Jiang Fan traveled to the world of Zhu Xian.
When others entered the game, he had already arrived a year in advance.
This year, Zhang Xiaofan has not yet gone up the mountain, many stories have not yet begun, and many opportunities are still buried in the dust. After worshiping Qingyun and establishing a foothold on Tongtian Peak, Jiang Fan practiced Tai Chi Xuanqing Dao step by step, practiced swordsmanship, and embarked on his own path before everyone was aware of it.
How much can you change if you come a year early?
Reader comments
Du Bishu is the sixth disciple of Dazhu, not a senior disciple. I suggest the author read the original text first.
Based on the original work, some settings have been added and modified, and many details have been refined in different aspects, but many descriptions are too deliberate.
Emmm, the author most likely wrote it in AI
The beginning does not have the feeling of the golden three chapters. It has always been steady and makes people lose interest in reading. However, the middle and later stages are very exciting, the writing is very delicate, and the subject matter is very novel. It combines the protagonist's way with the Zhuxian Sword Formation. The Zhuxian Formation is my way. I did not deviate from the original work, but I wrote my own thing. After getting through the beginning of the book, the following content made me, a 15-year-old bookworm, stay up all night to read it.
After I wrote the review, I realized that many comments said it was written by AI, and I couldn't tell the truth from the false. However, what I read in fan fiction is that the framework of the original work remains unchanged, and I write my own things on other characters, which is very satisfying. I read Zhu Xian in high school, and I can't remember many details. There may be minor flaws in this book, but it does not affect my reading.
Come on, author, I rarely see fanfics about Zhu Xian [like], but I didn't find anything very poisonous. Even if the protagonist is in a peaceful state of mind, it's not good. I personally hope that the heroine Lu Xueqi
This book is written very slowly, very carefully, but very steadily. I am used to reading cool articles, but suddenly I feel very uncomfortable reading this kind of book. But if you have patience, read more carefully, and read a few more chapters, you will feel that this book is very interesting.
Whether it is for feelings or for reading, this book is very good.
I don't know how many female leads there are in the back, but I'm used to seeing many women.
I never take the initiative to post book reviews, but I couldn't help myself this time. Great book!
Come on, author!
The writing is so stable, just like the protagonist
Not bad, gray is very good-looking [laughs evilly]
Single heroine or multiple heroines?
The writing is very good, especially the writing of Qi, which is smooth and smooth, with the leaves moving and the roots still not moving!
A rare novel that is not impetuous,
It's not even like reading a novel,
It's about following the characters in their practice and enlightenment.
It also brought me some insights into my financial investment~
Very delicate and stable writing, worth reading
It's very delicate, the writing is very good, and the principles and principles are very clear. I won't read it. It feels like the style is very extreme, like some people think it's good, and some people think it's shabby.
I think it's very good. Although it's a derivative book, the characters in the book are very close to me. I am a Taoist in my heart.
I actually saw the philosophy of life, it was well written, and the mechanism of the exercises was explained very well.
Yes, the writing is very detailed. Although it is a bit lengthy, the writing is good.
Du Bishu is the sixth disciple of Dazhu, not a senior disciple. I suggest the author read the original text first.
Based on the original work, some settings have been added and modified, and many details have been refined in different aspects, but many descriptions are too deliberate. Emmm, the author most likely wrote it in AI
The beginning does not have the feeling of the golden three chapters. It has always been steady and makes people lose interest in reading. However, the middle and later stages are very exciting, the writing is very delicate, and the subject matter is very novel. It combines the protagonist's way with the Zhuxian Sword Formation. The Zhuxian Formation is my way. I did not deviate from the original work, but I wrote my own thing. After getting through the beginning of the book, the following content made me, a 15-year-old bookworm, stay up all night to read it. After I wrote the review, I realized that many comments said it was written by AI, and I couldn't tell the truth from the false. However, what I read in fan fiction is that the framework of the original work remains unchanged, and I write my own things on other characters, which is very satisfying. I read Zhu Xian in high school, and I can't remember many details. There may be minor flaws in this book, but it does not affect my reading.
Come on, author, I rarely see fanfics about Zhu Xian [like], but I didn't find anything very poisonous. Even if the protagonist is in a peaceful state of mind, it's not good. I personally hope that the heroine Lu Xueqi
This book is written very slowly, very carefully, but very steadily. I am used to reading cool articles, but suddenly I feel very uncomfortable reading this kind of book. But if you have patience, read more carefully, and read a few more chapters, you will feel that this book is very interesting. Whether it is for feelings or for reading, this book is very good. I don't know how many female leads there are in the back, but I'm used to seeing many women. I never take the initiative to post book reviews, but I couldn't help myself this time. Great book! Come on, author!
The writing is so stable, just like the protagonist
Not bad, gray is very good-looking [laughs evilly]
Single heroine or multiple heroines?
The writing is very good, especially the writing of Qi, which is smooth and smooth, with the leaves moving and the roots still not moving!
A rare novel that is not impetuous, It's not even like reading a novel, It's about following the characters in their practice and enlightenment. It also brought me some insights into my financial investment~
Very delicate and stable writing, worth reading
It's very delicate, the writing is very good, and the principles and principles are very clear. I won't read it. It feels like the style is very extreme, like some people think it's good, and some people think it's shabby.
I think it's very good. Although it's a derivative book, the characters in the book are very close to me. I am a Taoist in my heart.
I actually saw the philosophy of life, it was well written, and the mechanism of the exercises was explained very well.
Yes, the writing is very detailed. Although it is a bit lengthy, the writing is good.