Moon Plan: I Will Reincarnate in the Cage and Open up the Way to Be a Monarch

Hello, master, your writing is sometimes good or bad, but Mysterious Red Persimmon is considered a good work. However, some of the plot developments are a bit inexplicable, and the rhythm is not very good. Summary: A-

The idea is very good, very perfect, but there is a problem. The writing style feels too sparse, the narrative rhythm is not very good, and the character description is quite abrupt. But your perfect and very creative creativity makes up for this. 4 Stars for encouragement. I hope that the writing will be smoother and clearer in the future.

I unexpectedly found a treasure. The characters written by the author are rare in Tomato. The plot rhythm is very good so far. Please support me.

Conclusion: A There are slight problems with the writing, and the turning point of the plot is very abrupt, but the plot itself is very well written and deserves to be called a masterpiece.

The plot is very good, and some parts are a bit like the original plot of the game.

Your work... A+! ! ! Like a bright star in the city, this dark world needs works like yours to shine! ! ! ! ! (If you dare to stop updating, you will be gone!!!)

Alas, now that things have come to this, let's rate ourselves [shy]

The plot seems good, but do you write a fanfic without considering readers who don't know the world view?

Very good plot, it was the umbrella in my hand that started Hagga! ! !

Come on, it's beautifully written.

It's really, really good-looking and highly recommended [Chigua]

The characterization is very good. It can be seen that the author wrote it carefully and is not a traditional systematic text.

I felt so bad when I saw it later

The order told me to come and see it, so I came.

I really like group portraits, come on

Hagga hagga hagga! 😡

Why is no one watching?

Come on! Very well written

I don't know, the instructions asked me to rate it, A+!

Looks good, looks good, looks good! Love these so much! Quick update It was well written and allowed me to see the sinners gradually gathering in another world. I ran out of books to read, the author begged me to update soon @Yuyun doesn't want to give it away in vain

Haha, Yili wow!

This is not an ordinary cool article. People like me who have just started playing Prison Bus can understand it.