, Qian Ai is created as a beautiful character. All I can say is that I'm full.
There are so few people. The descriptions are very detailed and I think they are very beautiful😋. It's a pity that there are so few people.
Overall, it's pretty good. But the name of the book doesn't work. You can also look for a picture of this cover. The AI looks too much like the kind of assembly line writing.
Come on, the author ٩( 'ω' )و
If you eat too much stone, your resistance will be high. This does not feel poisonous.
It's so good-looking, it's just a hair away from top-notch conjuring fan fiction. The inner activities, descriptions, and plot are all spot on.
Super beautiful, good quality! It's not easy to find this book
It's pretty good-looking, although sometimes it feels a bit ooc, but overall it's okay. The emotions and bonds are well written.
How should I put it? One of the few people looked at him and said, "Ah, it's Zoro." A book of this level.
So pretty! ! ! Beautiful, highly recommended!
Looks good, come on, writer
Very well written. Come on!
High-end, super good-looking
Very nice. Will update soon.
Wow wow wow, it's really beautiful, but it's a pity it's discontinued.
Good book, some people pursue perfection too much, but lose the greatest fun
Top-notch fanfic, whether you like pirates more or spell battles more, you can read it, five-star praise
Shi'er didn't give up on himself, but even awakened his domineering energy.
So delicious! [Understood] It's different.
It's okay. I feel like I should read this book as quickly as possible because I like it very much and there has been a book shortage recently. During my book drought, this book gave me a lot of fun.