Are All Immortal Cultivators Time-Travelers? I'm Still an NPC

All I can say is awesome. This is an ambitious piece of work. The settings are innovative, the twists are powerful, and the characters are growing. After reading the four chapters, my biggest feeling is: the foundation of this story is better than most time travel and immortality novels on the market. The overall level is above "good online writing". It has a sense of picture and rhythm. The theme of this book is not "shuangwen" but "anti-shuangwen". It is not about "how the protagonist becomes stronger", but about "how an ordinary person survives in a world where gods fight and then takes revenge." There are already seeds for a masterpiece. Whether it can be poured out or not depends on the follow-up. Is it true that no one is watching? I lost it, no way [what]

On the sixth day of the new book, 10,000 words will be updated every day. I am anti-Shuang writing and do not follow the trend. This is my novel. I am asking for criticism and advice but I am not a glass-hearted person. This is who I am. It doesn't matter, even if no one reads it, even if there are only one person reading it, I will stick to what I love. My only dream since I was a child is to become a novelist. It's not for the sake of strangers or getting rich, but I just want to express what I think and see in the form of art. But your book reviews and paragraph reviews are the motivation for me to persist.